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Is History repeating itself - treatment of immigrants

2 - Please provide examples of the previous treatment that has carried on to modern times or has been updated...

Research PapersDanielmgue - Aug 9, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Essay on time travelling to work or school

2 - While this essay is composed of 280 words, it does not follow the proper compare and contrast discussion for...

Writing FeedbackDUC TRAN - Aug 9, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Equality in governments and politics (IELTS WRITING TASK 2)

2 - There are only 2 reasons that you will be discussing, you m ust indicate these as a solid...

Writing FeedbackBrian Nguyen - Aug 9, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Climate Change's Role in Undermining Global Food Security

2 - The main problem with this essay is the lack of insight from the writer. All of the major paragraphs...

Writing FeedbackStrayKids07 - Aug 9, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Finding Purpose - personal statement

2 - Unfortunately, your deeply personal essay does not follow the actual writing prompts for the GKS scholarship. You need to...

Scholarshiptoquillax - Aug 8, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Changing rates of three different areas of crime in Newport city

2 - The presentation is well within the word count consideration for high scores in all categories. However, the lack of...

Writing Feedbacklinhchi0330 - Aug 8, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Activities - film club, martial arts, amateur dramatics, table tennis and musical performances

2 - Kindly remember to use a minimum of 2 sentences in the summary overview. You must summarize the information in...

Writing Feedbackdreamfulcherry - Aug 7, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
IELTS task 2 - problems-solutions about ecotourism's effects on local cultures, people, environment.

2 - You have over written this essay. You cannot write more than 300 words for the presentation because you are...

Writing FeedbackBeamlee123 - Aug 6, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
IELTS writing task 2- opinion essay on physical and mental strength

2 - The prompt restatement is missing in this presentation. The first paragraph is expected to represent your understanding of the...

Writing FeedbackfaiqaFARHEEN - Aug 5, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Research Essay - Why Toys R Us Failed.

2 - Who is this person and why should I believe her information? Remember to properly cite the source. Include...

Research Papersangx6758 - Aug 5, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
interspecies - university of chicago extended essay

2 - The first part relating to your grandfather and how he influenced your love of history is irrelevant to the...

Undergraduatearrralle - Aug 4, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Out-of-the-red - University of Chicago extended essay

2 - The essay seems to be taking several directions and focusing on the wrong person and events. If you want...

Undergraduatearrralle - Aug 4, 2025Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Undocumented, Unprotected, Unjust: Destroying the American Dream

2 - The focus of this paper is all over the place. The actual topics for discussion do not come from...

Writing Feedbackvickilugo2025 - Aug 3, 2025Holt - Aug 8, 2025
Owing a home rather than renting one ,why might this be the case?Is this a positive or negative case

2 - You cannot refer to a particular opinion as being true in this essay. You end up misrepresenting the...

Writing Feedbacknollen - Aug 2, 2025Holt - Aug 3, 2025
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - views on school and parents about teaching children to become a good citizen

2 - The introduction / prompt restatement is missing one sentence. While you accurately restated the topic, and you gave your...

Writing Feedbackdivine_9 - Aug 1, 2025Holt - Aug 1, 2025
Advantages versus disadvantages of choosing to build their own houses with their own styles.

2 - Your topic restatement is difficult to understand. You are trying to sound like a native English speaker, but, due...

Writing FeedbackZenith Peregrine - Aug 1, 2025Holt - Aug 1, 2025
Some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences

2 - The paper is overwritten at 338 words. It will be impossible for you to write the same number of...

Writing Feedbackcuniuu - Jul 31, 2025Holt - Aug 1, 2025
Combating Human Trafficking - English Final Paper

2 - I can sense your familiarity with the topic. It is well researched and you portray an understanding of human...

Writing FeedbackBShaw99 - Jul 31, 2025Holt - Aug 1, 2025
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Effect of sleeping less

2 - You have not written enough words to aim for a band 8 score. You should write closer to 300...

Writing Feedbackdivine_9 - Jul 30, 2025Holt - Jul 31, 2025
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - MUSEUM AND ART

2 - It is nice to know that you side with them. However, you did not properly answer the question....

Writing Feedbackcamhoanieltswri - Jul 30, 2025Holt - Jul 31, 2025
The table below shows the television viewing figures for sports by country, in millions.

2 - This reporting essay will not get a passing score. In fact, it will gain an automatic failing score because...

Grammar, UsageSonCaNguyen1995 - Jul 30, 2025Holt - Jul 31, 2025
Financial specialization -Motivation letter for Stipendium Hungaricum about trying to achieve a goal

3 - Thank you for the feedback!...

LettersThe Paragon - Jul 28, 2025The Paragon - Jul 31, 2025
Advice on Recommendation Letter for Fast Retailing Undergraduate Scholarship Program for Indonesian

3 - The letter of recommendation have a limit of around 200 words, so I'm really confused on what I should...

LettersSouzan - Jul 28, 2025Souzan - Jul 29, 2025
Some people believe that if police force carries guns, this encourages higher level of violence

2 - Even though you wrote 283 words for this essay, it is not going to receive a passing score in...

Writing Feedbackannghin - Jul 27, 2025Holt - Jul 29, 2025
IELST writing task 2 - Essay about the importance of art classes

2 - While you write a clear compare and contrast essay for the given topic, there are problems with your presentation...

Writing Feedbackalazystudent - Jul 25, 2025Holt - Jul 26, 2025
Research paper on major depressive disorder needing review

2 - When writing an academic paper, the writer is not allowed to cite a source in the opening statement....

Research PapersMarie703 - Jul 20, 2025Holt - Jul 20, 2025
GKS-U Personal Statement for AI Major

2 - Develop this statement further. Include some of the activities that you led and participated in. What was that...

Undergraduatedivine_9 - Jul 19, 2025Holt - Jul 20, 2025
The Impact of Technology on Characters on the Digital Era

2 - The backfire aspect of the discussion is not as well developed as the helpful aspect of the presentation. That...

Writing FeedbackYooStillLearning - Jul 19, 2025Holt - Jul 20, 2025
Chevening - Engineer, a draft about Leadership and Influence Essay

3 - Thank you for your feedback. So, a couple of follow-up questions: 1. You mentioned to omit the...

ScholarshipAlphaA101 - Jul 19, 2025AlphaA101 - Jul 20, 2025
Divorced parents - Statement of Financial Need - Monash University

3 - @Holt Thanks! I'll look into it...

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