Writing Feedback / Knowledge is more significant. Experience refers to a direct contact, often comes after a long time. [3]

It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?

I agree with this statement that "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." However, many people, especially a few educated people do not admit this declaration. In this regard, I argue that knowledge which obtains from experience could be more important because an experience refers to a direct contact, often comes after a long time, and it could be more confident.

Mainly, people through a direct contact are able to gain an effective experience in their lives. Indeed, people get experienced by the presence and observe their environment, whereas studying does not display everything. Also, people acquire experience by full of their energy and feeling, so they would be able to find out everything, while is not be possible to get everything by studying. In addition, people do not forget any details as to any events or occurrences, but they may forget something by studying.

Moreover, experience comes after a long period. Indeed, people attempt to get an experience that may take a long time. Whereas people who just study to gain knowledge might lose some pieces of their knowledge because they do not endeavor for getting information and data. Also, people meet difficulties and problems for obtaining experience, and these difficulties bring many positive advantages for people to learn and increase their knowledge, while there is no drudgery in the way of studying some books or magazines. For example, students must write tens of papers and essays to become a knowledgeable and experienced person in their major.

Last but not least, people believe their experience as a real fact, so they are more confident about it rather than their studies. Indeed, people touch many different situations, and gain some experiences. Students, for instance, know how to study for getting a good score after plenty of exams. Many events have been repeated during people's lives that bring assurance for them. For example, students take a deep breath and try to relax, when they give a speech because they perceive some benefits of this action.

To sum up, gaining knowledge through experience has several positive advantages, which could be more important than through study, such as a direct contact of people, passing a long time that exhibit the facts are serious, and the people's confidence about their achievements. That is why knowledge gained from experience is more significant rather than through study.

Writing Feedback / Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are not. [4]

Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some people like movies which are serious, but others prefer some ones, which are amusing and entertaining. In this regard, I argue that serious movies have several positive advantages that I would rather watch them. These movies are preferable because they improve our knowledge, increase our skills, and they are entertaining.

Mainly, almost all serious movies develop our knowledge. Indeed, people by watching instructive movies could change their lives. For example, they learn how train their children. Also, people could improve their behavior in their society or community with others. Thus, people would feel tranquility and quietness due to developing their knowledge, and getting more information and data about a better life-style.

Moreover, people are able to progress in their skills. Indeed, people are capable of increasing their experience through watching movies, which transfer experience of others, such as authors, director, and so on. People may find a better job, or doing their works better because the new view which comes from those movies brings them new aptitudes. For example, people learn how to keep doing serious tasks in their workplace. In addition, people by learning new life's skills are able to change their lives. Students, for example, learn that the actor or actress in the movie does his assignments in the morning, and he or she studies hard all the day.

Last but not least, these kinds of movies are entertaining and amusing as well. People could watch movies on the TV or in the cinema as a way of having fun with their family or friends. Also, many people enjoy watching serious movies because they must think for understanding movies' purposes. For instance, people see a movie which is a comic one; nevertheless, this movie lies among serious movies, and people get pleasure when their watch it beside their family or friends.

To sum up, I prefer serious movies because these movies enhance our knowledge about our lives, improve our lives' skills, and they could be amusing. That is why I prefer serious movies.

Writing Feedback / Toefl: active class or inactive one [3]

Some students like classes where teachers lecture (do all of the talking) in class. Other students prefer classes where the students do some of the talking.

Some students would rather just listen to the professor, and they do not interest in participating in class, but I prefer an active class, which students take part in the discussion and keep trying to talk about topics. In this regard, I argue that in an active class, students could interact with professor, obtain more information, and learn better.

Mainly, students are able interact with the professor and other students. Indeed, students have communication with their professor and other students, so they display an active class perfectly. Also, students are capable of direct the discussion and do not permit that the professor's speech tends to some irrelative issues. For example, students may ask a question which professor has to answer and forget that irrelative issue.

Moreover, students could get more information and data about their lesson. A student could get more information about a certain subject from other students rather than in an inactive class, which no students join the discussion. In addition, many students might have to study some other books or essays to be prepared in the class. For instance, in my class, I read other books about International Politics course because I cannot get a good score without extra study.

