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Free theme narrative story (THE RED JUICE)

2 - A narrative story is usually written from a personal perspective and uses the first person pronoun for the most...

Writing FeedbackEdukid2309 - Nov 17, 2024Holt - Nov 17, 2024
Personal Statement Review : Masters in Accounting and Finance

2 - These references to childhood influences should be used only for college Accounting major applications. You must go...

Graduatehelloitisme - Nov 16, 2024Holt - Nov 17, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems. What are those problems?

2 - This is your personal opinion as the writer of the opinion paper. Therefore, it cannot be mixed into...

Writing FeedbackNaomie - Nov 16, 2024Holt - Nov 17, 2024
Physical Education should remain in schools

2 - Since you are dabbling in the history of Physical Education, you should go to the start of the...

Writing Feedbackmartinezalex1649 - Nov 16, 2024Holt - Nov 17, 2024
Motivation Letter for MSc Human Computer Interaction in Universität Siegen

6 - Maybe you can say "With all aspects and desires stated" instead of "With everything said"...

Lettersmariegold - Nov 10, 2024Edukid2309 - Nov 17, 2024
SOP review for masters in data science at CMU

2 - This is actually a negative statement in the eyes of the reviewer. This is not something you would...

Graduateyeshwanthg - Nov 15, 2024Holt - Nov 15, 2024
Statement of Purpose - UCSD - Cognitive Science PhD Application

2 - This does not matter. What matters to them will be the mirroring of your research with the professors....

Graduatetts2024 - Nov 15, 2024Holt - Nov 15, 2024
My journey through athletics - UBC - Tell us about who you are

2 - The students who respond to this prompt always make this common mistake. They always write from their personal perspective...

UndergraduateBenjiT12 - Nov 14, 2024Holt - Nov 15, 2024
Statement of Purpose - MS in Computer Science at EPFL

2 - The introduction does not set the stage for your interest in Ms Computer Science. You need to revise the...

Graduateshades123 - Nov 14, 2024Holt - Nov 14, 2024
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE – M.S. SAFETY ENGINEERING, XXX UNIVERSITY

2 - It will catch the reveiwer's attention better if you open with a narrative about a similar catastrophe that...

Graduateclarence94 - Nov 14, 2024Holt - Nov 14, 2024
ENG 102 - Fast Fashion Should Be Regulated

2 - Since this is supposed to be a research paper, it is important that you separate yourself as the...

Writing Feedbackacalado - Nov 14, 2024Holt - Nov 14, 2024
AI in language learning and literature writing - Personal Statement for CLMC Erasmus Program

2 - This should go to the very top of the discussion. This is your personal motivation for studying the...

ScholarshipAshiaBibi - Nov 13, 2024Holt - Nov 14, 2024
SOP for Automatic Control Engineering at Polimi

2 - You keep mentioning goals that the university aligns with on a personal basis, yet you never mention what these...

Graduateryayra - Nov 12, 2024Holt - Nov 13, 2024
PhD Microbiology SOP University of Wisconsin

2 - Do not go so far back into your history. This is a statement of purpose. Focus on your...

GraduateEola - Nov 12, 2024Holt - Nov 13, 2024
Writing task 1: The chart below shows the percentage of different types of household waste

2 - Kindly rewrite this practice test to achieve the proper maximum word count for the task 1 essay. This should...

Writing Feedbackdller - Nov 11, 2024Holt - Nov 13, 2024
Combating Bullying in Schools

2 - The content of this section is purely hypothetical. There needs to be a sense of how this type...

Research Papersaguerrero16 - Nov 11, 2024Holt - Nov 13, 2024
Why are so many medical assistants and nurses facing burnout? Eng assignment

2 - Reverse the presentation. Give the signs and symptoms of a burn out first, then provide the medical definition....

Writing Feedbackarohr123 - Nov 10, 2024Holt - Nov 12, 2024
Argumentative Essay - Social Media is Bad for Youth

3 - @User123kad - begin by acknowledging both positive and negative aspects of social media - use this balance to lead...

Writing FeedbackUser123kad - Nov 10, 2024woodg - Nov 11, 2024
Most significant challenge: rebuilding my self-esteem after losing a love for a sport - UC prompt

3 - @fififlower373 - begin by describing your initial love for flag football - share the sense of fulfillment it gave...

Undergraduatefififlower373 - Nov 7, 2024woodg - Nov 11, 2024
Masters in Computer Science application Statement of Purpose (SOP)

2 - Since this is published work, you need to provide the issue specifics such as the date of publication,...

Graduaterish210 - Nov 10, 2024Holt - Nov 10, 2024
Opinions on my masters degree autobiography for CS (Taiwan)

2 - I am considering how well the reviewer will receive this information considering that these are all academic, and thus...

GraduatesentuLLL - Nov 9, 2024Holt - Nov 10, 2024
Structural engineering passion - Personal Statement for Graduate Admission

2 - I do not believe that it is a good idea to mention these two professors in the presentation....

GraduateBrandonDX - Nov 8, 2024Holt - Nov 10, 2024
The Rise of Automation and Its Impact on Job Opportunities for the Working Class

2 - The essay does not feel like it has a beginning. That all too important introduction + thesis statement is...

Research Papersrioasment - Nov 8, 2024Holt - Nov 10, 2024
critically discuss how considering colonialism helps you to deepen your understandings of evolutions

2 - I am not sure about what you are trying to accomplish here. Are you supposed to be doing only...

Research PapersWildXst - Nov 7, 2024Holt - Nov 10, 2024
How I've been a Bridge Builder in High School (250 word limit) NYU Supplement

3 - @gigi_aa - explain your experience on the international debate stage. - emphasize how observations inspired a desire to act...

Undergraduategigi_aa - Nov 5, 2024woodg - Nov 9, 2024
Motivation Letter for Erasmus Mundus Joint Master Image Processing and Computer Vision AI

2 - Kindly edit this paragraph in particular to not sound like an extended version of your resume. The reviewer...

Lettersdarent - Nov 6, 2024Holt - Nov 6, 2024
Chemical Engineering - Academic objective and long range goal essay

2 - Actually, your response is incorrect in the sense that you speak of your long term goals, but not of...

ScholarshipMichaelllll - Nov 6, 2024Holt - Nov 6, 2024
Political landscape of Bosnia and Herzegovina - Chevening career plan

3 - You are writing only on UN women. I recomend you to put numerous goals and arrange them to implementation...

ScholarshipLohnpartner - Nov 4, 2024a_sm - Nov 5, 2024
CHEVENING: LEADERSHIP THROUGH EMPOWERMENT

2 - Remove all the references to your internship and college experience. Those paragraphs do not contain actual leadership discussions. The...

ScholarshipAsquare27 - Nov 5, 2024Holt - Nov 5, 2024
Motivation letter for EMJM Image Processing and Computer Vision AI - Review Request

2 - I do not get the vision that you have for pursuing the course which could have resulted in the...

Scholarshipmepawan7 - Nov 5, 2024Holt - Nov 5, 2024
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