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IELTS Writing task 2 : Many people feel it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animals

4 - @Heidi_han Thanks for your suggestion!...

Writing Feedbacksylvie813 - Nov 11, 2024sylvie813 - Nov 21, 2024
Writing task 1: The chart below shows the percentage of different types of household waste

2 - Kindly rewrite this practice test to achieve the proper maximum word count for the task 1 essay. This should...

Writing Feedbackdller - Nov 11, 2024Holt - Nov 13, 2024
Combating Bullying in Schools

2 - The content of this section is purely hypothetical. There needs to be a sense of how this type...

Research Papersaguerrero16 - Nov 11, 2024Holt - Nov 13, 2024
Hardworking, motivated and caring - University of BC Personal Profile

3 - Interesting essay but I think that this could be more engaging with some changes. First, I think that starting...

Undergraduateproco101 - Nov 11, 2024sugarcookie - Nov 25, 2024
Why are so many medical assistants and nurses facing burnout? Eng assignment

2 - Reverse the presentation. Give the signs and symptoms of a burn out first, then provide the medical definition....

Writing Feedbackarohr123 - Nov 10, 2024Holt - Nov 12, 2024
Motivation Letter for MSc Human Computer Interaction in Universität Siegen

6 - Maybe you can say "With all aspects and desires stated" instead of "With everything said"...

Lettersmariegold - Nov 10, 2024Edukid2309 - Nov 17, 2024
Masters in Computer Science application Statement of Purpose (SOP)

2 - Since this is published work, you need to provide the issue specifics such as the date of publication,...

Graduaterish210 - Nov 10, 2024Holt - Nov 10, 2024
Argumentative Essay - Social Media is Bad for Youth

3 - @User123kad - begin by acknowledging both positive and negative aspects of social media - use this balance to lead...

Writing FeedbackUser123kad - Nov 10, 2024woodg - Nov 11, 2024
USC Graduate Interactive Media Personal Statement - Why interactive media?

4 - Thank you @Holt @woodg for the feedback! I removed the premed info and rewrote the gaps. Thanks again!...

Graduatepotatotush - Nov 9, 2024potatotush - Nov 25, 2024
University of Toronto Computer Science Supplemental Question

3 - I agree with Holt, you should restructure the essay for more clarity. It comes off a bit as confusing...

Undergraduatewoodg - Nov 9, 2024sarcasticswarley - Nov 24, 2024
Opinions on my masters degree autobiography for CS (Taiwan)

2 - I am considering how well the reviewer will receive this information considering that these are all academic, and thus...

GraduatesentuLLL - Nov 9, 2024Holt - Nov 10, 2024
Structural engineering passion - Personal Statement for Graduate Admission

2 - I do not believe that it is a good idea to mention these two professors in the presentation....

GraduateBrandonDX - Nov 8, 2024Holt - Nov 10, 2024
The Rise of Automation and Its Impact on Job Opportunities for the Working Class

2 - The essay does not feel like it has a beginning. That all too important introduction + thesis statement is...

Research Papersrioasment - Nov 8, 2024Holt - Nov 10, 2024
critically discuss how considering colonialism helps you to deepen your understandings of evolutions

2 - I am not sure about what you are trying to accomplish here. Are you supposed to be doing only...

Research PapersWildXst - Nov 7, 2024Holt - Nov 10, 2024
Most significant challenge: rebuilding my self-esteem after losing a love for a sport - UC prompt

3 - @fififlower373 - begin by describing your initial love for flag football - share the sense of fulfillment it gave...

Undergraduatefififlower373 - Nov 7, 2024woodg - Nov 11, 2024
Motivation Letter for Erasmus Mundus Joint Master Image Processing and Computer Vision AI

2 - Kindly edit this paragraph in particular to not sound like an extended version of your resume. The reviewer...

Lettersdarent - Nov 6, 2024Holt - Nov 6, 2024
Chemical Engineering - Academic objective and long range goal essay

2 - Actually, your response is incorrect in the sense that you speak of your long term goals, but not of...

ScholarshipMichaelllll - Nov 6, 2024Holt - Nov 6, 2024
How I've been a Bridge Builder in High School (250 word limit) NYU Supplement

3 - @gigi_aa - explain your experience on the international debate stage. - emphasize how observations inspired a desire to act...

Undergraduategigi_aa - Nov 5, 2024woodg - Nov 9, 2024
CHEVENING: LEADERSHIP THROUGH EMPOWERMENT

2 - Remove all the references to your internship and college experience. Those paragraphs do not contain actual leadership discussions. The...

ScholarshipAsquare27 - Nov 5, 2024Holt - Nov 5, 2024
Motivation letter for EMJM Image Processing and Computer Vision AI - Review Request

2 - I do not get the vision that you have for pursuing the course which could have resulted in the...

Scholarshipmepawan7 - Nov 5, 2024Holt - Nov 5, 2024
Political landscape of Bosnia and Herzegovina - Chevening career plan

3 - You are writing only on UN women. I recomend you to put numerous goals and arrange them to implementation...

ScholarshipLohnpartner - Nov 4, 2024a_sm - Nov 5, 2024
The Innovators Club - U of T Computer Science Supplemental Question

2 - You cannot use a group setting for this response because the prompt is asking you to respond on an...

Undergraduatewoodg - Nov 4, 2024Holt - Nov 4, 2024
Chevening Networking Essay - Wicked Problems

3 - @Holt Thank you...

Scholarshipryayra - Nov 3, 2024ryayra - Nov 4, 2024
Blue Economy (Product Owner) - Career Plan - Chevening Essay

2 - Delete the last paragraph. That is not part of the career plan. Those are areas of study that you...

Scholarshipessaycheck24 - Nov 3, 2024Holt - Nov 4, 2024
Get into Professional Networking (Product Owner) - Networking - Chevening Essay

2 - There is no reference to professional relationship building skills here. You are speaking of your student experience, but have...

Scholarshipessaycheck24 - Nov 3, 2024Holt - Nov 4, 2024
Chemical Engineering - If you are not awarded the Scholarship, what are your plans?

2 - Do not over reach with your response. Offer an explanation only for the plans as required should you not...

ScholarshipIlovecats365 - Nov 3, 2024Holt - Nov 3, 2024
My Determination and Inspiration for Mathematics in High School (Common App Prompt 1)

3 - What I like about this essay is its simplicity. You are able to convey your love for mathematics in...

Undergraduateessayhelp77 - Nov 3, 2024gigi_aa - Nov 3, 2024
"Unity in Diversity" - How to become a good candidates for GLOBAL UGRAD ESSAY

2 - While your discussion about your growth and development as a community leader is admirable, you have missed out on...

UndergraduateDhani_ja23 - Nov 3, 2024Holt - Nov 3, 2024
The podium in Panama - University of Toronto Computer Science Supplemental Question

2 - This is a good response but it is not an accurate response. The prompt is focused on having you...

Undergraduatewoodg - Nov 3, 2024Holt - Nov 3, 2024
The importance of Preschool Education

2 - One way of improving this paper would be to introduce the importance of pre-school education in a historical context....

Writing FeedbackTICL - Nov 3, 2024Holt - Nov 3, 2024
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