Writing Feedback / The diagram presents the process that is used to produce bricks to construct a building [2]

Diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram presents the process that is used to produce bricks to construct a building factory. Overall, it can be seen that, the method of production are complex through six stages before bricks are sold.

First, the clay are dug by digger, following this the clay is taken and afterwards, spread out on the metal grid. Then it is rolled on roller. Next, the clay are mixed with sand and water. Next, it is inputed to mould or wide cutter. Then bricks are inputed on drying oven for 24 or 48 hours. Following this, the brick inputted to kiln moderate with temperature 200 degree celcius-980 degree celcius and the briks are continued to high kil with temperature 870 degree celcius-1300 degree celcius. Before being packed , the bricks are inputed to colling chamber fo 48-72 hours. After the bricks are packed, the brick are ready to be stored by car.

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Writing Feedback / Replacement of many houses and farmlands with several building facilities in the West Park School [2]

The diagrams show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its contraction in 1950.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram presents the changes that have occured in West Park Secondary School between 1950 and 2010. Overall, it can be seen that, the most noticeble changes are the replacement of many houses and farmland with several building facities of the school such as car park and block science.

In 1980, many changes that have occured to public area to student. A playground has been built behind the main building of school. In addition to this, a sport field was constructed next to playground. Also, the sience block has been built in front of main road and it beside main building of school. Then, a car park was constructed in the north school.

However, over the following thirty years, the car park has been built in alongside of left side of school and it was dominated the western of the school. Next, sport field was constructed in the south main building of school

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Writing Feedback / The accommodation is important for people to undertake they daily routines [3]

Some people think that buildings such as flats and houses should be designed to last a long time. Others believe that it is more important to provide accommodation quickly and cheaply.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Housing are important for people to undertake they daily rountinely. Some people say that buildings such as apartment and homes should be designed to get the outstanding architecture and it needs much time. While, many argue that the providing of housing should be fast and cheap, I strongly believe that the accomodation which are fast and cheap are vital to people since housing is need basic for human.

A great number of people say that the building like apartment and home should be designed to along time to get the oustanding building. This is because many people like the beautiful accomodation and they have much money to get it. For example, in Up down Court, England, the impressive housing in worldwide, some people spend a lot of time to have the breathtaking house and they spend much money to get it. They have the outstanding accomodation who make they proud and satisfied. The beautiful accomodation make peole happy although they spend much time to get it.

However, I believe that the preparing the housing which are quickly and cheaply are essential for people. Hence, the housing is useful for people for their activity and they need place to protect theirself and their family. For instance, the flats in Shanty area, it helps poor inhabitants and inhabitants can stay in home although it is not beautiful but they can find the save place. The housing help many people who do not much money to build home by theirself. The housing which are fast and cheap help people to get accomodation fastly although they do not have much money.

To sum up, although the beautiful architecture can result the breathtaking accomodation, I more likely believe that the preparing house which are quick and cheap are important to inhabitants who have the weak economy. Where possible, the building materials have to have the good material to get the solid building.

Writing Feedback / The diagrams presents the changes that have occurred in Queen Mary Hospital since its building [2]

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams presents the changed that have occured in Queen Mary Hospital since its building from 1960 to 2000. Overall, it can be seen that the majority aspects have changed the shopping center and farmland became cancer center over the period.

In 1980, there were several major changes to building in the queen Mary Hospital. A pharmacy has been built beside the hospital changed place of the shopping center. In addtion to this, a cancer center was contructed next to pharmachy in front of main road. Then, the nursing school has built alongside pharmacy and cancer center, was in west of main road.

However, over the following twenty years, there was a significant change of the building, the cancer center expand along side in the left side of the hospital and it was in the behind of pharmacy. Next, the nursing school and park car were in the west of the hospital.

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Writing Feedback / In the rainwater reusing process water treatment place and the tank supply water to a household [3]

The diagram below shows how rainwater is reused.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram presents the rainwater is reused which is from two place to keep water are in the dam and neighbourhood of house. It can be seen that, water treatment place and rainwater tank supply water to household.

First, the water are fallen, then it come in to dam and neighborhood home. This is where the process diverges. Water are from dam are run to water treatment plant. Following this, water are recycled to become the drinking water for house hold and water are from rainwater tank at the same time are supplied for human consumption in home.

Waste water are consumed by household are thrown to wastewater treatment plant. After that, the water is recycled in wastewater treatment plant, then the excess treated water are thrown to the river. Afterwards, the water are from stormwater treatment which is being in the underground are run to river. The all water back to the upper course of a river system.

Writing Feedback / Water is a valuable resource for human and government has to control the water usage [3]

As water is a valuable resource, governments all over the world should control how much water their citizens use?
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Water is the source of the living and it is a valuable source for human in their daily activity. It is argued that government in the worldwide have to manage using of the water and some people say that reverse. I strongly believe that the government should control the water use since needs of water increase continuosly to fullfill necessary population and factory.

