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The Future of the Internet, Globalization, and Mankind

3 - "Internet" is a proper noun and should be capitalized throughout the essay. Also, the first paragraph should me a...

Writing Feedbackrshingleton - Mar 14, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 14, 2009
'Successful Aging' - Personal Statement for Law School Admission

4 - Thank you so much kevin and sean....

Graduateio069578 - Mar 12, 2009io069578 - Mar 14, 2009
SAT Essay:One Subject or Multiple?

3 - Some more fixes: "In modern society, the indispensable discoveries cannot be found by focusing on one subject anymore,...

Writing Feedbackmingbaau - Mar 13, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 14, 2009
"Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep" SCAD Statement

6 - Great job. Your revised essay is very well-written. I can't think of any major criticisms for you, so I'll...

Undergraduatelindsayloring - Mar 13, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 14, 2009
'The perfect way of voicing my opinion' scholarship essay (everyone has an opinion)

3 - Thanks so much for the feedback and peer-editing, it really helped, and yep it's for questbridge, so wish me...

Scholarshipmila_girl - Mar 8, 2009mila_girl - Mar 13, 2009
How to start an essay on The Merchant Of Venice...?

4 - You can of course always challenge the question. Perhaps he is portrayed as both, or perhaps he is portrayed...

EssaysFallenSanityx - Mar 10, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 13, 2009
Description about a friend of mine

4 - Very good first draft. To make it even stronger, try going through and eliminating all forms of "to be"...

Writing Feedbackcaryngmail - Mar 10, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 13, 2009
Summary Writing on the issue of Urbanization

7 - Hi, this looks great, with no errors that I can find. However, when I write an article summary, I...

Writing Feedbacks11022734 - Feb 26, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 13, 2009
Personal narrative about an experience from high schoolabout an experience

3 - Yes, the beginning is awesome! The essay needs something added, though. It would be good to add somthing that...

Essayszaq12 - Mar 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 13, 2009
Outline for death penalty research paper?

11 - Wow, "contradistinction" is a good word that I'll have to start using!! Well, when trying to get through...

Research Papersjoeyl615 - Mar 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 13, 2009
"Animals should have rights too" - Argumentative Essay (Rogerian Style)

3 - Hello! A Rogerian argument is very focused on the counter-argument. That means you need to spend some time...

Writing Feedbacklilroxy17 - Mar 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 13, 2009
Nanyang: My proudest achievement essay.

9 - Good job on the essay. Kevin is right, though, you should tie your achievement into your educational aspirations in...

Undergraduatesumantneo - Mar 8, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 13, 2009
nursing graduation admission - professional goals essay

6 - Can you look at this and give me suggestions Thanks After Graduating in 1998 with my bachelors in...

Graduatejaiden07 - Feb 7, 2009jaiden07 - Mar 13, 2009
"Education is an admirable thing" - Scholarship Essay

3 - The pain of discipline was tough, at times, but it was more welcoming than the pain of regret I...

Scholarshipsharkbait09 - Mar 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 13, 2009
'a pinch, blend of that'; EDUCATION AT THE ART INSTITUTE vs ATTAINING MY GOAL

3 - Yeah, losing an essay you've worked really hard on is a horrible experience, especially if you were pleased with...

Undergraduateshannon1 - Mar 12, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 12, 2009
"Malcolm X and Dr King" esssay, fighting inequality

5 - Now that Kevin's mentioned it, King does seem to be the more admirable and effective figure. King fought for...

Writing Feedbackd690meg - Mar 11, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 12, 2009
'Hamlet' and 'Rosencrantz and Guildenstern are Dead'

4 - The opposing type is definitely the easier of the two to write. However, the alternating type tends to be...

Book Reportsdillonmhudson - Mar 10, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 12, 2009
Admission essay - What will you contribute to X school's community?

5 - Thank you..diligently working on it....

Graduateberberry - Mar 11, 2009berberry - Mar 12, 2009
SMU essay (took part in the victory)

19 - wow, It's a good idea. I will do it and I will post my essay later. thanks...

Undergraduatetechnogirl - Feb 28, 2009technogirl - Mar 12, 2009
Working in a cubicle - Division\Classification essay with emphasis on Division.

6 - Hi, I see that your first para ends with an assertion that the common idea about cubicle life is...

Writing Feedbackakern - Mar 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 11, 2009
The Outsiders essay, how to start it?

3 - Don't forget, as you craft your first draft, to include properly cited quotations to back your points. In fact,...

EssaysXxSalziixX - Mar 9, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 11, 2009
Chronic Illness and Family-Analysis paper

2 - This quote above... should you name the illness, or keep it unspecified in the intro? Oh, nevermind! I...

Writing Feedbackhunnybun39 - Mar 10, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 11, 2009
Short outline suggestions, from an introduction.

2 - Mustafa, I don't know how much good it does to write "property of Mustafa" if you don't include a...

EssaysMustafa1991 - Mar 10, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 11, 2009
On the Inland of Hispanolia

9 - Hello! Thanks for the suggesting those books, I love Stephen King's novels, so I really look forward to reading...

Writing FeedbackRangedCrow - Mar 7, 2009RangedCrow - Mar 11, 2009
My Passion for Fitness and Wellness -- Career Goals

5 - Cool! You have one of the most fascinating subjects. Muscle testing is especially fascinating. Look at this video: ...

Undergraduatelaqrjone - Mar 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 10, 2009
Rice Transfer Essay- What will you be able to contribute to Rice?

3 - Hey, I like the essay a lot, but like Sean says, it is important to thead it all together....

Undergraduateaggiesgirl1945 - Mar 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 10, 2009
Self-Fulfilling Prophecy in "The Blue Hotel"

19 - I most certainly will! Thanks again for the help that you provide . Now onto researching "The Glass Menagerie"......

Book Reportssilverystars - Jan 26, 2009silverystars - Mar 10, 2009
Statement: Studying People my Whole Adult Life

6 - Wow, Mustafa makes such a poignant and meaningful contribution to this forum. People are getting a good, strong perspective...

Undergraduatedpeterson - Mar 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 10, 2009
In my own words: Why is a scholarship important to you?

5 - Ok thank you all very much. This was a great help!...

Scholarshipneonnelson - Mar 1, 2009neonnelson - Mar 10, 2009
Scholarship Essays - Volunteer job and Education. (Deadline March 09)

8 - The dream sequence was really very well done -- you should be proud of it. Good job, and good...

Scholarshipkofpower2411 - Mar 7, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 9, 2009
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