Holt Educational Consultant
Oct 19, 2016
Undergraduate / Description about me as a personal statement [9]
Here are the corrections that I suggest you apply to your work:
...My aim is to polish my knowledge I acquired during my academic years in THE university and toperceive GAIN new perspectives of NE ... programs in OFFERED BY UNIST. Particularly,
I desire tobe BECOME competent ENOUGH to design a real reactor by THROUGH neutron behavior analyzing ANALYSIS.
... itis HAS BECOME necessary for me to study coding and METHODS OF simulating A reactor core. Doubtlessly, by reason of WITH THE HELP AND the assistance of professors ... achieve those skills with no obstacles. WITHOUT DELAY OR ENCUMBRANCE
In brief, UNIST education programs [...] as well as personality there.
The last line is not necessary in my opinion. You already stated that in the earlier parts in better detail.
Here are the corrections that I suggest you apply to your work:
...My aim is to polish my knowledge I acquired during my academic years in THE university and to
I desire to
... it
The last line is not necessary in my opinion. You already stated that in the earlier parts in better detail.