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Posts by Umbu Richy
Name: Chornelis Umbu Richy Palanggaringu
Joined: Mar 3, 2021
Last Post: Mar 15, 2021
Threads: 4
Posts: 10  
From: Indonesia
School: Satya Wacana Christian University

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Umbu Richy   
Mar 4, 2021
Scholarship / Australia Awards Scholarship Essay (Master of Public Policy) [3]

Hai everyone. My name is Richy and now I'm working on my scholarship application (AAS).
I would very grateful and really appreciate if you review my essay. Thank you

Why did you choose your porposed course and institution?


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I choose Master of Public Policy (MPP) because I have an interest in government policy. MPP will equip me more in theory and practice in policymaking and analysis to answer challenges and problems in society, specifically in underdeveloped areas that still lack of policy experts. Therefore, I will be able to contribute to forming government policies that are more responsive, sustainable, and able to adapt to the needs of the community, especially in extreme events (e.g. COVID-19 Pandemic).

My undergraduate study has provided an understanding of policymaking theory from legal perspective. However, the knowledge of policymaking in theory and practice from other fields such as economics, politics, government, leadership, and management is needed as a unity of expertise in policymaking. In Indonesia, the slow response from the government, the lack of a sense of crisis and coordination between the central and local government, and the less supportive social and cultural responses and economic conditions in the community have resulted delays in crisis management (Journal of Borneo Administrator Vol. 6(2) 2020).

I believe The University of Melbourne is the best choice because of its courses. Besides offering courses that support skills in policymaking like other universities, Unimelb specifically provides Crisis Management as a Core Subject which can prepare me in crisis management to prepare, respond to, and recover from extreme events such as epidemics, earthquakes, floods, bushfires, or financial collapse. To make sustainable policies for Indonesia, Unimelb also offers a course "Indonesia Rising?" which is not offered by other universities that specifically discuss Indonesia which has geopolitical similarities and close political relations with Australia as a democratic and decentralized power and the only member of the G20 in Southeast Asia so that it can support my ability to form policies which in my opinion describes "think globally and act locally".
Umbu Richy   
Mar 5, 2021
Undergraduate / Application for the math program of the university of Waterloo - AIF form essay [7]

With a limited number of characters, maybe you can answer more directly to what they ask so that you can put more about your personality. They have written down what you have to write so that introduction is not really necessary. And, don't forget to link your reasons to the university.

For example:

I have an interest in ..... and I want to become a ..... (be more specific, it shows your clear motivation)
-the program- at UW provides ..... that can equip me ......
I choose UW because of the experience in ...... and I believe I can grow more with using the....
(it can be a personal reason or maybe u can compare it to other universities with mentioning the UW plus point and how you use it)
Umbu Richy   
Mar 9, 2021
Scholarship / Doctoral Degree for AAS 2021 [5]

Your example is too general, maybe you can be more specific. For example, provides translation services and/or workshop for (...). And also, because it is for a doctoral degree maybe you can relate one of your answers to the fields of research.

My advice, please see the outcome skills of the course/research that you will gain from your doctoral degree and then make an answer base on those skills. Therefore, you will have specific and personal answers for your essay. Keep spirit !!!
Umbu Richy   
Mar 9, 2021
Scholarship / Essay AAS for Master of Public Health degree in Australia [3]

Maybe you can answer the question directly first and then explain your reason(s). For example:

I am applying for the Master of Public Health (MPH) because I have the eagerness to contribute to enhancing the Indonesian Human Development Index and MPH can equip me (skills that you need...) to (.....).

And then list the problems that you want to solve chronologically.

Do the same thing to answer the question of why you choose the university and don't forget to relate it to the problems that you already mentioned in the first answer. Keep spirit !!!
Umbu Richy   
Mar 9, 2021
Scholarship / Study impact on my career as a Policy Analyst and Planning Expert in government [3]

Hai everyone. My name is Richy and now I'm working on my scholarship application (AAS).
I would very grateful and really appreciate if you review my essay. Thank you

How will the proposed study contribute to your career?


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My future career is to be a Policy Analyst and Planning Expert in government. I choose this career path because of the clear and openly measurable career paths and performance. To become a Policy Analyst, skills and knowledge are needed in the fields of public policy, technical and policy analysis, and policy advice forming-writing. In terms of planning, special skills in planning, management, monitoring and evaluation, and leadership are also needed.

Master of Public Policy will equip me to meet these required competencies and qualifications through the courses presented. By completing the courses Public Policy Analysis and Political Problems and Policy Responses, I will have in-depth knowledge of the disciplines of political science and policy and administration, and the ability to examine governance, policy, and public sector reform issues from other disciplinary perspectives. I will also have critical and strong reasoning skills, and creativity in applying theory and research methods to complex practical problems across diverse contexts. In terms of Planning, after completing the Crisis Management, Monitoring and Evaluation in Development, and Executive Leadership and Management courses, I will be able to design and implement an effective Monitoring and Evaluation plan and system for development organizations and have effective oral and written communication skills and responsible, self-motivation, self-direction and outstanding organizational skills to set goals and manage time and priorities.

The Master of Public Policy degree that I will obtain after completing my studies can ultimately meet the qualifications needed to work as a Policy Analyst and Planning Expert in the Provincial Government and the Central Government which requires a minimum of Master level of education. Apart from that, I also will have the opportunity to become a practitioner lecturer to share the knowledge from my Master's education and from my work experience.
Umbu Richy   
Mar 9, 2021
Scholarship / Teaching English language (Australia Award Scholarship) Master Degree in TESOL [3]

Too much introduction. I will prefer to answer the question directly first and then list my reason(s) and problem(s) that can support my answer.

