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PERSONAL ESSAY - STUDENT EXCHANGE PROGRAM (Chemistry Department & Internship Opportunity)

2 - Your background is quite strong in terms of academics. I would like to see the same strengths or, even...

Undergraduaterelovikyl - Sep 9, 2025Holt - Sep 13, 2025
Community-Based Research on Early Childhood Policy - Questbridge Supplemental + Why Duke

2 - I would reverse the presentation a bit. I would start with the fact that your brother is autistic and...

Scholarshiplolgiancarlo - Sep 9, 2025Holt - Sep 11, 2025
Creative Director / Graphic Design - Leadership - Chevening Essay

2 - Kindly provide a single paragraph introduction to Studio MU. You immediately dove into your participation and leadership roles in...

Scholarshipu_utmaut - Sep 9, 2025Holt - Sep 11, 2025
More abroad travellers- Opinion Essay - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - You have done a very good job writing this opinion essay. You were on point in terms of scoring...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Sep 7, 2025Holt - Sep 9, 2025
Brain and cognitive science graduate school

2 - Further expand on this area. What did your advanced research reveal? How was it received by the funding...

Graduatenaminaaa - Sep 7, 2025Holt - Sep 9, 2025
Student Decline in the Classroom

3 - I really like how much research you included into this. it makes the essay feel well-supported. Also spotted a...

Research Paperstimi_akin11 - Sep 7, 2025Iykeibe - Sep 10, 2025
acrid smell of burnt rubber and gasoline - questbridge bio

2 - I believe that you should clarify your status as a sibling in this instance. Are they your biological or...

Scholarshiplolgiancarlo - Sep 5, 2025Holt - Sep 6, 2025
some people think children should follow their parent's advice, other believe that they should think

2 - The problem with the essay is that it did not follow the single opinion presentation. The first opinion immediately...

Writing Feedbacknguyen duc huy - Sep 3, 2025Holt - Sep 6, 2025
University courses- Line graph - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - The summary overview is missing a proper presentation of the 4 courses and the type of measurement used to...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Sep 3, 2025Holt - Sep 6, 2025
Learning history or practical subjects? - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - The way that you have your reasoning presentation structured in the restatement and writer's opinion section indicates that you...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Sep 3, 2025Holt - Sep 6, 2025
Biotechnology Neurasmus -Motivation Letter

2 - You should build on your research skills and published work. Expanding on the information behind these, your skills development...

Lettersannasmith - Sep 3, 2025Holt - Sep 6, 2025
Living away from family home while attending university - Advantages and Disadvantages - Task 2

2 - This should have been followed up with the 2 short reasoning presentation. It could have read; "... In...

Writing Feedbackbongmibo - Sep 3, 2025Holt - Sep 6, 2025
Level of satisfaction - Line graph - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - There are several types of graphs. The line graph, the bar graph, the columnar graph, to name but...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Sep 1, 2025Holt - Sep 2, 2025
Village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024 - Map - Task 1

2 - This is an automatic failing TA score. Why? You totally misrepresented the given image. Yes, there were 2...

Writing Feedbackbongmibo - Sep 1, 2025Holt - Sep 2, 2025
Total world energy consumption and electricity generation - Task 1 - Pie chart

2 - To meet the TA requirements, you need to indicate the number of pie charts. You should also enumerate...

Writing Feedbackbongmibo - Aug 31, 2025Holt - Aug 31, 2025
Can mental strength outweight physical strength? - IELTS WARRIOR

4 - thank you...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Aug 31, 2025Mr Calma - Sep 10, 2025
How to make a sponge cake - Process - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - There are several types of diagrams that are used for this test. You should familiarize yourself with those...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Aug 30, 2025Holt - Aug 31, 2025
The diagram show how use glass bottles are recycled.

2 - A diagram is a general term for an instructional drawing. Try to be more specific when it comes...

Writing Feedbacknhinhinhi999 - Aug 30, 2025Holt - Aug 31, 2025
Working from Home: A Beneficial Trend in the Modern World - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - There are several prompts that use this topic as a part of the discussion point. That makes it difficult...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Aug 30, 2025Holt - Aug 30, 2025
International travelers landing in the UK - Ielts Writing Task 1: Line graph

2 - The summary overview should have at least 3 sentences in it. It should restate the type of image, measurement...

Writing Feedbackgingerbelle - Aug 29, 2025Holt - Aug 30, 2025
COMMON APP Personal Statement - Teachings From My Sister

2 - This is a very interesting and personal background story. However, The reviewer could believe that the essay is more...

UndergraduateScormbl - Aug 29, 2025Holt - Aug 30, 2025
Beechwood Farm - Map - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - When writing the report, you must always assume that the reader does not have a copy of the...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Aug 28, 2025Holt - Aug 29, 2025
MOTIVATION LETTER FOR BSC IN ELECTROMECHANICAL ENGINEERING

2 - When you reference academic achievements, you should be referencing awards and accolades that you received in relation to...

Lettersgaetano1991 - Aug 27, 2025Holt - Aug 27, 2025
No need to go to watch live performances? - Opinion Essay - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - Incorrect time line reference. The original reference used was "These days" so the alternative reference would be "Recently"...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Aug 27, 2025Holt - Aug 27, 2025
PERSONAL STATEMENT GKS-U University Track Mechanical Engineering

2 - Kindly remove the Hangul characters for Phineas and Pherb. The essay must be written in either pure English or...

Undergraduateadel5067 - Aug 26, 2025Holt - Aug 27, 2025
Beyond Physics - recommendation letter to get gks scholarship

2 - Okay, the way that this essay was written shows the trained reviewer that the essay was not written by...

Lettersnusratsuchi7 - Aug 25, 2025Holt - Aug 26, 2025
Various household goods between 2001 and 2008 - Dynamic bar chart - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - The summary overview is supposed to comprise at least a 3 sentence paragraph. The contents of that paragraph should...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Aug 25, 2025Holt - Aug 26, 2025
News media have become more influential in people's lives.

2 - The essay asks you for the extent of your support for one of the 2 given public opinions in...

Writing Feedbackbtra - Aug 25, 2025Holt - Aug 26, 2025
What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility? - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - There is an LR problem in the first paragraph. There is a big difference between damage and desctruction. Damage...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Aug 25, 2025Holt - Aug 25, 2025
Obese people overwhelm the healthcare system? - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - The reference in the sentence is incomplete. Where are the sessions to be added? It is stated in...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Aug 24, 2025Holt - Aug 25, 2025
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