Scholarship / Academic excellence and character. Recommendation for a student to get Erasmus Mundus Scholarship. [3]

My professor in the university wrote this letter of recommendation for me today; however, I am not contented with it. So I post it here to get some great help from you. Especially wit word limits, as I need this letter to consist only 300 words. Thank you in Advance for your help.

promising student of either Finance or International Business Administration School

I have known Mr. Haithm Noman as a BA student studying at the Department of Accounting, Faculty of Administrative Sciences, IBB University Yemen, where I taught him several courses: Partnership Accounting, Corporate Accounting, Auditing, and Accounting Theory. His final score for these course were a stellar consistently excellent, and I confidently ranked him as the top student in the class which consists of 457 students.

I have come to know Mr. Noman for more than three years where he proves to be a hardworking and excellent student. His assignments and presentations demonstrated an ability to integrate ideas to create larger frameworks for discussions by always wanting to go beyond the confines of the text and the classroom. Furthermore, he has an inquisitive mind and ingenious ability to comprehend, analyze and assimilate various accounting and auditing concepts.

Mr. Noman possesses an eye for research and presentation skills. I supervised his Graduation Research in which he investigated The Role of Internal Auditors in Fraud Detection in Yemeni Public Institutions. He has demonstrated an excellent performance in approaching the final goals by finding how each type of fraud is committed, suggesting prevention strategies, and composing the research investigation report in a well-organized manner. The research was indeed compelling and indicated the high-quality of research that can be expected from Mr. Noman in the future.

In addition to his exceptional academic excellence, I find Mr. Noman is a person of very good character, polite and elegant, and willing to help others, as well as confident in face of challenges. He is very popular among accountancy school students as he tried to help them in every aspects he was able to.

Mr. Noman combination of intelligence, commitment, perseverance, enthusiastic character, and ability to carry out independence research and group projects will certainly make him a promising student of either Finance or International Business Administration School. Therefore, I highly recommend him to be an Erasmus Mundus Scholarship recipient and I can assure you that he will make an excellent addition to your masteral study student roster.

Please do not hesitate to contact me, should you require any further information.

Undergraduate / Personal Statement for an International Development Studies Program. [3]

I would like you to help with my Motivation Letter for an Erasmus Mundus joint master degree program in International Development Studies. The motivation letter must not exceed 500 word count.

the Joint Master Degree Programme - vital part of my future plans

With this letter I hereby wish to state my interest and apply for the master degree Programme in International Development Studies, which starts at the beginning of December of 2017. My ultimate goal is to become a professor and a researcher in a leading research university in Yemen. I strongly believe this master programme is a great opportunity to enrich my knowledge, professional outgrowth and to achieve my goal of contributing to the economic development process of my home-country, Yemen.

In college, through the broad nature of my bachelor degree in Business, I have built very good understanding of Macro and Micro Economics, Public Finance, Planning and Economic Development, and also in general understanding of economic issues. Back then, I adopted a rigors approach to understand the course in hand, established myself as the best student in the Faculty of Administrative Sciences, and graduated first in a class consisting of 457 students in June of 2015. After graduation, I wanted to make a difference in peoples' lives, by volunteering in a refugee camp with a local organization, to help raise funds for helpless and civil war victims. There, I realized that I simply loved working with people in a way that would allow me to change at least one individual's life for the better.

I think that I am one of the best candidates for your master degree programme in International Development Studies since I come from Yemen, one of the least developed countries in the globe, where years of economic instability, inequality, poverty, financial corruption, and then escalating violence exploded into full-scale armed conflict on my country in March of 2015.Therefore, given the chance to be part of your master programme will enable me to get a professional role in the restructuring process in my country, when the war is over. Through the provision to courses in Economic of Development, Sustainable Development, Economic Theory and Policy, and Qualitative Policy Analysis for Development, I will develop profound understanding of economic issues in local and international level, gain deep- knowledge on how to manage and to find practical solutions for economic problems, and sharpen comparative analysis and approaches in socio-economic and environmental issues Yemen confronts.

I wish to get a chance through Erasmus Mundus Joint Master Degree Scholarship to interact with students from diverse professionals and cultural backgrounds drawn from all over the world, to hone cross-cultural skills and to see the world in different eyes. Furthermore, through exposure to world class institutes namely, Palacky University, University of Auvergne, and University of Pavia is a once in a lifetime chance that will help me evolve to the highest level possible in professional and personal level. Finally, I would to emphasize that the Joint Master Degree Programme in International Development Studies is vital part of my future plans in relation to becoming a professional and researcher in the economic development field to participate in the process of creating better world for us, Yemenis, and the generations to come.

