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TripWithCommunity / Tourism - Chevening leadership and influence

3 - Thank you very much for this feedback and I will improve it....

ScholarshipMiranass58 - Sep 22, 2024Miranass58 - Sep 23, 2024
Personal Statement for Master of Science in Anesthesia

3 - I think acronyms like CAA could have been better explained,Since your reviewer might not be a person in the...

Graduateedumanzo - Sep 22, 2024seeeed - Sep 24, 2024
IELTS Task 2: Work for the same organisation all their working life VS different organisation

2 - Do not sensationalize the discussion. There is no supporting evidence for that point of view in the original...

Writing Feedbackmmatmmee - Sep 22, 2024Holt - Sep 23, 2024
Civil consultant - personal statement GKS-U

2 - The information about your name, what it means, how to pronounce it, who named you, their rank in the...

Scholarshiphaidin - Sep 22, 2024Holt - Sep 23, 2024
Is This a Good Motivation Letter ? to Master Program Transport and Geinformation Technology at KTH

2 - Do not approach this as a personal statement. It is also not a professional biography. Both are present in...

Lettersmhmdazmi - Sep 22, 2024Holt - Sep 23, 2024
Technology has made our lives too complicated, the solution is to live a simple life without it

2 - Uh, the essay is lacking 40 words to meet the minimum TOEFL word count. There is a writing minimum...

Writing Feedbackangela odile - Sep 22, 2024Holt - Sep 23, 2024
In some countries, shopping online is replacing shopping at store. Discuss both the pros and cons of

4 - Hello Daves, I have some input on the essay i guess the essay meant to write the pros and...

Writing FeedbackDaves - Sep 22, 2024seeeed - Sep 24, 2024
Motion graphics and animation - sop for ugrad

3 - @Holt yes but its an culture exchange program ....

Undergraduatemaheen07 - Sep 21, 2024maheen07 - Sep 22, 2024
IELTS|The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

2 - You have written a presentation of 321 words. This is not an information presentation that properly represents the task...

Writing Feedbackvantev - Sep 21, 2024Holt - Sep 22, 2024
My GKS-U Personal Statement (Computer Science and Engineering)

2 - I must say that you have a truly unique and interesting background for a GKS applicant. However, this "special"...

Scholarshipkhhnao - Sep 21, 2024Holt - Sep 22, 2024
Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. Why? This is posive or negative?

6 - "Using phone to study with friends through google meet or zoom that make people don't feel alone and increasing...

Writing Feedbackmaryngohuathu - Sep 21, 2024seeeed - Sep 24, 2024
My Biggest Victory - Event in my life that illustrates my personality traits - GKS-U essay to PNU

2 - You are not supposed to present your personal statement in chapters. You are to write a full, compiled, and...

Undergraduateelectrise - Sep 21, 2024Holt - Sep 21, 2024
Mechanical engineering student - Personal statement for the GKS

2 - Since you are applying as an undergraduate for the Mechanical Engineering course, there is no sense in discussing your...

UndergraduateAimanomania - Sep 21, 2024Holt - Sep 21, 2024
Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

5 - "curical part in people' live"-crucial part in people's lives....

Writing FeedbackBui Quang Dung - Sep 21, 2024seeeed - Sep 24, 2024
Learning My Limits (College Essay)

2 - Okay, this is an essay based on self-reflection. Using quotations from Theodore and Franklin Roosevelt will be considered cop-outs...

Undergraduatezbilly06 - Sep 20, 2024Holt - Sep 21, 2024
Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmental

2 - There is no issue of controversy being presented in the original prompt. The examiner will deduct points for...

Writing Feedbackchonhocielts - Sep 20, 2024Holt - Sep 21, 2024
Nowadays some consumers are much less influenced by advertising than in the past. What do you think

2 - One of the main requirements of the task 2 first paragraph is that the writer is expected to present...

Writing Feedbacktrucphuong - Sep 20, 2024Holt - Sep 21, 2024
To become an engineering student - GKStaking the track of University track

2 - You are applying under the university track of the GKS scholarship, making your application process more cut throat than...

UndergraduateHowarderlguitang - Sep 20, 2024Holt - Sep 20, 2024
There is a problem on the road outside your house. Write a letter to your local councillor.

2 - You need to write a longer letter for this task 1 essay. You only have 149 words. Try to...

Writing Feedbacklamphung - Sep 18, 2024Holt - Sep 18, 2024
Finance and Business - UT Austin Transfer essay/Statement of Purpose

3 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback! So to clarify, I should mainly at the start expand on my experiences...

Undergraduatecarlos0524 - Sep 17, 2024carlos0524 - Sep 26, 2024
Perfectly Imperfect - personal statement | International Relations

3 - @Holt Thank you for your advice. I am ready to take your feedback again when I have revised my...

UndergraduateHaiha0205 - Sep 17, 2024Haiha0205 - Sep 18, 2024
Government's interference with human rights

2 - Kindly remember to clearly format your essay presentation based upon the regular expectation of the examiner. Each task 2...

Writing Feedbackdieulinh731008 - Sep 16, 2024Holt - Sep 17, 2024
The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria

4 - your writing task 1 is really good at some points however there are some sentences with poor formation in...

Writing FeedbackHwiiiiihii - Sep 16, 2024Haiha0205 - Sep 23, 2024
God's plan for me - Gks undergraduate personal statement for medicine

2 - Remove the reference to medical television shows as inspiration for your desire to become a doctor. Reviewers prefer that...

ScholarshipOctavia_20 - Sep 15, 2024Holt - Sep 16, 2024
Personal statement for non degree study at Hunter College School of Education

3 - I have no doubt that the non-degree programs at Hunter College will enable me to accomplish my career goals...

Graduatesheriecherie - Sep 15, 2024KelvinG - Sep 16, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Today children spend much time playing computer games and less time on sports.

2 - The last 2 sentences in the first paragraph do not meet the task accuracy requirements of the essay. Since...

Writing FeedbackVu Ha Chi - Sep 15, 2024Holt - Sep 16, 2024
Quality Communication Can Improve Patient-Centered Health Outcomes Among Older Adults

2 - It is not customary for a research paper to begin by immediately presenting researched information in the introductory paragraph....

Research Paperscboykin - Sep 15, 2024Holt - Sep 16, 2024
Requesting Advice on the Flow and Structure of My Essay

2 - It is always a struggle to write essays. Each topic and writing style has a different focus which makes...

EssaysKelvinG - Sep 15, 2024Holt - Sep 16, 2024
People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax

2 - This does not add clarity to your writer's opinion. Since you already gave the correct measured response in...

Writing FeedbackSUNSHINE2k7 - Sep 15, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
Managing the internship program - CHEVENING - LEADERSHIP & INFLUENCE SKILLS

5 - hello, I think you need to highlight your impact on what you contributed when you led the intern...

Scholarshiptrisyafahira - Sep 15, 2024habib_baharuddin - Oct 11, 2024
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