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[IELTS] Drawbacks of lacking reading and writing skill and how government deal with the problem

2 - This is not an acceptable answer. You were asked what the government can do to help the people...

Writing Feedbackphucan9906 - Aug 19, 2024Holt - Aug 22, 2024
Living in big city is bad for health

2 - You have written less than the required minimum of 250 words. 248 written words mean you will have some...

Writing FeedbackNhung bui - Aug 19, 2024Holt - Aug 22, 2024
Application Fee Waiver (cold email)

2 - The application letter does not show that you are in dire circumstances so that you cannot afford the application...

Writing Feedbackdscaisy - Aug 19, 2024Holt - Aug 22, 2024
Dentistry - personal statement for GKS-U Program

2 - Delete this. You have been instructed to write the essay either in full Hangul or full English. You...

UndergraduateZlppleh - Aug 18, 2024Holt - Aug 22, 2024
The Evolution of Rock Music: From Classic Rock to Modern Influences

2 - You are missing a discussion in relation to the pioneering foundation of rock which is rock and roll. While...

Writing Feedbackshauryarug - Aug 17, 2024Holt - Aug 22, 2024
Should the goverment support artists such as painters or musicians?

2 - What opinions are these? There is no such reference in the original statement. You should only be providing...

Writing Feedbackrumia rumi - Aug 16, 2024Holt - Aug 22, 2024
Free Take Home Naloxone is not a moral dilemma, but an evidenced based life saving measure.

2 - It is best to avoid rhetorical questions when writing your introduction. Keep the focus on the information you are...

Research Papersgen2143524 - Aug 19, 2024Holt - Aug 20, 2024
[IELTS WRITING] OBJECTIVITY IN NEWS

2 - You should avoid using direct quotes from the original prompt. This affects your LR and TA score. The...

Writing FeedbackQuynhdo - Aug 16, 2024Holt - Aug 16, 2024
The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity

2 - Which countries? This statement is not informative and will confuse the reader. It is best to write a...

Writing Feedbacknghbl - Aug 16, 2024Holt - Aug 16, 2024
The life expectancy and GDP of certain countries

2 - There is an advised maximum word count of 200 words for the task 1 essay. That is to help...

Writing Feedbackbichnhi - Aug 15, 2024Holt - Aug 16, 2024
Enrolling in UEL university with IELTS certificates

3 - @Holt Sorry for that as I uploaded a seemingly unsafe link here! Sorry for that carelessness!...

Writing Feedbackhuyendiusw - Aug 14, 2024huyendiusw - Aug 15, 2024
GKS-U personal statement ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the review I'll be sure to send an updated version soon ☺️...

UndergraduateOjezeemi - Aug 12, 2024Ojezeemi - Aug 14, 2024
Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations?

3 - @Holt the word "governmet" in this essay means the govermernt of poor nations....

Writing FeedbackLoganLe - Aug 13, 2024LoganLe - Aug 14, 2024
The graph below gives information about U.S. government spending on research between 1980 and 2008.

2 - This is too wordy for a Task 1 essay. It contains 231 words, which indicates that you took at...

Writing Feedbackthu153 - Aug 14, 2024Holt - Aug 14, 2024
How does the United States political climate impact the stock market?

2 - The first 2 paragraphs are very strong in terms of explanation. You are obviously familiar with the political climate...

Research Papersanibabic - Aug 13, 2024Holt - Aug 14, 2024
SoP for Masters in Finance / Banking

2 - Try to develop a more in-depth discussion of your background and experiences that help you believe that the...

Graduatethefrog - Aug 12, 2024Holt - Aug 14, 2024
Finance background and logistic transit - CHEVENING ESSAY ABOUT CARRER GOAL

2 - This is good. Where specifically do you plan to get a job? Why there? How would your training...

ScholarshipMyma - Aug 12, 2024Holt - Aug 14, 2024
SOP for scholarship application in plant health in sustainable cropping systems

2 - Your story shared at the beginning of this essay is way too simplistic in approach. It does not even...

ScholarshipNazysazy - Aug 12, 2024Holt - Aug 14, 2024
Impossible to make a significant contribution without strongly influenced by past achievements

3 - @dixitswarnika Your essay makes a strong argument for the importance of learning from past advancements while encouraging innovation. With...

Writing Feedbackdixitswarnika - Aug 8, 2024Vera24 - Aug 13, 2024
Improving my language skills and culture - language study plan

3 - @omoju precious Your narrative effectively showcases your deep passion for Korean culture and language. To enhance it, consider emphasizing...

Scholarshipomoju precious - Aug 8, 2024Vera24 - Aug 13, 2024
To become a good student, what qualities are needed? Propose a specific plan for university

2 - A screenwriter writes for films. A copywriter does scripts for advertising. You might want to change the title...

Scholarshipuyenmynguyenle06 - Aug 12, 2024Holt - Aug 12, 2024
"Social Media's Dangerous Link to Disordered Eating"

3 - One thing that's obvious is offering possible solutions as stated by Holt. A nother thing is. instead of outrightly...

Research Paperssamavis - Aug 9, 2024Uzor - Aug 12, 2024
Consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world

3 - It's Obvious you need to restructure the essay into paragraphs. I fell you should start the paragraph in a...

Writing Feedbacklinhblk - Aug 11, 2024Uzor - Aug 12, 2024
Colwich Arts Centre - IELTS WRITING TASK 1

2 - I only see the today image for this presentation. Did you forget to upload the before illustration? Anyway, I...

Writing FeedbackNorton - Aug 10, 2024Holt - Aug 11, 2024
The funding - Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features

2 - In this case, being number specific would help since each pie chart references a different information presentation. You...

Writing Feedbacknateq136 - Aug 9, 2024Holt - Aug 11, 2024
The Escalating Threats of Climate Change to Coastal Regions

2 - I believe that what is missing in this research paper is an actual focus on climate change and how...

Writing Feedbackjhomero92 - Aug 8, 2024Holt - Aug 11, 2024
Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison

2 - There are 2 images presented in this analytical paper. There is a bar graph, which was generically identified as...

Writing Feedbackleanguyen - Aug 8, 2024Holt - Aug 11, 2024
Part 2 of study plan After Arriving in Korea

4 - Okay. there is a huge, glaring problem with your application. You are planning to study Korean Law, which will...

ScholarshipVera24 - Aug 4, 2024Holt - Aug 11, 2024
GKS-U Personal Statement Psychology / university track

5 - Personally I feel stating your scholarship with the Brazil government is irrelevant, not so irrelevant but the way you...

ScholarshipEduarda - Jun 29, 2024omomoh_peace - Aug 10, 2024
GKS-U personal statement (PNU - tourism and convention)

4 - @starssssy Your statement is strong in terms of personal motivation and connection to Korea. However, to make it more...

Scholarshipstarssssy - Aug 3, 2024Vera24 - Aug 8, 2024
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