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Dec 23, 2014
Undergraduate / You are not here fundamentally for the purpose of completing degree requirements - Why Penn College? [17]
The essay is effective in responding to the prompt to a certain degree. While you clearly state how the university departments and other offerings can help you achieve your goals, the reason that these programs are relevant to your career objectives is little developed. When you mention a program, or place, as in the case of the center, you should successfully explain why participation in such modes of learning shall be beneficial to your career in the long run. For example, will the training at the center result in your preparing for work at a government organization? You need to create a connection between the academics and your professional career. Stating how these offerings directly connect with your previous training, internships, or academic foundation will result in explaining how your experience ties in with your desire to become a student at this university. By responding in such a manner, you will be able to successfully present some ideas as to how the offering of Penn directly relate to your career objectives as well.
The essay is effective in responding to the prompt to a certain degree. While you clearly state how the university departments and other offerings can help you achieve your goals, the reason that these programs are relevant to your career objectives is little developed. When you mention a program, or place, as in the case of the center, you should successfully explain why participation in such modes of learning shall be beneficial to your career in the long run. For example, will the training at the center result in your preparing for work at a government organization? You need to create a connection between the academics and your professional career. Stating how these offerings directly connect with your previous training, internships, or academic foundation will result in explaining how your experience ties in with your desire to become a student at this university. By responding in such a manner, you will be able to successfully present some ideas as to how the offering of Penn directly relate to your career objectives as well.