Writing Feedback / 'health is the most important thing' - fast food restaurants or not [NEW]

The number of fast food restaurants has increased over the last few years. Some people are very anxious about this increase. What is your opinion of fast food restaurant and thier effects on the population? Give your reasons or examples to support your ideas."

Many fast food restaurants has opened in recent years and in numerous countries.Different people have different ideas about this increase.As for me,I would prefer it if its number will be in minimal growth .

Everyone knows that the most popular fast food restaurant is McDonald's which is located in more than hundreds countries,6 continents and operates over hundreds of thousands restaurants worldwide.Admittedly,KFC plays second place in its.We are well -known as common menu items of fast food outlets included :Big Mag,KFC,hamburgers,pizzas,hot dogs,sandwiches,French fries,fired chicken ,chips...Like everything has 2 sides,advantages and disadvantages.Let's talk about them.

The dilemma facing us today is how to save our limited time and money in the inflated countries, in the world of constant change.So in such circumstances ,the main advantages of fast food restaurants is that eating fast food is one of the best solution for essential busy people.On grounds of fast food can be prepared,served so fast, convenient,cheap and time-saving approach.

But for human being ,the biggest questions which remained us is how to keep healthy. If you are rich,successful but not healthy that means you are not happy .Maybe you will pay whole time,money to stay healthy.With fast food we are facing with extremely problems .Because fast food is low in nutrition and high in trans fat,saturated fat,sodium,cholestrerol.The current dietary habit is related to the increase healthy problem such as :high blood pressure,overweight,heart disease...It is one of the worriest problems for adults and especially for children-our future generations.

In conclusion,for me health is the most important thing in our daily life. I do everything possible thing to keep my health. So I only choose fast food in the case I don't have time and money.Hopefully, everyone are making best choices in any case ,not event fast food restaurants in our life.

Writing Feedback / Some items such as clothes or furniture can be made by hand or by machine? [3]

Some items such as clothes or furniture can be made by hand or by machine, which do you prefer?
The Industrial Revolution marked a major turning point in history. Since then manufacture has played an important role and gradually replaced handicrafts because items made by machine have lower price and more sustained high quality than hand made one. Hence in my opinion manufactured products is a better choice in comparison with the same things which are made by hand.

Being manufactured, goods have very competitive price because machines can produce fast and continuously which can save time and labour. Take Chinese silk made by hand and silk sew by machine for example, Chinese silk have sky-high price. In the massive inflation nowadays where almost people have to budget carefully, items made by machine are more preferred than handicraft ones.

Another factor which makes manufactured products be a wise choice for consumers is their sustained high quality. These items are produced by those which based on the same technology, even the same machine; therefore, there is no difference in products' quality. Whereas handmade ones, though having to meet a certain standard, are still influenced by many outside factors such as different makers' levels of skills or producing conditions.

In view of what I mentioned above, I suggest that we should choose manufactured products in the circumstance of inflation nowadays. However if you are the person who are not influenced by varieties in price or quality and are interested in handicraft items you should choose what you want.

Thanks for your time and best wishes for you !

Writing Feedback / FAST FOOD has many good effects on population? [9]

The number of fast food restaurants has increased over the last few years. Some people are very anxious about this increase. What is your opinion of fast food restaurant and thier effects on the population? Give your reasons or examples to support your ideas."

The number of fast food restaurants has increased quickly, which makes some people very anxious because of some harmful effects on health fast food may have. However the increase has many good influences on population. In my opinion, I'm sided with these positive attitudes toward fast food and fast food restaurant

One of the main benefits associated with the increase is that the more fast food restaurants are opened that is why more time and money people can save. In the past when there were not many restaurants those who wanted to buy fast food had to go to a very far place, which took so much time. Moreover buying fast food easily also helps people not have to cook - a really time-consuming work. As the result we can have more time to do many more useful things. For example you may have weekends without worrying about work, have more time for family, friends, relatives.

Another positive influence of the increase in the number of fast food restaurants on population is that it motivates economic development. When more and more these restaurants are opened, many people will have another chance to have jobs, which results to that unemployment's consequence can be reduced. Take KFC for example, they have more than 14000 outlets in more than 80 countries and territories around the world hiring millions labours. Moreover, the increase in the number of fast food restaurants also creates a huge demand for materials for production, which is the dynamic for other factors of the economy to develop quickly.

However, many people are anxious that being able to get fast food very easily for the number of restaurants increases makes people become lazier and indifferent of slow food. As the result, they have to face to the manner of seriously bad healthy. In my opinion, the consequence is not caused by fast food. The most important reason is people's reaction to the "plus" time. When people have more free time, they don't spend it on useful and healthy things: instead of exercising or joining outdoor activities, people watch television or play video game for many hours or even just sleep.

