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The final race of an athlete - UBC Personal Profile

2 - You do not have to introduce yourself and the origins of your family in Canada. That is not required...

Undergraduateitsmedavis - Aug 6, 2024Holt - Aug 7, 2024
Do store knowledge on the internet outweigh stored knowledge in books?

2 - It is unfortunate that you have only written 232 words for this topic. The minimum word count is 250...

Writing FeedbackTHANHNGAN241 - Aug 6, 2024Holt - Aug 7, 2024
College Essay on my journey and passion towards Health, Safety and Environment

2 - Do not close the essay with a reference to Cornell and Professor Nellie Brown. This is a personal statement....

UndergraduatePrial - Aug 5, 2024Holt - Aug 6, 2024
The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.

2 - There is a lack of coherence and clarity in your presentation based on these 2 problem references....

Writing Feedbackhihihihithu - Aug 5, 2024Holt - Aug 6, 2024
How people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK - IELTS Writing task 1

2 - "Almost" means "not quite or very nearly". It is not the same meaning as "most" greatest in amount,...

Writing Feedbacklee2nhw - Aug 5, 2024Holt - Aug 6, 2024
[WRITING TASK 1 IELTS] THE DIAGRAM SHOWS HOW LIVERTON DOCKS CHANGE SINCE 1980

2 - There are only 2 illustrations provided for this report. One from 1980 and the other, is present day....

Writing Feedbackmal880 - Aug 4, 2024Holt - Aug 6, 2024
Part 2 of study plan After Arriving in Korea

4 - Okay. there is a huge, glaring problem with your application. You are planning to study Korean Law, which will...

ScholarshipVera24 - Aug 4, 2024Holt - Aug 11, 2024
In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What are the problems and solutions?

2 - This is your personal opinion which is not reflected in the original discussion. You cannot make such claims...

Writing Feedbacklamlinhlinh - Aug 4, 2024Holt - Aug 4, 2024
Addiction and Substance Abuse

2 - 1. The research paragraphs should not end with in-text citations. These references must have additional discussions included. The insight...

Research PapersJlentz13 - Aug 4, 2024Holt - Aug 4, 2024
English and Korean Languages - Study plan for the gks

2 - You have very good pre-arrival plans for both English and Hangul language proficiency presented in this essay. The problem,...

ScholarshipVera24 - Aug 3, 2024Holt - Aug 4, 2024
Task 1 - The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia had a baby

2 - Avoid using a run-on sentence for your summary overview. Concise references rely on your ability to present one idea...

Writing FeedbackUnessayforum - Aug 3, 2024Holt - Aug 4, 2024
GKS-U personal statement (PNU - tourism and convention)

4 - @starssssy Your statement is strong in terms of personal motivation and connection to Korea. However, to make it more...

Scholarshipstarssssy - Aug 3, 2024Vera24 - Aug 8, 2024
Some people feel that the cost of space exploration is far too high for the benefits it brings

2 - This is an incomplete thought. There is a missing verb here that would have completed the sentence idea...

Writing Feedbackkeylie tran - Aug 2, 2024Holt - Aug 4, 2024
Essay for a low income student scholarship about learning something new

2 - The discussion of EcoTech is not aligned with the prompt requirements. That total paragraph can be removed without affecting...

Undergraduatelofpty - Aug 1, 2024Holt - Aug 4, 2024
The bar chart below shows employment figures in different tourism-related industries

2 - What sort of chart was provided? The chart type is important because it will help the reader envision...

Writing Feedbacktangthuyduong304 - Jul 31, 2024Holt - Aug 1, 2024
How many overseas conferences held in Cities - IELTS 1

2 - You are missing the past tense word "were" which indicates a plural past for the conferences. This is...

Writing FeedbackLeMaiPhg - Jul 31, 2024Holt - Aug 1, 2024
TASK 1: the number of people who don't have occupation

2 - Please remember that the task 1 essay will score best once you write between 175 to 200 words. These...

Writing Feedbackphuthinh - Jul 31, 2024Holt - Aug 1, 2024
IELTS Writing task 2: Essay about healthiness problems and measures for that

2 - The paraphrasing is incorrect. It should mention, in your own words, that the weight increase is happening in some...

Writing FeedbackKitrute - Jul 31, 2024Holt - Aug 1, 2024
IELTS TASK 2 [Doctors and engineers, should be required to work ....]

2 - Hello, for a review of this essay based on the band sectional scoring and possible final score, you must...

Writing FeedbackQueen02 - Jul 31, 2024Holt - Aug 1, 2024
It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks.

2 - The paraphrasing is acceptable, although calling this an argument is an exaggeration. A discussion would have more aligned as...

Writing FeedbackTuyet Trinh - Jul 30, 2024Holt - Jul 31, 2024
what do you think will be the highest-paying occupation 50 years from now?

2 - Hmmm,,, the title of the essay and the content of the paragraphs are two extremely different and highly disconnected...

Writing FeedbackJane Mai - Jul 29, 2024Holt - Jul 29, 2024
Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country's success

2 - The essay is lacking 2 words to meet the minimum word count. Deductions, which will be applied to the...

Writing Feedbacktrannhatminh - Jul 29, 2024Holt - Jul 29, 2024
Registration of a paper in an identified academic field?

2 - It is customary to ask that the writer or researcher register in one academic field just to give yourself...

Research PapersLililo - Jul 28, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
UBC Personal Profile - Various perspectives

2 - Avoid the reference point "I" in the descriptions from your parents and friends. You need to make sure that...

Undergraduatemdamissu - Jul 28, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
The future of the automotive industry

2 - I realize that this is a draft which leaves you plenty of room for improvement. I would probably start...

Writing FeedbackRcD - Jul 27, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Do people prefer arts to technology in your view?

2 - There is no need to justify the reasons why people would still look into art when you are trying...

Writing Feedbacklmaok - Jul 27, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
Can discrimination be escaped?

3 - @Holt thanks so much on your feedback!...

Writing Feedbackquynnesanity - Jul 27, 2024quynnesanity - Jul 28, 2024
Are famous celebrities 'role models' for young generations?

2 - You should avoid presenting information that removes the focus from the actual discussion. There is no need to...

Writing Feedbackwslgods - Jul 26, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
Competition or cooperation in our society - IELTS 2

2 - The essay fails to use pronouns to reference the point of view being discussed in the body of paragraphs....

Writing FeedbackHoangminh06 - Jul 26, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
The charts below give information about the number of hours that students study each day

2 - The summary overview is missing important reference information that has made it very difficult for me to understand the...

Writing Feedbackhaidang1010 - Jul 26, 2024Holt - Jul 28, 2024
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