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TU Delft - MSc Transport, Infrastructure, and Logistics Motivation Letter

3 - @Holt hello, thank you very much for the feedback. I'll be sure to revise my essay as per your...

Graduaterhnprks - Mar 23, 2024rhnprks - Mar 30, 2024
Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal

2 - You did a good job in the prompt restatement. It is on point and sticks close to the original....

Writing Feedbackphuonghanguyenth - Mar 28, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Essay about interview in most large companies

3 - @klinh2806 List your views specifically on your selection. Give detailed explanation on why you agree or disagree. Your essay...

Writing Feedbackklinh2806 - Mar 6, 2024Catherine Frank - Mar 28, 2024
SOP for AAS scholarship - I chose Master of Public Health

3 - Your essay is too long, remove some paragraphs of your personal details and experiences and focus only on...

Scholarshipdungkyu - Mar 16, 2024Catherine Frank - Mar 28, 2024
ielts writing task 2: Rich countries often give money to poorer countries

2 - The essay will receive an immediate failing Task Accuracy score because you did not reword/restate/rewrite the topic in your...

Writing Feedbackpthu553 - Mar 28, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Social media has completely changed the way family and friends communicate with each other.

2 - You have not taken the writing time allowance into consideration with this essay presentation. It will be impossible for...

Writing FeedbackTHUY BACH - Mar 18, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries.

3 - it is a great time....

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AAS 2024 - Master of Counter Terrorism and Master of Security and Strategic Studies

3 - I am a police officer, working in the public sector. I did consider the second university and second major....

ScholarshipOliverQueen - Mar 26, 2024OliverQueen - Mar 28, 2024
Engineering, rough draft about engineering

2 - There are instances in the presentation where you could use more concise language. Some of your paragraphs tend to...

Writing FeedbackAprieto - Mar 27, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Transition from psychology to cognitive science Msc SOP Review

2 - You must try to avoid using a template Statement of Purpose, Motivational Letter, Personal Statement, or any other application...

Graduatelofisophie - Mar 26, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Some educationalists argue that non-exam, art-based subjects, such as music, drama, art, and craft..

2 - English essays follow one specific golden rule: All sentences must begin the first word with a capital letter /...

Writing Feedbacktohonganh - Mar 26, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Faculty of Management and Tourism at Hanoi University - MOTIVATION LETTER FOR ERASMUS SCHOLARSHIP

2 - This is not a very effective ML letter for EM. It is more applicable towards a non scholarship based...

LettersHuiMin - Mar 25, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Master in Peace & Conflict Studies - AAS - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?

2 - The backgrounder that you have chosen to present is a stand alone discussion, which does not relate directly to...

ScholarshipCesa123 - Mar 25, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people

2 - The first paragraph cannot meet the maximum preliminary scoring considerations because the writer has not made an effort to...

Writing FeedbackProlevelmax9 - Mar 25, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Research on TikTok's negative effects on Adolescents

2 - Do not open the presentation with a citation. That is the worst thing that you can do in a...

Research PapersAlexNorrish - Mar 23, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 1: Annual Pay of Doctors and Other Workers

2 - An accurate summary overview would include a listing of the 7 countries in the line graph. It would also...

Writing Feedbacksophiemoore62 - Mar 23, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Misclassified cases of sudden infant death syndrome research paper - looking for 3 weaknesses

2 - The main weakness that I see in this paper is your over reliance on in-text citations to complete the...

Research PapersBuchbritt95 - Mar 23, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Research paper on relationship between Antarctic plants and climate change - peer review

2 - There should not be 2 paragraphs for the introduction and thesis statement. That creates a tremendously long, but sometimes...

Research PapersTartrion - Mar 23, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Essay about whether we should remove the non-academic subjects or not - revised required

2 - Kindly remember that the word "I", in reference to oneself, must always be written in uppercase, as a capital...

Writing FeedbackMidu - Mar 22, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
IELTS-CAM 9-TASK 1-ISLAND BEFORE AND AFTER THE CONSTRUCTION OF TOURIST FACILITIES

2 - In the second paragraph, you do not have to say "2 maps". Instead, you should refer to the first...

Writing Feedbacklinhdatielts8 - Mar 21, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
IELTS Task 2, working in large business

2 - Why did you write the response in quotation marks from beginning to end? That is unnecessary in a task...

Writing FeedbackFieldJing - Mar 21, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
[IELTS TASK 2] Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled...

2 - The prompt restatement is incomplete as it does not refer to the basis of the debate regarding legislating recycling...

Writing Feedbacksnackara - Mar 21, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Is it wiser for a first-time buyer to opt for a larger or smaller home??

2 - Being a research proposal, there should be a series of sources being indicated in the presentation to aid in...

Writing Feedbackmsodek1 - Mar 20, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
The Dark Legacy of Christopher Columbus: Exploitation, Violence, and Cultural Devastation

2 - Correct this to indicate that he is seen as a stain on the Taino community. He is not...

Research Papersjheyg17 - Mar 20, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Large companies use sports events to promote their products.Some people think it has a negative...

2 - Your opinion is not based upon the correct premise. The question you have to answer is "Some people think...

Writing FeedbackTranMinhKhoi - Mar 19, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
An essay: Different ways of studying

2 - The writing guide has asked you to mention the effects of studying as a group vs. individual study time....

Writing Feedbackwannapassenglish - Mar 19, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE for EPFL Management, Technology, and Entrepreneurship

2 - Based upon what evidence? What you make claims like these, you must back it up with numerical data...

Graduatenetkeojas - Mar 19, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Are libraries necessary? IELTS 2: OPINION ESSAY

2 - The prompt restatement is only partially correct. It deviated from the original discussion when it said "there are no...

Writing FeedbackEmmadafish - Mar 18, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Some people think that children perform better in a single-sex school

3 - Maybe you might add more words such as futhemore, moreover, due to the fact that, considering the fact that...

Writing Feedbackanniejshsjh - Mar 5, 2024Leila321 - Mar 25, 2024
SOP for MSc Computer Science EPFL

2 - A reviewer is usually more impressed by the way that the applicant manages to combine undergraduate studies and its...

GraduatetealCrayon98 - Mar 23, 2024Holt - Mar 24, 2024
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