Writing Feedback / Fiction and non-fiction books - which of these two types of books do you generally prefer to read? [2]

Toefl independent task, need help with my essay please..

The prompt,
Books can be divided intow two main types: fiction ( novels and stories) and non-fiction (histories, biographies, and self-helped books, for example).
Which of these two types of books do you generally prefer to read...

My essay,

Some people prefer to read imaginary books such as novels and stories while others prefer to read factual-based books like historical and scintific books. Personally speaking, I prefer to read the first type. In this essay I will explore in details my preference.

To begin with, fictional books are not tought in schools. Most schools coriculum focuses on topics about sciences, arts and so on. Therefore, students get used to these books and need to read another kind of texts. For instance, when I was in six grade, my father father gave me a short Arabic story" Al-Sendbad". This story was different from what I read at school, so I told all of my friends about and lent it to some of them too. This way I became intersted reading stories and novels.

Another reason why I prefer fictional books is that they introduce us to new ideas we may never think about. Fantasy and imaginary books cross the boundries of our lnature and life. For example, the idea of Alliens- creatures living in the space, was first mentioned in a story book in the mid sextith of the last century. This story illustrated how men annovated a new kind of jets that can help in protecting the earth from those creatures. After reading this story some people in Canda and USA reported seeing them. Also, engineer designed a new gets that can fight more efficentlly. It is clearely that fictional books broaden our imagination and make us more creative.

Last but not least, fictional books are exciting to read. I remember reading a historical book about Palstine. In fact, I found this book boring and that I read only two chapters of it in weeks. However, when I read the story of "Slah Al-Deen", who was a famous palstine leader, I was so much exciting that I finished reading this 623 pages novel on one night. As a result, now, whenevr I want to learn about the history of any country, I read a story about some of its prominent leaders.

To conclude with, fictional books are my favorit kind of books. Because, they are not learned in school, they introduce us to new ideas we may never think about, and most importantly, they are more intersting to read. Therefore, if you do not read fictional books, start reading some now. Definately, you will find the amazement I found reading them.

Scholarship / Recommendation Letter for a Scholarship - University Scholarship Program [NEW]

I am writing this letter of recommendation for a student who wants to apply for a master degree scholarship. Please help me on it.

I am writing this letter to give my highest possible recommendation of Mr. XXX for XXX University Scholarship Program. I have known Mr. XXX since three years in my capacity as a Professor and The Head of Accounting Department, Ibb University, XXX. He took the following courses which I teach, Cost Accounting(I) and (II), Accounting Management (I) and (II). His performance in these courses were consistently excellent, and ranked as the best student in a class consist of 457 students.

In class, Mr. XXX has shown academic aptitude and ambition above and beyond among his peers in several of my classes, but most notably he performed remarkably on Cost Accounting (II). The course covered depth- study of cost accounting, focusing on its role in internal reporting and the resulting decision-making processes. He has often made critical points on class discussions that demonstrated a very good analytical skills and exceptional ability to analyze budgeting, cost behavior, pricing and profitability factors, to determine how cost allocations are applied in investment decisions.

Personally, Mr. XXX is a motivated young man of considerable self-discipline, likable, enthusiastic, and trust-worthy. He also displayed good leadership skills when involved in group projects, campus, sports events and university activities. He was the representative of the accountancy class for two years and the chair of graduation ceremony. Students and faculty remark Mr. XXX as blessed with considerable talent.

In recognition of his outstanding abilities, Mr. XXX has been recruited as a teaching assistant in the department of accounting. Despite the relatively short period, he was trusted to teach two courses at undergraduate level. The feedback we have been receiving from students who attend his classes are positive and provides evidence of his strong teaching and interpersonal communication skills.

Because of his excellent performances, mentioned above, I again strongly recommend one of the best students I have ever met, Mr. XXX, to your esteem master scholarship program. I have no doubt that he will be an outstanding student in your program. Should you need any further information about this bright and intelligent person, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Scholarship / Introducing myself and showing interest for apply. Study Plan for Chinese Government Scholarship [4]

Hello Everyone,

I am currently applying for Chinese Government Scholarship, and this is my essay of "Study Plan" to study a master degree in accounting . Actually, I don't have any idea how to write this type o f essays. and I need your help. Your ideas suggestions and corrections are welcomed. Please help!

