Writing Feedback / People prefer live today in some urban areas and communicate less with local residents. [5]

Question

In the past most of people lived in small village where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area. What do you think were advantages and disadvantages of living in small community?

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Answer:

Introduction
Time flies so fast and gives an influence of people's live. People are more likely to live in rural area previously than in the big city. However, people prefer living in urban area with less of communication with local residents. In my opinion, to live in rural area has a positive effect such as we will be easier to build a relationship each other. Also, people would often help other individuals. In reverse, It also has a negative effect like they will dependence with other people in the same community.

Conclusion
All in all, live in the small community have a benefit like we can help other people that would become a way for being closer with them. In spite of that, it also has drawback such people in the rural area more likely to wait for favor from another person. So, it will decrease personal quality of rural people. I would suggest it is necessary that people have to plan where they want to live by choosing places wisely.

Writing Feedback / People believe that the technology has driven them to face great development in their daily routine [5]

Question:
There has been major advances in technology over recent decade and this has led to significant improvement in people's live. Agree or disagree?

Answer:

Introduction
In this globalization era, technology has changed rapidly and gives a great impact for people live. For this reason, People believe that technology drive people to face great development in their daily routine. In my educational perspective, I have a tendency to accord this group of people.

Conclusion
To sum up, although some disagree that the cutting-edge technology has not tremendous enhancement, I am more likely to assume that this advance technology has led to the great development because it might help people to do something in this era become easier than a past time. I would suggest that people must use the technology wisely.

Writing Feedback / Parents are imperative to teach their children - even more than the professional teachers [3]

Question:
Parents are the best teacher. Agree or disagree?

Answer:

Introduction
Parents play an important role to educate their children. From that stand point, I totally agree that parents have an extremely good impact for their children. Both of them can develop people's capability to become the persons who know important things in the world more than the professional teacher that people have in school.

Conclusion
In conclusion, parents are imperative to teach their children and teach anything with a valuable lesson. Although some people believe that stake holder in the school can do such as activity. In my view, parents are the best one for developing people's capability.

Writing Feedback / Summary: Plant Life in the Taklimakan Desert [4]

The Taklimakan Desert is the second biggest desert before Sahara Desert in Africa that has a low rainfall with a daily temperature up to 20 degrees and also suddenly sandstorms that most be an extremely condition. Some parts of Taklimakan Desert is a sand dunes, it causes the area free from vegetation. But another areas, where it is between the open desert and oases, there are plants grow well.

Taklimakan Desert has a species of plants that grow well such as Populus euphratica, Tamarix ramosissima and Alhagi sparsifolia with the different ways to survive. The survival of Takilamakan Plants are also useful to be a protector for their ecosystem such as stabilized of sand dunes, preventing the erosion and conserve biodiversity.