What has been discussed above has my point of view that the increase in the number of fast food restaurant has many good effects on population. Moreover we should encourage developing this field of business because it is not only business but also special cuisines.

Writing Feedback / 'universal pills' - If you could create one invention ,what would it be? [8]

Currently, we are living in a constantly changing world. That's why we are suffering from a lot of problems which includes; diseases, unemployment, poverty, starvation... Expensive medication is one of the major problems affecting a lot of people, especially the poor . Therefore, if I could come up with a solution, it would be the invention of universal pills. That would help, even the poor to stay healthy for the following reasons.

To begin with, health is the most important asset in our daily life .There is a definite link between health, success and happiness. If you are not healthy, then you have nothing ! The hard science of medicine gets all the credit for staving off disease and prolonging life. Nowadays, many foodstuffs are low in nutrition but with many artificial additives, which could be poisonous to the body. Examples of such are fast-foods and even some medical drugs. In comparison with our ancestors, we are faced with many diseases. Humans still misunderstand the evolutional of numerous kinds of viruses, bacteria and fungus. Hence, people will naturally continue to try and discover how to live longer.

Secondly, health is considered wealth of any nation. In poorest countries most people live on less than $1. Which is not sufficient to provide a balanced diet, most of such people are undernourished and thus unproductive in society. Developed countries are not spared from health problems. For instance, in America common diseases are overweight, heart diseases, cancer. Healthy citizens are the greatest wealth a country can ever have.

In conclusion, universal pills for hundreds of diseases, are the best solution for helping people all over the world. A longer and healthier life is my dream.

I GREATLY APPRECIATE YOUR HELP!

Writing Feedback / 'houses on another planet' - Should humans attempt to colonize space ? [8]

Some predict that earth will not survive indefinitely!From a scientific of view,space exploration is considered as an effective response for developing viable modes of living .For this reason,i am favor in of space colonization for following reasons .

Firstly ,the earth has a limited number of resources such as space,water ,clean air,fossil fuels that are quickly depleted by rapidly growing world population.Consequently,there will be no space on the earth for upcoming generations to live on.For instance,desforestation and other methods of land reclamation cause harmful effects to environment including desgratation,global warming,climate change etc .This will be unhealthy conditions for our next generations .

Secondly, understanding space is what makes us human! With brainpower one tries to dig deep into our world's mysteries .For example,Stephen Hawking gives us the ultimate guide to the universe, a ripping yarn based on real science, spanning the whole of space and time -from the nature of the universe itself, to the chances of alien life, and the real possibility of time travel.

Finally,space colonization has given us a great deal of achivements of technology and shoule be continued for the benefits of the human being .Exploration on another planet,or the moon would offer a huge opportunity for the scientific community and may benefit the whole human race in the end!

In conclusion,though a highly expensive prospect ,the advantages far overweigh than disadavantages.Hopefully,we will build our houses on another planets one day not so far from now!

THANKS SO MUCH FOR YOUR TIME AND HELP,MUCH APPRECIATED!

Writing Feedback / The content of the Internet controlled by a single powerful global agency? [4]

Imagine that the content of the Internet were controlled by a powerful global agency comparable to the United Nations. Explain the possible ADVANTAGES and/or DISADVANTAGES of such a system.

The content of the Internet controlled by a single powerful global agency comparable to the United Nations would provide many benefits as well as drawbacks. Controlling internet is adopted in many countries due to its social stability, but it has its advantages and disadvantages.

Censorship of powerful global agency has some benefits. Firstly, one of these benefits is that when this system is implemented, it would be adopted and accepted by all nations. In this way, all flow information, which is published or broadcasted or omitted, is being exclusively insisted to protect any disorder including cyberspace and investigate cybercrime... Secondly, powerful global agency would create community and reduce conflict between its members by the final authority of what content is permitted on the Internet. It would make equality in our constantly changing world, which has big gap between developed and developing countries. For instance, third world dependence on first world sources media programming and technologies was a sensitive political use.

In contrary, the control of GPA on the content of internet in comparison with United Nations has some disadvantages. Firstly, once internet is controlled by one organization, its monopoly regulation restricted and monitored internet that meet their political requirement. Imagine that China, which was "thumbnail" of powerful global agency, restricted social media like Facebook, Google... For instance, both China and Russia sold other countries technology for monitoring and filtering the internet. In addition, when information is regulated, that means, there is not free exchange of information and ideas that foster collaboration and advances in science and technology.

In conclusion, attempts at censorship have been mostly unsuccessful. People have free will and free thought. They have morals and make conscious decisions about what they do. I think the problems outweigh the benefits.

I really appreciate your help!