It is my pleasure to introduce myself to the admission committee and hereby I wish to state my interest and apply for Chinese Government Scholarship, funded by Chinese Ministry of Education, to study a master degree in Accounting at University of ( ا ) start at the beginning of the academic year 2016/2017. I completed my Bachelor of Administrative Science, with major in accounting, first in class, from XXX University, in 2015. My bachelor degree incorporated courses in statistical, auditing, business, financial and accounting, through which I gained a profound knowledge in accounting, financial, managerial, and auditing arenas, as well as the business world in general. Furthermore, I acquired a range of important transferable skills such as data analysis, analytical thinking, solving problem, and group-management. But, I particularly enjoyed accounting courses, this has amply reflected in my excellent accounting modules overall GPA with 94.81%.

I wish to get chance through the Chinese Government Scholarship to experience China's blend of ancient and modern civilization, to hone cross-cultural skills by interacting with local Chinese from diverse professionals and cultural backgrounds. It will be an amazing experience to visit incredible attractions such as The Great Wall of China, Tiananmen Square, and ancient water towns in Suzhou. Furthermore, As China is the XXX County biggest trading partner, having first-hand experience of living in china and a good command of Chinese language, I will be on the front lines of discovering new business opportunities. Furthermore, it would make me successful entrepreneur and a valuable source in my country business industry, which adds a great advantage to my overall experience.

I come from country which has underdeveloped economy suffering from an unorganized business environment operating with a weak infrastructure. Therefore, I have developed a research proposal related to "the Quality of Accounting Information and Its Role in Activation of Stock Exchange in the Context of my country Corporate Governance. My motivation behind this research is recognizing the advent need for my country to apply corporate governance standards not only in order to gain credibility and trust but also as a part of strategic management for economical survival and growth. I wish to learn as much as I can from the bright Chinese minds in accounting and financial areas.

Now, I am eager to get myself admitted into the accounting master program offered by the department of XXX at the University of XXX . This master program with up-to-date developments and all trends and changes in accounting industry will definitely enhance my scope of research and equip me with a comprehensive understanding of the accounting field. Obtaining this master program will provide me with the ability and necessary skills to career advancement in all areas of the accounting profession, and academia. Furthermore, this master program lies the foundations to PhD studies in accounting make it a big plus. At the end of all of my masters degree course, I am planning to not only help improve the corporate governance application in my country business environment, but also to continue my studies in the field by continuously researching and writing papers related to this situation through my PhD studies. My ultimate goal is to become a professor in a leading university. Striving to be an excellent resource to assist students and the learning community by enhancing their understanding of financial and accounting matters, and through clear writings and informative lectures. Currently, I have already experienced the excitement and stratification feelings by getting a full time job as a teaching assistant at XXX University. I believe that I have just put myself in the right path which gives me that sense of right direction.

I believe the Chinese Government Scholarship represents a unique opportunity for me to increase my respect for other cultures, to open my eyes wider at the world, and to develop my self-confidence and independence. Integrating the life experience that China has to offer with the quality of education received from leading professors as well as an advanced curriculum provided by the University of XXX could capacitate me to fulfill my dreams. Although the journey ahead will be rough, I believe I possess the necessary skills and perseverance to adapt, thrive and prove myself a worthy candidate if the privilege to pursue this Master's program in your esteem university bestowed upon me. Thank you for your consideration and time, and I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Scholarship / 'Great enthusiasm' - letter of motivation for Erasmus Mandus Marhba Scholarship Master Program [3]

Hey there, I am new here and I really need your help. I am applying for master degree scholarship and It is the first time for me to write this kind of letters. though I did some digging on the internet. but I believe your help in modifying my first draft will make a difference..

It is with a great enthusiasm I apply for The Erasmus-Mundus Marhaba Scholarship to study a Master in Finance at Minho-University, or MA in International Business Administration and Modern Languages at University of Almeria starts on autumn 2016. My ultimate goal is to become a professor at a leading research university in Yemen, as well as a professional expert in the business world. Therefore, I believe this scholarship provides me with the opportunity to bring my goal closer.

