ershad193
Sep 1, 2010
Graduate / writing layers of software over Video/Image decoders, SOP for M.S in computer science [7]
When I was a kid I was curious about how ants followed a path without getting lost.
Except the word "ant" I can't see how your childhood experience relates to whatever you have written afterward.
...it was only after this eventdidthat my desire to explore greater...
It would be better if you add a phrase or two on why you liked those courses.
overall first class along with a campus placement at Infosys Technologies
I won't be able todo work on technology of my liking in a service based company.
^^Avoid contractions.
So instead I joined a start-up (a hyphen is needed) where along with ("along with" are two words)with working on small projects
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When I was a kid I was curious about how ants followed a path without getting lost.
It was during my Undergraduate final year project when I came across this interesting 'Ant colony algorithm' I realized that, there exists highly creative new technological design
Except the word "ant" I can't see how your childhood experience relates to whatever you have written afterward.
...it was only after this event
During my bachelors, the courses which held my interest the most were Design and Analysis of Algorithms, Compiler construction, and Operating Systems .
It would be better if you add a phrase or two on why you liked those courses.
overall first class along with a campus placement at Infosys Technologies
I won't be able to
^^Avoid contractions.
So instead I joined a start-up (a hyphen is needed) where along with ("along with" are two words)
I prepared for GRE alongwith my tight work schedule and without taking any extra preparatory leaves.
This is not a very impressive thing to say.