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Pros and cons of developing tourism industry

4 - i think you can give further explanation on the main idea of body1, like why "The tourist industry is...

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Is technology (television, computers, cell phones, tablet devices, MP3 players) beneficial for child

3 - Do not ramble and try to inflate the word count. It will only confuse the reader. Try to cut...

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Some people believe that traveling alone is the best way to experience a country or a culture.

4 - On the one hand, it is seemingly understandable why people subscribe to the view that traveling alone is the...

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing

3 - Yes, like Holt said, use a space after any punctuation used, such as a period or comma. Additionally, I...

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How many migrants worked temporarily in 4 different countries

2 - The task 1 essay should only be composed of 200 words at the most. You have over analyzed the...

Writing FeedbackANCUTO - Apr 6, 2024Holt - Apr 13, 2024
MSc in Information and Communication Technology - Letter of motivation for sweden University

2 - Okay, you have to stop with the over excitement. You should not be emphasizing information in your letter with...

LettersKunal_Gujar - Apr 4, 2024Holt - Apr 13, 2024
Is a job-evaluated system preferable to individual piece-rate or group performance for operatives?

2 - We are not an essay writing service. We do not write essays for free for students. Nor do we...

Essayshoangluther - Apr 4, 2024Holt - Apr 13, 2024
IELTS Writing Task 1- Households owning electronic devices

2 - Do not overwrite in the task 1 essay. Stay within the 200 maximum word count. Writing more than that...

Writing FeedbackJennieaufif - Apr 4, 2024Holt - Apr 13, 2024
Mathematics and technology - motivation letter to a german university

2 - Paragraphs 3 and 4 are out of place in this presentation. You do not need to give a summarized...

Letterssara1999 - Apr 3, 2024Holt - Apr 13, 2024
Motivation letter for MSc in Data Science.

2 - Remove the reference to your academic training. Those are normally a part of a motivational letter. You should sell...

Letterssupunchandi - Apr 3, 2024Holt - Apr 13, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - EDUCATION TOPIC

2 - The prompt restatement has 2 immediately seen mistakes. The first, is that the opening sentence is unrelated to the...

Writing FeedbackJennieaufif - Apr 3, 2024Holt - Apr 13, 2024
Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? Master of Sustainable Energy (for AAS)

2 - You are too focused on explaining your professional reasons for choosing to study in Australia, which is usually discussed...

Scholarshipbangrevo - Apr 3, 2024Holt - Apr 12, 2024
The only reason for learning a foreign language is to travel to or work in a foreign country

2 - There are 3 points of view that should be present in the first paragraph. The first public opinion and...

Writing FeedbackChuyen97 - Apr 2, 2024Holt - Apr 12, 2024
The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and

2 - Sadly, the essay does not meet the minimum word requirement of 150 words. This will get an automatic failing...

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Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? Master of Agribusiness (for AAS)

2 - You have a problematic application here. You are a graduate of a non related course. So your credentials will...

Scholarshipdaris taufiq - Apr 1, 2024Holt - Apr 12, 2024
Task 2: an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home

2 - Okay. This is a single opinion essay, not a comparison essay. Therefore, the response paragraph that does not relate...

Writing Feedbackjade126 - Mar 31, 2024Holt - Apr 12, 2024
Owned and rented accommodation - IELTS 1: Bar chart

4 - Data Accuracy: Double-check the percentages mentioned in your summary to ensure accuracy. Ensure that the percentages add up correctly...

Writing Feedbackffriendd - Mar 29, 2024DeverX - Apr 9, 2024
writing ielts task 1: The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were

5 - Clarity and Precision: Be precise with your descriptions. Instead of saying "the bar chart witnessed several changes," specify what...

Writing Feedbackpthu553 - Mar 29, 2024DeverX - Apr 9, 2024
Young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community

3 - Hi there, I'm a bit confused by your conjunction " granted", I assume that the previous sentence and the...

Writing FeedbackKhacHauPham - Mar 29, 2024Jennieaufif - Apr 4, 2024
Miles Morales and his Legacy as a New Spider-Man

2 - You could also consider including a discussion that relates to the comparison of the previous iterations of Spider-Man against...

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There is not a First without the Second

2 - The main problem that I see with this paper is that a Works Cited page was created at the...

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MotivationalLetter: Master's degree in Microbiology and Microbial Biotechnology

2 - Since you already have an existing master's degree, you should be justifying why you would want to pursue a...

LettersDam94 - Mar 31, 2024Holt - Apr 3, 2024
The gaming industry - PS5 ENG102

2 - I believe that focusing your paper on specific problems early on in the research would also help. I do...

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Comparing living with parent and living in campus

2 - There is no effort on your part to paraphrase the original prompt. You merely did a cut and paste...

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LSHTM - MSc Health Policy, Planning, and Finance personal statment

2 - The first thing I would advise you to do is to keep the essay written only in the English...

Graduatesiopao106 - Mar 29, 2024Holt - Apr 2, 2024
Master of Human Resource Management - AAS

2 - Your first paragraph is not relevant to the prompt provided. You have to revise the essay to focus on...

Scholarshipmoarao - Mar 29, 2024Holt - Apr 2, 2024
University of Washington Department of ECE Admission Essay

2 - I am not sure about how to review this essay because you did not provide any guidelines for the...

Undergraduatejustj - Mar 29, 2024Holt - Apr 2, 2024
Writting task 2. The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the cost

2 - The essay discussion is based on the extent of your (dis)agreement with the provided discussion. It is not based...

Writing FeedbackTrang1711200 - Mar 28, 2024Holt - Apr 2, 2024
Mindset for ielts 1: the maps below shows Colwick Arts Centre in 2005 and today

3 - @Holt Thank you so much, I will try my best for the next time...

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Potential fertility risks of Lipo 360 surgery for women of childbearing age

2 - I believe that your introduction to Lipo360 is incomplete. You have to explain what the procedure is about, even...

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