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Collaboration, service, and change - Chevening Leadership

5 - Yeah your eassy sounds good. The most important thing that you have maintained a natural tone of writing that...

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Research paper on Fish Hatcheries

2 - It is best to assume that the reader is not familiar with the topic you are discussing at...

Research Paperstsherbourne - Nov 2, 2024Holt - Nov 2, 2024
The Right to Choose - Abortion Research Paper

3 - the last two paragraphs should be combined they both seem like they are building to a conclusion, but it...

Research Papersjsbenne822 - Nov 1, 2024tsherbourne - Nov 2, 2024
Ietls writing about the consumption and production of potato

2 - Since you are giving a summary of the information provided, you always need to be specific about regional...

Writing FeedbackCrimsonHydra - Nov 1, 2024Holt - Nov 2, 2024
Nigeria and Doctors - CAREER GOALS; CHEVENING

2 - The reviewer will not be interested in reading the research paper that you have included in this essay. In...

Scholarshipfaisalidina - Nov 1, 2024Holt - Nov 1, 2024
Chevening - Studying in the UK

3 - In all your conclusion, always try and reference Chevening and how the scholarship will aid you....

Scholarshipfarrazmi - Nov 1, 2024Chiedu_10 - Nov 1, 2024
Chevening-Career plan (Chevening is looking for individuals who have a clear post-study career plan)

2 - You have shown a tendency to overshare in all of your essays. You are not properly focused, nor actually...

Scholarshipfarrazmi - Nov 1, 2024Holt - Nov 1, 2024
Relationship Buillding and Shared Learning; CHEVENING

2 - While I am not discounting the importance of the relationship you built while you were in college, that is...

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Collaboration, building trust, and inspiring - Chevening Leadership and influence

3 - Nice essay But if you can use the STAR approach and show leadership skills beyond your schooling, that will...

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Chevening - Relationship building and shared learning

2 - Unfortunately your essay speaks of an internship, which should not be confused with a person performing a networking task...

Scholarshipfarrazmi - Nov 1, 2024Holt - Nov 1, 2024
Leadership is about finding a vacuum and mounting the courage to fill that space. - CHEVENING

4 - Thank you for the feedback, I will effect the changes...

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Compliance/Internal Control Manager - Leadership and influence-Chevening

3 - thankyou for ur insight...

ScholarshipMelissa231 - Oct 31, 2024farrazmi - Nov 1, 2024
chevening relationship building and Shared learning

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Mastercard Foundation Scholarship at the University of Edinburgh

5 - @alian Thank you very much for your contribution. I really appreciate it and I will heed to it. Thank...

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IELTS Writing task 2 : Solving environmental problems should be the responsibility of.....

2 - The work you have done deviates from the original writing instruction. You were being asked for an agree or...

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Digital Transformation (Product Owner) - Leadership and Influence - Chevening Essay

2 - This is a well developed leadership and influencing essay that shows how you are professionally leading changes within the...

Scholarshipessaycheck24 - Oct 31, 2024Holt - Oct 31, 2024
As computers are being used more and more in education, there will soon be no role for the teacher

2 - The response essay is a bit too short for a task 2 essay. Yes, it does surpass the minimum...

Writing Feedbackminhngoc12 - Oct 30, 2024Holt - Oct 31, 2024
My passion for robotic - AIF Waterloo Comp Eng Question #1

2 - There are 2 ways that this essay can actually proceed for the interest of the reviewer. The first way...

Undergraduatewoodg - Oct 30, 2024Holt - Oct 31, 2024
Essay on how Art Inspires me - fascinated forever.

2 - Universities and colleges request their reviewers and admissions committee members these days tend to run plagiarism checkers on the...

Undergraduatelushiousn - Oct 28, 2024Holt - Oct 28, 2024
Career Plan Chevening - Creating an AI innovation centre for long term

2 - You have wrongly referenced the organization work in your country. It is not about what they could provide...

Scholarshipryayra - Oct 28, 2024Holt - Oct 28, 2024
Resilience, determination, and compassion - Application for Mastercard Scholarship

2 - Consider using more specific examples of the traits you mentioned. The way that you describe these in your essay...

ScholarshipMystro_Dynamic - Oct 28, 2024Holt - Oct 28, 2024
Motivation Letter - M.Sc. Mechatronics

4 - @LazyWillow7 When I am writing a motivational letter, I am often advised not to dwell on motivations that started...

LettersLazyWillow7 - Oct 22, 2024ryayra - Oct 28, 2024
Chevening - Leadership - Aspiring Sustainable Business Leader

2 - Show team leadership. A true leader works and develops these procedures in consultation with industry partners, team members,...

Scholarshiprngrtm - Oct 28, 2024Holt - Oct 28, 2024
Study in the UK Essay for Chevening - Modules and Access to Research Labs

3 - @Holt Thank you so much Holt....

Scholarshipryayra - Oct 28, 2024ryayra - Oct 28, 2024
Chevening: The Meaning of Leadership for An Entry-Level Employee

5 - @harepanther I think that this is pretty good (but I'm not that good of a writer). But one thing...

Scholarshipharepanther - Oct 21, 2024ryayra - Oct 28, 2024
UK government in Indonesia - Chevening about Career Plan

2 - You need to present a more specific timeline for the short and long term goals. Be very clear and...

Scholarshippuputfn - Oct 28, 2024Holt - Oct 28, 2024
CERN 2025 Technical Student Internship - Civil Engineering

2 - You sound more like you are applying for a college admission than a prestigious and extremely competitive technical student...

Scholarshipmilan123 - Oct 27, 2024Holt - Oct 28, 2024
"A project coordinator" - Chevening: Leadership and influence

2 - Chevening is looking for current community and prpfession based leaders who have the potential to develop into future...

Scholarshipjklk - Oct 27, 2024Holt - Oct 27, 2024
In most countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more available.

2 - This essay length cannot be completed during the actual test. It is almost 400 words long, which means that...

Writing Feedbacknguyenthitamthu - Oct 27, 2024Holt - Oct 27, 2024
It's not about authority - chevening leadership and influencing skill

2 - Do not talk down to the reviewer. You are not being been seen in a good light with...

ScholarshipOlowo3310 - Oct 26, 2024Holt - Oct 27, 2024
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