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Sep 22, 2014
Undergraduate / The trip to a football stadium turned out to be more than an exciting experience; Common app prompt [8]
CaptainCook,I agree with what TheRoy said, you can choose any place that you want, provided you frequent the place for a specific purpose. That of feeling happy, content, and complete. It can be any place nearby or far away. I have read essays where people have chose their minds as the place where they feel the most content and happy. I know that it seems unbelievable but it is true. Some people actually run away to a peaceful part of their minds when they want to feel inner peace. It is kind of finding a zen like place even when in a crowded and noisy area. So does it need to exist in real-time? Not exactly. It can be any place that you wish.
For example, you can use your mind as a unique place where you escape to. You can relate it to the trip to the stadium because you can explain that the stadium is a place where you escape to inside your mind. Explain how each time you remember the trip to the stadium, you feel content and happy because it was one of the best times of your life. Maybe you and your father bonded there. Or you discovered something new about yourself while watching the sport or talking to people. It can be that special place where you run to in your mind when you need to develop confidence or guts to do something you did not think you could do.
The above example is just one of the unique ways you can present a place when you feel comfortable and content. It also carries a very important meaning because your mind can take you anywhere you want to go as long as you have the imagination for it :-) I hope my suggestion helps.
CaptainCook,I agree with what TheRoy said, you can choose any place that you want, provided you frequent the place for a specific purpose. That of feeling happy, content, and complete. It can be any place nearby or far away. I have read essays where people have chose their minds as the place where they feel the most content and happy. I know that it seems unbelievable but it is true. Some people actually run away to a peaceful part of their minds when they want to feel inner peace. It is kind of finding a zen like place even when in a crowded and noisy area. So does it need to exist in real-time? Not exactly. It can be any place that you wish.
For example, you can use your mind as a unique place where you escape to. You can relate it to the trip to the stadium because you can explain that the stadium is a place where you escape to inside your mind. Explain how each time you remember the trip to the stadium, you feel content and happy because it was one of the best times of your life. Maybe you and your father bonded there. Or you discovered something new about yourself while watching the sport or talking to people. It can be that special place where you run to in your mind when you need to develop confidence or guts to do something you did not think you could do.
The above example is just one of the unique ways you can present a place when you feel comfortable and content. It also carries a very important meaning because your mind can take you anywhere you want to go as long as you have the imagination for it :-) I hope my suggestion helps.