In your last paragraph, you didn't relate your reasons to the TESOL program at the university specifically. For example, courses that the university offers and the plus point that the other universities with the same courses don't have.

My advice, please focus on what you will gain from the course and institution. Keep spirit !!!
Umbu Richy   
Mar 9, 2021
Scholarship / How have you implemented a change or reform? Controversial court judgments [3]

Hai everyone. My name is Richy and now I'm working on my scholarship application (AAS).
I would very grateful and really appreciate if you review my essay. Thank you

How have you contributed to solving a challenge and to implementing change or reform?


(Be specific and include: what aspects / s of your leadership knowledge, skills and practice you consider to be well established and effective; which people or organizations you worked with to solve the problem; and what creative methods were used.)


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In February 2020, I became the Head of the Committee for the Salatiga District Court Hearing. This activity facilitated students to have a discussion with a judge about how court judgments are made and about court judgments that caused controversy in the community. For that, we needed a theme that represents these problems and I offered "Achieving Justice in Judge's Decision" which was approved by other committees and the Steering Committee. We realized that there is a problem that may the material presented is not in sync with the audience's needs. As the head of the committee, I instructed the Program Division to prepare discussion trigger questions to anticipate the unfocused discussion. Other than that, with other committees, I compiled a Discussion Introduction which contains the main materials that must be conveyed by the speaker synchronized with the discussion trigger questions. On the day of the activity, with the trigger questions that had been prepared and the Discussion Introduction that had been delivered, many participants were enthusiastic to ask questions and on the other hand, the invited judge had prepared the material being asked so that both students and the judge received feedback as expected.

From August to October 2020, I volunteered in A Better World Festival which mobilized communities throughout Indonesia to make social actions in the midst of the Covid-19 Pandemic. One of my tasks was to prepare webinar themes on issues of equality, environment, health, and education. On the basis of the analysis of the latest issues, 2 of the 4 themes I suggested were adjusted and used by Campaign as the themes for the national webinars at the peak of A Better World Festival. The 2 themes discussed Mental Health in the midst of a pandemic and the challenges of distance learning in villages and cities. For this contribution, I was selected as a Volunteer of The Week and was nominated for the best Liaison Officer Leader along with 5 other volunteers.
Umbu Richy   
Mar 9, 2021
Scholarship / 2022 Australia Awards Scholarship Essay - Applied economics [4]

Too many explanations. Describe your interest and your/community needs first and then support it with your evidence(s) that can support your motivation to get the scholarship.

Simple guide from me that you can use:

Course:
Your interest - Problems/Needs - what the course provides (elaborate it)

Institution:
Specific course - what skill(s) - what the plus point compared to other universities (link it to the problem(s) that you mentioned in the first paragraph)
Umbu Richy   
Mar 9, 2021
Scholarship / Digital pandemic - Writing an outstanding Essay for AAS [6]

I didn't see you put the course name and the institution you choose.
According to your essay, I also didn't see you put your specific needs related to the problems that you mentioned.
You can put the way how you use the knowledge/skills that you will gain from the course and the university to solve the problems.

Show the connection between your interest, the problems, the course, and the institution.
Umbu Richy   
Mar 9, 2021
Scholarship / Examples how you will gain from your scholarship. Indonesian policy, collaboration with Australia [3]

Hai everyone. My name is Richy and now I'm working on my scholarship application (AAS).
I would very grateful and really appreciate if you review my essay. Thank you

Gaining from scholarship and limited access



Please: a) give up to three practical examples of how you intend to use the knowledge, skills and connections you will gain from your scholarship. Possible tasks can be personal and / or professional; and b) list any possible constraints you think may prevent you from achieving these tasks. *:

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1. Make an analysis and providing recommendations on policies issued in my region and other regions in Indonesia. In the professional field, I will join the regional policy-making team that will specifically formulate regional policies in terms of empowering communities, maximizing creative economy and tourism, as well as policies for anticipation, handling, and crisis recovery. If possible, I can also become the project leader for government programs of these policies and be directly involved in monitoring and evaluating programs.

2. Build a collaboration with the Australian Government or the private sector and individuals and recommending areas in Indonesia for human empowerment, tourism, and creative economy programs that they provide. The connections that I will get will open up opportunities for me to find potential support for the community programs in Indonesia.

3. Become a lecturer for the Legal Drafting course in the Law Studies Program and the Managerial Decision Making course at the Management Study Program at Wira Wacana Christian University, Sumba. I believe the best way to keep learning and using the knowledge at the same time is by teaching. Other than that, this is crucial for underdeveloped regions to build a spirit of change in their young generation because they are the next ones who will build the area.

There are things that may prevent me from achieving those tasks namely related to limited access. To be directly involved in policymaking and implementation of government programs, I have to be in the local government bureaucracy or be invited to be involved in it. On the other hand, the lack of human resources, awareness, and support from the local governments for international collaboration make it difficult to realize the collaboration plans. The unavailability of opportunities for the lecturers from civil servants to teach part-time also prevented me from being involved in the lecture processes.
Umbu Richy   
Mar 15, 2021
Scholarship / How have you implemented a change or reform? Controversial court judgments [3]

Actually, I have experience as a volunteer to teach students about the Laws of Electronic Information and Transactions because of the rampant hate speech and defamation committed by students in my country. I hope it's more challenging and represents a change or reform. Thank you
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