Posts by lee235717
Joined: Dec 13, 2011 |
Last Post: Dec 30, 2011
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Undergraduate /
UPenn optional essay- tell us about you [10]
I like the second one. I don't if you answered the entire prompt though. It asks about your identity and background to show how it guides your day to day experiences.
Undergraduate /
BABSON SUPPLEMENT: together we can grow [5]
"I'm friendly to everyone except ignorance"
Ignorance means having a lack of knowledge. From the sentence it seems as if you are unfriendly towards the underprivileged. Your essay looks really similar to another Babson Supplement that is posted on Essay Forum. Be more original.
Undergraduate /
NYU Supplement - English Exchange experience in school [5]
To be honest, you don't really answer the prompt at all. Based on what you wrote, it seems as if you would be satisfied with studying at any prestigious university around the world. There is no focus on your major.
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