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Copenhagen Business School MSC Digital Business / Business Administration Motivational Essay

2 - Hi, the focus of each essay is different so you cannot combine the information for each essay into 1....

Graduatejebb1e - Dec 23, 2024Holt - Dec 24, 2024
The role of househusbands in the modern world - IELTS 2

2 - This is an incorrect statement that has no basis in the original topic presentation. This created a prompt...

Writing Feedbackemmaswann - Dec 22, 2024Holt - Dec 24, 2024
My Karate dojo - my response to a problem and/or an unfamiliar situation (UBC)

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the response. I forgot to remove the parenthesis. Im sorry for the confusion....

UndergraduateLUX0930 - Dec 22, 2024LUX0930 - Dec 22, 2024
Volunteer experience in the highlands - PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR COLLEGE

2 - I am not sure which of the common app topics you are writing this essay for so I cannot...

Undergraduatechauchau1901 - Dec 21, 2024Holt - Dec 22, 2024
Green finance and economy - ERASMUS PERSONAL STATEMENT

2 - It appears that you have written a second version of the same essay topic. This one is supposed to...

Graduatehabibraza22 - Dec 21, 2024Holt - Dec 22, 2024
Final Essay: Anti-LGBTQ Laws being instated (Research paper)

2 - I feel like the essay is too broad in terms of field of discussion. It has to be narrowed...

Research PapersJadynAkerRio - Dec 21, 2024Holt - Dec 21, 2024
Motivation Letter - MSc In Quantitive Finance ETH UZH

2 - The rest of this paragraph is too vague to gain the interest of the reviewers. You are not...

Lettersscottsimpson29 - Dec 20, 2024Holt - Dec 21, 2024
Bachelor of Science in Nursing - Scholarship: educational and career goals/objective

2 - Scholarship organizations tend to prefer high achieving students for their scholar programs. At this point in your essay,...

Scholarshipambr05ia - Dec 19, 2024Holt - Dec 21, 2024
NUS - MEDICINE UNDERGRADUATE APPLICATION

2 - ONE QUESTION PER THREAD Your response to the first question is not convincing. Perhaps it is because of...

Undergraduatebminh - Dec 19, 2024Holt - Dec 21, 2024
Techwomen - how you have demonstrated leadership, specifically in your chosen track.

3 - I was wrong, it is not about leadership . this is correct one : Reflect on the long-term objectives...

ScholarshipChaymakh - Dec 19, 2024Chaymakh - Dec 21, 2024
A Story of Rebellious Child - GLOCAL Erasmus Mundus Personal Statement

2 - Rather than telling this one dimensional story that does not really help to inform the reviewer regarding the...

Graduatejakartainrain - Dec 18, 2024Holt - Dec 21, 2024
rural people are moving to cities,positive or negative development-WRITING TASK 2

2 - Kindly remember that you have a total of 1 hour to write both the task 1 and task 2...

Writing Feedbackhelen2415 - Dec 18, 2024Holt - Dec 21, 2024
Physics and Basketball -KAIST entrance - what you learned from extracurricular/curricular activities

2 - You have to edit this essay in relation to the 200 maximum word count. Unfortunately, I cannot edit the...

Undergraduatehunggamo - Dec 17, 2024Holt - Dec 18, 2024
stipendium hungaricum undergraduate essay for applying to BsC in biology

3 - I would recommend to specifically mention why you want to study biology in hungary. Rsearch about the market trends...

Undergraduateunitzetazeta - Dec 17, 2024habibraza22 - Dec 20, 2024
Money was allocated to cell phones - writing task 1 (line chart)

2 - The report is over written at over 200 words. Bear in mind that you are going to be sharing...

Writing Feedbackmon1805 - Dec 17, 2024Holt - Dec 18, 2024
Psychology Motivation Letter for Behavior Change Master Program

2 - Since you already know that sustainability is not the main focus of the program, it stands to reason...

Lettersfemelements - Dec 16, 2024Holt - Dec 18, 2024
Traditions of their society - WRITING IELTS TASK 2

4 - @habibraza22 thanks for your comment....

Writing Feedbacknguyentst080190 - Dec 16, 2024nguyentst080190 - Dec 23, 2024
any criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. cause and solutions

2 - I am afraid that the vocabulary usage in this essay is quite problematic. The essay does not require the...

Writing FeedbackNguyen Hoai Ngoc - Dec 15, 2024Holt - Dec 16, 2024
Dream and efforts you have made to achieve it and your future plan / KAIST

2 - You can delete the introductory paragraph and revise the 2nd paragraph to serve that purpose instead. The 2nd paragraph...

Undergraduateuser23440778 - Dec 14, 2024Holt - Dec 16, 2024
Fostering Connections Through Communication and Leadership (GLOBAL UGRAD program)

2 - The focus of this essay is more team building related than community building. The reviewers are looking for active...

Undergraduatelimpio - Dec 14, 2024Holt - Dec 16, 2024
Common App personal statement about getting over uncertainty

2 - Well, this is certainly a very personal essay. You have shown not only the development of your interest in...

Undergraduatetltle - Dec 14, 2024Holt - Dec 14, 2024
Language Study Plan (Study plans to improve Korean/English language ability for gks)

3 - I feel that this essay can be improved in terms of coherence and clarity. Also, I would recommend to...

Scholarshipziza - Dec 13, 2024habibraza22 - Dec 20, 2024
Empowering others and helping - UGRAD sop

3 - I like the way you have written your essay. Bear in mind, I am not an expert. What I...

Undergraduateferfl - Dec 12, 2024habibraza22 - Dec 22, 2024
Outstanding academic performance - LETTER OF REFERENCE FOR UNIVERSITY ADMISSION

2 - Somehow, the letter reads like a longer version of your personal statement. That will give away the fact that...

Lettersnganlyn5520 - Dec 12, 2024Holt - Dec 13, 2024
PhD Program in Computer Science at George Mason University - SOP

3 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback. I will update. Can you point out if there are "strength" issues or...

Graduateffisty_98 - Dec 11, 2024ffisty_98 - Dec 12, 2024
Applying for Computer Science PhD, Statement of Purpose

3 - @Holt This is for a US university. And most of their universities take Undergrad students in their PhD program....

Graduatemrr007 - Dec 10, 2024mrr007 - Dec 11, 2024
Global UGRAD - Eternally Loving Hearts - Young leaders committed to serving home communities

2 - This reference is good in terms of experience, but limited in exposure. Since you are being considered a leader...

Undergraduatettquyen301 - Dec 10, 2024Holt - Dec 11, 2024
Adele - about a famous person you like. Who is this person? What is this person's job?

3 - @irrverst this sentence is a bit messy: "I admire her not only because she composed my favorite song, but...

Writing Feedbackirrverst - Dec 10, 2024nguyentst080190 - Dec 23, 2024
An efficient Data Analyst - UF Statement Intent

3 - @Holt Thank you for the advice, I'll rewrite my answer to emphasize the specific skills I would like...

Undergraduatejoaquint561 - Dec 9, 2024joaquint561 - Dec 11, 2024
UBC Activity Essay - Debate

2 - Do your best to discuss 2 activities in this essay because the reviewer is looking for the ways by...

Undergraduatepystudent - Dec 9, 2024Holt - Dec 11, 2024
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