Writing Feedback / Should doctors either be engaged in more profitable activities or health-oriented [3]

Nowadays doctors can become very rich. Maybe they should not focus on profitable activities such as plastic surgery or be looking after rich patients and concentrate more on patients health, no matter how rich they are?

curing patients without charging money?

Whether it is reasonable doctor engage with a variety of profitable tasks when a doctor become wealthy. While someone argues that it is absolutely absurd a wealthy doctor is likely to be involved in money-driven activities instead of focusing on patients' health, I personally believe that wealthy doctors are doing the most right stuff.

Firstly, most doctors like ordinary people are eager to be wealthier than before, while, few others prefer to take good care of ordinary people, they are rich though. In most cases, world class great leap in the medical industry are achieved by wealthy scientists or doctors. And it is definitely supported by large amounts of funds which need to engage doctors with profitable activities. In other words, the doctors who concentrate on patients' health hardly contributing largely to human beings as they don't have enough funds to support their study.

The second point is it is the doctors' freedom to choose their activities, only if they obey doctors' ethic. Like us, a doctor can perform well only if they are engaged in their preferred activities. And pursuing freedom of wealth are dreams of most ordinary people, including doctors, which motives doctors to do better and better in their area to a certain extent. On the other hands, once they achieve their financial goals, they would, from the bottom of their heart, be willing to help others. They then concentrate more on patients' health, instead of pursuing money.

To put everything in a nutshell, pursuing financial freedom is a doctor as a human being normal desire. With this pursuit, a doctor can contribute society to the fullest extent by either breaking existing medical limits or truly focus on patients' health when they are free of finance.

Writing Feedback / Two types of solution of solving poor. [3]

Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education?

Poverty on the planet earth

Poor has always been a problem existing on the planet. While some people argue that it is a good way of handling this issue that rich country should share their belongings with the poor nation, I disagree with this proposal and believe instead that it is up to governments of rural countries to take care of their natives.

Today, so many international charities over the world are legally running in order to eliminate this worrisome issue, the achievements are nevertheless small. In other words, even though thousands of global volunteers are engaged with providing food, teaching poor children, and even building infrastructures in the local every year, the lives of poor people are still not enhanced significantly. It is thus not only an unreasonable way of tackling this issue, it is also wrong as it ignores the root causes of this matter. Rather, governments should be accused in this matter.

Indeed, a government is responsible for improving the life qualities of its citizen. Its existence is to ensure a country can thrive. On other words, a government should not as a master of a nation, but instead being a housekeeper of its citizens. It must be working nicely in a country's infrastructure and services while its master citizen is busy doing productive thing so that the master and housekeeper can both enjoy their own home while in unproductive times. Not only should a government act as a housekeeper, they should also act as a guard. It hence can protect its citizen from offending.

In conclusion, wealthy sharing has a minor positive effect on enhancing poor nations' economy. As government is the root cause of this problem. Government should take all responsibilities to make its country prosperous. It is the key factor in the advancement of a country.

Letters / Provide College Cafeteria with suggestions [2]

You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter:

• explain what you like bout the cafeteria
• say what is wrong
• suggest how it could be improved
Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam
You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Pointing out good and weak points of a college lunchroom

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student who regularly comes to your cafeteria for lunch. I am writing to you for providing some suggestions that I think would benefit your profits.

At first, I would like to admit the several advantages of your dining place. Firstly, the Seaview hanging on the wall definitely makes your place felt spacious and attractive. Secondly, the gentle and slight music absolutely keeps us a good mood having meals.

Although the above advantages exist in your place, some disadvantages are urgently expected to be enhanced. First of all, as you know, we are all students who can not afford the expensive dishes. However, the price of the meals hikes in recent months. I hope you can keep the price stay low. Moreover, there is always only one queue for meals, it is very often that we spend about twenty minutes queuing for meals, which really takes us so much time before we proceed the classes happened in the afternoon.

Please give me a prompt reply at your most convenience. I am looking forward to your response.
Yours faithfully,
Peter Williams.

Letters / Write a letter to a company for information about voluntary work in a developing country. [2]

You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:

Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.
State what your skills and experience are.
Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.
Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam. You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

looking for a chance to work in China

Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm writing to you for some information about a trip, in which we are expected to work unpaid as a volunteer in a developing country, organized by your company.

I've started to become interested in Chinese culture since my age of 10, influenced by my cousins. Back then, they used to inform me plenty of experiences they've had in China, such as food, history, language and so forth. I've heard that the internet has been becoming prosperous in China in recent years. Hence, I started my four-year university life 6 years ago specialized in Software Engineering. I joined my current company as a technical worker after I graduated. During these two years of working, I've learned so much on skills and Chinese. As some colleges are original from China.

Finally, I hope you can give me a chance to work in China for at least three years so that I have enough time to get to know Chinese people, long history, culture, etc.

Hopefully, you can respond to me at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Peter

Letters / A letter to administration officer about the problem with my dormitory [2]

a grumble about littering just by the home entrance

Dear Madam or Sir,
I am writing to you to inform you a problem I have encountered lately in my dormitory. It's been 3 months since I moved into your building. At first, I feel so lucky for renting the value of money room. Nevertheless, my good mood only lasts around 1 month regarding this. As this problem has been continuous bothering me in recent days.

It's probably because my room is located on the first level and so close to the staircase. Every morning when I open my door, I have to be facing a totally strange package of trash in front of my door. At the first stage, I tried to handle it by sticking a note to my door which says: "Please don't put your trash package in front of my door. Could you please take your trash out to trash can". However, it didn't stop the situation from happening.

Hopefully, you can help me to fix the above situation as soon as possible. Furthermore, could you please respond me at your earliest convenience.
Thanks,
Yours sincerely,
Peter Williams.

Letters / Negative experience due to the bad service and food. Writing a complaint letter to restaurant owner [2]

criticism of a restaurant maintenance

Dear Sir/Madam,
You are receiving this complaint letter from a customer who was in your restaurant last week on Feb 15th. Back then, I and my girlfriend visited your restaurant to celebrate my girlfriend's birthday. Unfortunately, we had a negative experience due to the bad service and food.

My girlfriend and I arrived your restaurant at around 5:30 pm. At first, we were in high spirits. However, it took the waiter about 5 minutes to realize we were waiting to be seated, even though the restaurant was nearly empty back then. Then, it took him an additional ten minutes to get our menu.

It took about 10 minutes that our ordered food was served on the table. In the first place, as my girlfriend and I were ready to start to enjoy our fancy dinner, the first bite of steak makes us feeling not to bite anymore. As it is so salty. We were then requesting for another not salty steak, however, we were told that we need to pay extra for it.

I hope you can give us a swift response regarding the above situation.
Thanks and best regards.