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Posts by moealrob
Joined: Dec 30, 2010
Last Post: Dec 31, 2010
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moealrob   
Dec 31, 2010
Undergraduate / "a city in Saudi Arabia" world you come from and how did it shape your dreams? MIT [6]

Now, being one of the elite, which ARAMCO chose to give the highest level of education to, and then send them to study abroad before employing them, and being the promise of my family, I plan to get a fair high-level education, graduate from a university and then return to ARAMCO with the goal of becoming a manager in mind. try to make it sound better.

Check out my essays please!
moealrob   
Dec 31, 2010
Undergraduate / "The master of mathematics" - yale short answer [4]

Felling that I have neglected my father, I would spend an afternoon with him, I would probably help him out with his tough work, or even have lunch with him.

It happened when I was in tenth grade when my math teacher called me " The master of mathematics ". I felt very excited, he said it in front of our math and science team. He also referred to me as " Pythagoras ".

To experience the truly complicated miracle that all of us have never seen by naked eye.
The moment before birth! The adventure of the unknown inside a mothers belly!

The writing process, to show not to tell. It would be very helpful to be better at doing that, at the despite of moving from Jordan six months ago.

Tell us about the most significant challenge that you have faced throughout your school years.
moealrob   
Dec 31, 2010
Undergraduate / "moving and living in another country" - Yale upload document Education interruption. [2]

It's not an easy thing moving and living in another country, your life as you know it changes. It can be a hard dillemma and was exactly what I had to face. I was obligated to go but it was farther better. Not only I had to change high school once but rather three times. Twice in the U.S since I came here June this year and once, I consider the most challenging, from Jordan to the United States. When entering a school I didn't know anyone, and there was a big cultural and language gap that separated me from the rest of the students. In Jordan all classes were in Arabic, accept English,. Change was Indeed a hardship I had to face, and was something I had trouble with, but I eventually fought this change until I felt was at home. All the way from Jordan I have moved where I experienced a very pivotal experience that gave giving me an identity of who I really am, where I came from, and all about my family

I would like to check yours too.
moealrob   
Dec 30, 2010
Undergraduate / "Volunteering at a Frame Shop" - Short statement on activity [4]

I could be interning elsewhere, I am glad I chose to volunteer at the Frame shop- even through all the paper cuts.

Nice essay, the same as TheFreeMason11 try to find your grammar mistakes.

i would really appreciate it if you check out my essay please.
moealrob   
Dec 30, 2010
Undergraduate / "Not die from thinking or learning" - International student [7]

Nobody ever died because of thinking or learning! Indeed, people who avoid learning, or abandon it, find no joy in life. Moreover they find that life is drained dry. For me learning is a natural pleasure, which is inborn within me. Without learning, survival itself is threatened. Everybody knows that "Knowledge is Power" but I can say that "Knowledge is Wealth". Education keeps my mind open and active to receive all kinds of experience. It is truly a pleasure to me and I will continue to learn the best way I can.

This is a fixed version, try to help me support it and show not tell.
I will help you and take a look at your essays.
moealrob   
Dec 30, 2010
Undergraduate / "want to major in Engineering" Which department at MIT appeals to you and why ? [12]

Decide at first which department or program you are really interested. I think that the Question was: Which department or program at MIT appeals to you. Answer the question and then show them some knowledge. Show them that you are very concerned about going there and that you put some effort in searching that department.
moealrob   
Dec 30, 2010
Undergraduate / "Not die from thinking or learning" - International student [7]

Nobody ever died because of thinking or learning. People who avoid learning, or abandon it, find no joy in life, find that life is drained dry. Leaning is a natural Pleasure, Which is Inborn and instinctive with me. Without learning, I think ...

Please review and check for grammar mistakes.
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