In college, Having enjoyed the broad nature of Bachelor in Administrative Science with emphasis on accounting, I established myself among the top students in the faculty and graduate in June, 2015 with distinction, first in class of 457 students. In the pursuit of knowledge and excellence, I have always adopted a rigorous approach in order to attain in-depth understanding of the subject in hand. This has amply reflected in my consistent academic career, always coming in top students in my class and having own merit in tenure of teaching assistant in my university. As highly diligent and driven student in the field of business, I have gained a profound knowledge in accounting and financial arenas as well as the business world in general, and acquired a range of important transferable skills of data analysis, presenting arguments, analytical thinking and making decisions. Which I believe make me perfect fit for the master in finance or international business administration.

To make the most of my time at university, I was an active member in campus and pushed others to be active too. In junior year, becoming a class representative and then the chairperson of the graduation committee, has given me the opportunity to go beyond the academia and delve deeper into all the university life has to offer. Through my participation in organizing events, interacting and communicating with others, designing programs and making speech, I has greatly enhanced my leadership skills and developed a better sense of communication with professors, students and faculty members. But the most meaningful outcome of my involvement has been the discovery of my passion to help others. After graduation, I wanted to take my college experiences and use them as a vessel to make a difference, by volunteering in a refugee camp with the Organization of Red Crescent. Taking full advantage of my network and relationships in university, I gathered a team of fifteen, most of them were my friends in college. Our main objective was to raise money, we also set up a new initiative to gather second-hand house necessities. Together in two and half months, we raised more than one million Y.R ,five thousands dollars, and thousands pieces of used clothes, shoes, blankets and etc. I had an incredible and unforgettable feelings, when I glanced at the smile face of a little girl after she got a doll. Through it all, I realized that I simply loved working with people in some way shape or form allow me to change at least one individual life for the better. By being a shoulder for the fallen ones, a hand for someone reaching out, or to be there when others are in need.

Ten Years from now, I envision myself as a professor in a leading university, Yemen. Striving to be an excellent resource to assist students and the learning community by enhancing their understanding of financial and accounting matters, and through clear writings and informative lectures. Currently, I have already experienced the excitement and stratification feelings by getting a full time job as a teaching assistant at Ibb University. I have just put myself in the right path which gives me that sense of right direction. Besides my academic career path, I want to have my own business consulting firm. With regard to my short-term goal is right at the corner, which is to successfully get into your preeminent Erasmus Mundus Scholarship Program. At the end of my master degree, I am not only planning to commence a front office career in large company or bank, but also to continue on my studies in the financial and accounting areas by continuously researching and writing papers related to the field, and then through my PhD studies when time comes.

After thoroughly studying the different master degrees Marhaba Program has to offer, I have come to believe that a master in finance provides me with the most reliable avenue to achieve my goals. This program, along with research thesisث focusing on Corporate Finance ,Financial Market and Investment, Financial Analysis, with up-to-date developments and all trends and changes in financial industry will definitely enhance my scope of research and equip me with a comprehensive understanding of the financial field, providing me with the ability to enter a professional role in the industry, and academia. Benefiting from the ability to choose two elective courses, I intent to take Advanced Accounting and Accounting for Human Capital and Environment. Furthermore, this master program lies the foundations to PhD studies in accounting and finance. That is why I take the master in finance as my first option.

The master in international business and language studies seems sparkling to me. The provision to courses in international management and strategic planning, I will explore the international business environment, the developing patterns of the world trade markets, and gain profound knowledge in-how international transactions and operations fulfilled. By taking this master, I will develop managerial and analytical skills, have the confidence and knowledge to set, develop and implement plans for international business operations. In addition, undertaking external internship coupled with research project, will enables me to gain a hands-on experience on applying the knowledge and theory I have learned, to deal with real-world situations. Furthermore with proficiency in English and good command of a modern language( French or German), it adds great advantage to my overall experience. What I believe is that this master degree would be an excellent way to prepares me for a career with management potential at any field in the business world, to opens a new doors for me that I might never dreamed of, and to broaden my horizons.

I wish to get the chance through Erasmus-Mundus Master Scholarship to interact with students from diverse professionals and cultural backgrounds drawn from all over the world, to hone cross-cultural skills and to see the world in different light. Moreover, this master program represents an essential stage in my education, and certainly, offers me the opportunity to achieve my future endeavors. Ultimately, I will regularly make a significant contribution of my knowledge, ideas and experience within lectures, group discussions and social activities. Given my history of commitment to excellence, and my passion to be in a constant circle of development. I consider myself eligible for your highly esteemed program and looking forward to receive your acceptance letter in May. Thank you for your consideration and time.