Writing Feedback / The Graduation Day... (the best day of my life) [7]

write about the best day in your life.

It such a regular day, but it has a different taste. You see people crying or laughing
on this day. Actually, that is what is happening in Jordan during the Graduation Day,
which we call the Result Day.

The Result Day is when the government announces the names of students who have
passed the standardized test, by posting them on the bulletin board of each school or
putting them on the websites.

In the summer of 2007, I was anxious to see my name among those who passed.
The night before that day, I hadn't slept well. I was worried a lot about the results.
Around 7 o'clock in the morning, I heard some fireworks, so I realized that the results
had been announced. I jumped from my bed and headed to the school without even
washing my face. After I reached it, the students were gathering at the bulletin board
looking up their names. I couldn't wait anymore, so I jumped over them to reach the
board and I saw my name. At that moment, I was overjoyed and my parents were too.

I really thank them for every thing they have done for me. I will never forget that
day when I saw my father's tears of happiness rolling on his cheeks. That day was the
best day in my life.

Poetry / Poem about Nothing.... [10]

please tell me your opinion a about this one, and If you have time please go to Poetry Writing section and check my poem.

Nothing....

Guys come back do not believe them...
Guys come back there is n othing...
Guys, because no thing you are there....
Guys not hing has noth ing to do with anything, so just come back, nothi ng is there...
Guys it was a joke when I read it I understood nothin g because there was nothing ...
Bilal Š

Poetry / where is the..? [7]

Where is?

Where is the justice?

Where is the peace?

Where is the freedom?

I went everywhere and looked for those
It took me years and years,
I found nothing.
I have no idea where those have gone….
Why do they want to keep them away from my people?
I do not know!
Who knows?!!
I went back to my country with two black bags full of money!!!!

Everybody was waiting for me,
They wanted me to say something,
I could not!!!!
I raised the two black bags
In that moment, every one knew what happened...
While all of them were shouting at me.
A little child stood and held up a stone in his hand and shouted
This is the justice
This is the peace
This is the way to the happiness.... BILAL

Undergraduate / The locket. Last words my sister said to me at the airport [4]

The Locket...

"Take it Bilal. It's yours". Those were the last words my sister said to me at the airport. It was a small bag; I didn't know what was inside it. She just told me to open it in "Amreka". When I was in the airplane, I was curious what was inside the small bag, Then I said, "I'll wait till I reach America".

After the airplane landed, I decided to open the little bag , When I opened it, I saw a letter and a little gold thing. First, I read the letter. It said, "This may help you to get the directions if you get lost", then I picked up the little gold thing. It was a locket, when I opened it, I saw a compass on one side and a picture of my mother on the other side. I held it to my chest and cried for a moment. On that day when I went to sleep, I put it under my pillow, and since that day I couldn't sleep without the locket. This locket means a lot to me. It's a gift from my sister. Furthermore, it contains my mother's picture; when I face any obstacle, I look at my mother's picture and imagine her in this situation, what she would do and I do the same. This locket is always in my pocket, also it has its place in my heart.

Undergraduate / "What should I do to be a happy employee?" [4]

please may check my essay, any criticize would be welcome

what should you do to be a happy employee?
write an essay about

"What should I do to be a happy employee?" Many students before they graduate from college, start asking their self this question. In my opinion this is too late, because they should ask themselves this question before they even start in their college. They should study the major, that they like and feel comfortable with and not to study what their parents want them to do. Studying what you like is the most important factor in making you a happy employee.

You should study what you feel comfortable with and what you like, not what your parents like. Look what happened with my cousin, who graduated last year, his career is computer engineering. Each time I meet him; he starts telling me about his job and says ,"I wish I studied media". I can tell that he is not happy at all not because of the salary, but because he did not want to study this major from the beginning, but the thing is his parents kept telling him that," you will make a lot money and the computer market is very good these days".

The money is very important too, when you choose your major, you should know how much money you will make. Let's say that you choose to be a teacher for an elementary school, so do not expect that you will make a hundred thousand a year, but if you choose computer engineering you will make it. Sometimes it depends on your responsibility, like me, I have two family one here and the other is back home. Therefore, I should study something that I will earn a lot of money to cover my expenses.

You must know the location; you will work in, in the future. Some people do not like any thing that has something to do with crowd or traffic, so those people will be unhappy and frustrated, if they work downtown. Also you have to make sure that your health will not be affected from the location that you work in. Like if you have a breath problem, you should not work in body shop.

So you have to be careful when you choose your major, because it will determine your future career and if you'll be happy in you job or not. Take your time thinking about your future and your job; you may ask for some advices form your parents and your advisor, but in the end it is your future not theirs.