Last but not least, students could learn better. Indeed, they are able to remember the materials in their mind very well because their debates cause, they do not be forgotten by students. Students who take part in the debate could feel tranquility because they remember the materials, and they would be hopeful that they could get a good score in their exams. For example, in my

class, I participated in debates, and I got a good mark, so I was happy and glad, and it brought quietness and silence.

To sum up, I strongly support this kind of class, which students join the discussion and talk to professor because they are able to have interaction with the professor, increase their knowledge by getting more information, and learn the materials better. That is why I think classes should be active.

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Writing Feedback / People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life [2]

People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress?

Some people would rather exercise or study to reduce their stress and difficulties of modern life; however, I prefer to talk with somebody, such as my family or friends. In this regard, I argue that talking with other people has several positive advantages for the person who is under stress because that person are able to interact with others, obtain some pieces of advice, and finally feel tranquility.

Mainly, people are capable of interacting with others. Indeed, people could talk to their family or friends and give some pieces of information for their lives. In other words, people who tell their difficulties are able to relieve their stress. Also, when they decide to tell their story's lives, they would quit a few negative energies around their workplace, university, and so on. For example, when I am anxious about anything that I cannot solve it, I talk to my friends, then I feel better.

Moreover, when people decide to communicate with other people, they could get some pieces of appropriate advice. Also, they could improve their lives and their lives' manner, such as a student who gets a bad score, and he decides to talk with his advisor, so he is able to improve his way in studying books and other materials. Therefore, more information and data about anything that we are worry about them help us to relieve our stress because we know better how to be faced them.

Last but not least, people who say something about their lives to others would feel quietness and silence. Indeed, families and friends are the best people who understand us, and their speech would pacify our worries. For instance, when I talk with my father, I feel tranquility because he knows me very well he is aware how to behave and treat. In addition, these people might help us to solve difficulties or problems through lending money, saying pray, and so forth. Inasmuch as they are not under stress and pressure could direct us to the better situation. One of my relatives, for example, need some money and my father as a member of our big family keeps trying to find a solution, such as finding a loaner or preparing money by borrowing from his friends.

To sum up, I prefer to talk with someone who could relieve my stress and increase my life expectancy. I support this idea because I can communicate with others, get some bits of advice, and finally feel silence. That is why I would rather talk to my family and friends.

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Writing Feedback / if you could make one important change in a school (Toefl) [3]

If you could make one important change in a school that you attended, what change would you make? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

There are a lot of things, which could be changed in my university, such as classrooms, libraries, labs, and so on. However, changing the professors is the most important thing that I would really like to be occurred. In this regard, I argue that professors have a significant role in universities, so I would like to change them because our university needs to knowledgeable professors, some people who encourage students to interact with one another, and some people could prepare students for social activities.

Mainly, our university does not knowledgeable professors who could increase the students' information in a certain subject. Indeed, our university needs to professors who are updated and who know a lot about their major. Also, good professors are some people who are able to answer most of the question about a topic, such as one of my professors who was able to explain perfectly, and almost all students were content.

Moreover, professors should allow students to participate in discussions. Professors who let their students to take part in debates cause a lot of information and data transfer among students, and it causes student feel tranquility because they get a lot of information, and they are able to pass their exams easily. In addition, students have to study some by-books to be prepared for the class. For example, I had to study many books to obtain plenty of materials for the international politics class.

Last but not least, professors should prepare students for many social activities; in other words, they should learn all skills and aptitudes which are necessary for the students' future. Also, students should be ready for their jobs in which they would have interaction with other people in society. Students, for example, could be able to assist poor people who are not able to pay money to services' students.

To sum up, professors have an undeniable role in universities, and in my university, unfortunately, they are not perfect ones. Indeed, we need some people who are knowledgeable, let students to interact with one another, and reinforce students' skills in social activities. That is why, in my view, changing professors is the most important task of mine if I could make one important change in my university.

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