Writing Feedback / INTERNET: The Drawback and Vantage [2]

Along with the development of information technology, world society can easily access a huge amount of information on internet. Yet, some people cannot use the internet wisely. Therefore, there are many advantages that we can get from the internet as well as access to information of any topic that we need, availability of online shops and other services, and by using email or social media, we can keep in touch with friends or relative.

The internet has a great impact to mankind because it is user-friendly and all we need about the information is in one place. Nowadays, the society can access almost any subject regarding to their need, but most of the websites on internet contain offending content that is not good for some folk. A side from that, there are also several websites with vicious or inappropriate images, and because there are so many websites on the internet, it is hard to find out a reliable information.

At last, even the internet has negative impact, there are vast number of benefits that we can get if we use the internet intelligently and appropriately. We can improve our skill or doing self-study based on our needs and interests.

Writing Feedback / HOW CRUCIAL IS ENGLISH IN YOUR LIFE? [3]

Other languages may disappear, if one language is dominant. That statement shows, there are some people disagree with English as an international language. Yet, these days English is widely used around the world, is becoming a global second language, and most important textbooks or journals are published in English.

Considerable number of English native speakers make it become popular in the world and it is growing rapidly. In the fact, English has huge number of vocabularies compare to other languages and is the oldest language. A side from that, English well-known as a global second language because it can unite the countries in the world. Most electronic devices, websites, business, and advertisements are use English. Another reason is England as a source of English native speaker have a wide range of former colonies make it broadly spoken and many important journals and textbooks are published in English.

Nowadays, the languages are not major barrier for some people to communicate to each other with different culture or origin. Due to current technological developments enables people to use some application that can translate a word or sentences to other languages. Yet, it is important to learn English as a second language deeply, because English is remaining the international language during our lifetime.

Writing Feedback / TECHNOLOGY HAS CHANGE THE WAY OF WORK [2]

How will technology affect to the work today? Since the technology had invented, it totally changes the way of people work. Many merits people got from it, but there are few people cannot use the power of technology, especially the internet; internet, fax, and mobile phone technologies have revolutionized working life. It can also connect workers from different countries which is save time and money.

The uses of internet, fax, and mobile phone makes human being broaden their knowledge without limit. They can express their thought, share anything or just say hello with relatives or their fellow in another place without worrying about the distance. The technology development has had a great impact on our lives and had changed the way of people work. This change remodel the entire of job fields fundamentally. The people especially workers had felt those advantages as well as they can work or manage some duties and interact to the co-workers from their home as long as they have internet access or mobile phone. Aside from those benefits, the new technology had made people work efficiently by saving time, money and energy. So, they can allocate their irreplaceable time for relatives.

All things considered to the advantages of technology. For people, especially workers who can use the technology to support their work will feel a huge benefit. They are no longer feel like a robot that are limited by time and place.

Writing Feedback / WHY SHOULD WE TALK TO STRANGERS? [3]

Most of people in the world conveyed strangers as unsafe person that might be avoided. On TED Talks, Kio Stark shared her experience in facing strangers. Her obsessing to the strangers made her documenting her experience for 7 years. She found that there was unforeseen enjoyment when shared a moment which has emotional relation. What she found has broken the stereotype of strangers are dangerous by default. As she stated "not every stranger on the street has the best intentions. It is good to be friendly, and it is good to learn when not to be, but none of that means we have to be afraid". Therefore, we will get vast advantages of using our sense rather than our fears. One of them is free us to think about it and start to approach the strangers without worrying about their gender, their skin color, young or adult, friend or not, and start talk to them and learn about them. it is mean that we throw away our mind to the perception of strangers as an individual. Aside from that, by using our sense there is an affection with who we talk to. Sociologist called this "fleeting affection". So, it was short emotional experience for every person and priceless. She also said that some researcher stated people convenient when they talk about their life to the stranger which have better understanding about their feelings.

Writing Feedback / PUTTING WORMS TO WORK TO HELP YOUR GARDEN [3]

Earthworms, a disgusting creature for some people, help gardeners & farmers to turn their crops become better by making compost and put it on soil. You are able to make your own compost from food residue with or without worms. Yet, it is better to put worms especially red worms well-known as red wigglers. Kim Gabel from the University of Florida states "The red wigglers are the best varieties for doing it because they are more of a surface feeder". A container is needed to put the waste food and the worms; and you should make a holes on the composing bin, so it could get some air. Kim Gabel said "the worms do breathe. So that is a very important factor. They also like to be in the dark". Therefore, make sure to keep the bin dark. Aside from keeping it in the dark, the worms prefer a moderate temperature by putting your bin indoor. To prevent unpleasant smell, you can do limitation to the amount of food that you put on it. As you composting with worms, remember to put something soft like sheet, control the moisture not too wet by not adding to much water on it. In period six-month your compost can be used.