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Public Admin - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? AUSTRALIAN AWARDS ESSAY

2 - You need to improve your academic choices discussion. Provide more details beyond the cut and paste information from the...

ScholarshipMaxie0326 - Feb 1, 2025Holt - Feb 2, 2025
I am a 17-year-old girl trying to figure the world out as she goes - common app essay

2 - Are you by any chance writing about a topic of your own creation? That is the only reason I...

Undergraduatethelatecomer - Jan 31, 2025Holt - Jan 31, 2025
The traditions and customs relating to the food we eat and the way we eat are changing.

2 - You have tried to put together an intelligent sounding essay which failed to deliver. While you chose to use...

Writing Feedbackhienphuongxinh - Jan 29, 2025Holt - Jan 30, 2025
Guarding Against Online Shopping Scams

2 - These are considered phrase fillers. These do not help to move your paragraph forward. There is no...

Writing FeedbackPadin - Jan 26, 2025Holt - Jan 26, 2025
The graph gives information about employment categories of a country in 2003 and 2013.

2 - You must do a correct image identification in the summary overview to achieve maximum scoring consideration for that section....

Writing Feedbackisoldelin - Jan 26, 2025Holt - Jan 26, 2025
CAM 19: The proportion of the urbanites in 4 selected Asian countries

2 - Remember that you have a 29 minute writing time limit for this analytical report essay. Therefore, the advised length...

Writing Feedbackcinnamonanh - Jan 22, 2025Holt - Jan 22, 2025
Epidemiology and politics - Summer science program application Highschool

2 - The response is very technical and professional. You have developed a good summary of the information required within a...

Undergraduateaneetsandhu - Jan 21, 2025Holt - Jan 22, 2025
Fossil fuels are killing our planet - ENG 102 MLA format

2 - I think it would be best not to assume that the reader is automatically familiar with the effects of...

Research PapersDevon1542 - Jan 21, 2025Holt - Jan 21, 2025
A desire to Drive Meaningful Impact & Change in Developing nations (Application for QTEM Exchange)

3 - @Holt Okay thankyou for the information. Could you also give me your opinion about the essay otherwise? Is there...

Scholarshiplamiasalim - Jan 18, 2025lamiasalim - Jan 19, 2025
Breaking The Chain - An essay on the opioid epidemic and what we can do to fix it

2 - I hope that you have presented the draft of the essay for our review. This is nowhere near the...

Writing Feedbackrac2209 - Jan 19, 2025Holt - Jan 19, 2025
The Immoral Implications of Animal Testing and its Necessity in the Advancement of Medicine

2 - I am not sure what paper format you are supposed to be using for this paper. The way that...

Research Papersprincess23 - Jan 18, 2025Holt - Jan 19, 2025
Some people believe that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city.

2 - This is an over discussed essay that provides too many words to actually accomplish within 40 minutes. The essay...

Writing Feedbackquan2222 - Jan 18, 2025Holt - Jan 19, 2025
Peer review needed. Research paper on school shootings

2 - While it was nice to read the story that you narrated at the beginning, it did not establish the...

Research PapersDacgol - Jan 17, 2025Holt - Jan 18, 2025
GKS-G Civil Engineering major, PERSONAL STATEMENT

3 - @Lilmonsta The essay has too many personalizations and too less qualifications. Why are you applying to the program of...

ScholarshipLilmonsta - Jan 17, 2025lamiasalim - Jan 17, 2025
I love the English language - summer course essay

3 - I loved the personalizaton and character that you brought out through this essay, however I feel the starting and...

Writing Feedbackkingkitten100 - Jan 17, 2025lamiasalim - Jan 17, 2025
Motivation Letter- ERASMUS MUNDUS SCHOLARSHIP FOR MATHS DISC JOINT MASTERS PROGRAMME.

3 - Okay thank you for your feedback! I have worked on my motivation letter. I revised it taking into consideration...

LettersOsatoOsazuwa - Jan 14, 2025OsatoOsazuwa - Jan 14, 2025
how to overcome stress with NLP method. an essay for stipendium hungaricum

3 - This essay doesn't show your personal motivation and academic achievements as to why you deserve such scholarship to study...

Scholarshipgoingtocollagesn - Jan 12, 2025OsatoOsazuwa - Jan 14, 2025
Becoming a doctor - STIPENDIUM HUNGARICUM MOTIVATION LETTER

4 - Hi Paul, Whilst this is good, you also need to talk about your academic achievements. This letter mainly...

LettersSwagata Paul - Dec 31, 2024OsatoOsazuwa - Jan 14, 2025
The Business Analytics Program - Why is MSBA program the next logical step for you?

2 - The information you have presented for your application is strong in terms of content but tends to be bogged...

Graduateajain2007 - Jan 13, 2025Holt - Jan 14, 2025
Gap in progression Common App prompt (250 words)

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback! Besides that, is the content fine?...

Writing Feedbacktrippletrouble12 - Jan 13, 2025trippletrouble12 - Jan 13, 2025
Paraguay - Global Markets and Local Creativities

2 - Your credentials are very strong. The fact that you have work experience with Erasmus Mundus definitely adds a significant...

Scholarshipadrianaman - Jan 10, 2025Holt - Jan 12, 2025
Little Oceans - UWC essay

2 - Reviewers actually prefer that the applicants write from a point of view that shows a personal insight. So writing...

ScholarshipHarryweg - Jan 10, 2025Holt - Jan 12, 2025
Social, environmental, and economic changes - Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum

2 - Your passion and motivation should be one that encourages you to think outside of the box. Rather than relying...

Scholarshiprimbi8 - Jan 10, 2025Holt - Jan 12, 2025
Common App Essay about Life Challenges&Backpacking

2 - Backpacking does not have anything to do with the life challenges you faced. Neither does it provide the actual...

Undergraduatewcherau25 - Jan 9, 2025Holt - Jan 10, 2025
Avid Evil - UWC application

3 - I couldn't work out the diversity angle but how about this Essay : At summer camp, I was...

ScholarshipObed199 - Jan 9, 2025Obed199 - Jan 10, 2025
Determination and effort - Personal Statement Essay/ GKS-U scholarship

2 - The instructions for writing this essay indicate that you must use either full Hangul or full English for...

UndergraduateGadhalag - Jan 9, 2025Holt - Jan 10, 2025
The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008.

2 - Refrain from mentioning the position of the image on the page. It is advisable not to do so because...

Writing Feedbackminhtannguyen - Jan 9, 2025Holt - Jan 10, 2025
a motivation letter for applying master degree at university being a data analyst

2 - The information provided in the motivation letter is not as strong as it could be. It is in fact,...

Lettersdsuf - Jan 8, 2025Holt - Jan 9, 2025
My Family - What is important to you? And why? UBC Application

2 - Your response is unique in the sense that the importance of family to you is based upon a tragedy,...

UndergraduateHunchie - Jan 7, 2025Holt - Jan 7, 2025
airfare reducing, good or not?

2 - There is no way that air fare prices are on the wane. This statement implies that the prices...

Writing Feedbackgottogoya - Jan 7, 2025Holt - Jan 7, 2025
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