The government have to manage the water use of the world. This is because the population of people increase significantly and it gives impact of the water use. For example, in Asia, several countries show the significant incease of the population and it means they need more water in their activity. The necessary of the water rise everyday, but the source of the water decrease countinuesly. The using of the water have to be controlled.

In the second reason, why government must control the water use hence in the worldwide many factories need water for their production particularly in the develop country. For example, in U.S., the highest average water use in the world is the U.S, at 6000 liters perday.(The United Nation Human Development). They consume much water every day, and it can imperil another countries which is near from it since they take water supplies from other countries to their country. It impairs other countries in their neighbourhood.

To sump up, the government should control use of the water because the population of human increase dramatically and the factories use much water. Where possible, people have to keep the environment to the future.

Writing Feedback / The island is changed when the tourism construct some tourist facilities [3]

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map illustrates that changes that have occured in an island before and after of are many tourist destination facilities. The most noticeable change is the replacement of an areas empty with several major tourism.

To begin, there were several major changes to tourism in the island. An accomodation has been built in the east in an island and it is next to beach. In addition to this, there was a swimming area for visitor in front of the beach. Also, many footpath are alongside the way to go to each of accomodation and beach in the an island.

There have also been changes to the business in the an island. Many restaurant can be seen that in the north of the an island between the accomodation, and a reception has been built in the middle of island between the accomodation, also a pier was constructed on the south of the island is in front of vehiclce tract. Next, there were ships in the south of an island are near from pier.

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Writing Feedback / The sophistecated technology make people's lives change [2]

As a result of electronic inventions such as the computer and television, people do less physical activity, and this is having a negative effect on their health.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The sophisticated technology make people's lives change in their dayly routinely. The inventions such as televsion and computer influence lifestyle of people. Some people say that the invention like computer and television make people less physical activity, and it give negative impact for their health, while many argue that it improves the ability of people in using the invention of the technology, I strongly believe that spend much time on the screen make people unhealth.

A great number of people use the screen to know about the information and it can improve their knowledge. This is because the television and computer provide much information that can improve their ability and skill by using it. For instance, people who spent a lot of time watch or search on the computer can know all of information and people can learn more about other information and it make they open-minded their idea. People who use their time on the screen make people more learn and it can improve their ability.

However, I believe that people who spent much time on the computer or television make people unhealth. This is because, they do not do anything for a long time and people less activity. For example, a research in the U.K. say that people who stay on the screen can make people vurnerable fat and one of the case why the obesity rise because many people less activity since they spend a lot of time on the screen. Spending much time on the television and computer make people unhealth and can bring risk obesity. Spending much time on the screen take bad effect for human health.

To sump up, although stay a long time on the invention like the television and computer can make people get much information and it can improve their skill, I more likely believe that it brings negative effect for people health. Where possible, the using of the computer should be balanced.

Writing Feedback / The majors are important to support the ability of student when they look a job. Forced subjects. [3]

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The majors are important to support the ability of student when they look a job. Some people argue that young people have to choose the majors who they like, whilst many argue that student have to take the major which make they easy to look for occupation in the future such as medicine and engineering of technology, I strongly believe that young generation have to undertake the lesson what they interest to make they more achievement of their life.

The great number of people say that student have to learn the majors which is easy to get the opportunity on occupation. This is because, many graduate are difficult to find occupations, and people need a good life to increase their prestige in society. For instance, the major of the doctor, according to the data wikipedia, almost graduate of doctor directly work when they finished their study. It means people who take subjects in university are useful in society such doctor make people are easy to get well-paid job and prestige. People who take the majors who are needed by the majority of people make they easy to get opportunity to work.

However, I believe that student have to take the course what they like. It can improve their skill and their ability and they can be passionate with what they learn. For example, artist, they paint an outstanding drawings with their emotion and willing. They create an art painting that are beautiful picture who make people proud. Young generation who choose the lecturere whatever they like can make their be better in their job in the future and make they capable with their work. People who learn according their interes it can make they more qualify and have the good ability.

To sump up, although the major such health open large opportunities to get job, I more likely believe that young generation have to take the lecturer who they like to enhance their ability to do the best in their occupation. Where possible, parents have to stand with their children whatever they do.

Writing Feedback / Global population in different world regions - historical data and predictions for future [2]

The graphs below provide information on global population figures and figures for urban populations in different world regions.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart shows the information of demography in overseas, and is measured in number of people and the bart chart illustrates the populations in city of rich countries and poor countries, in the world and is measured in number of people. Overall, the world population increse steadily whereas in three years last decrease. It can also be seen that the poppulation in developing country rise gradually.

In 1800, the number of people world population growth stood at 2000. The number inceased gradually to 2500 in 1940. However, there was a significant rise in the number of people to 6000 number in 2000. Next, it is predicted to incease significantly to 8000 in 2040, which is the peak of demography growth, but then fall dramatically by 6000 over the period.

The population in city of developing regions higher than the developed countries, and the number of people in poor regions at approximately 2200, then it is expected to rise gradually over a 25-year period. However, the population in developed at 1300 countries in 2015, but, it is predicted wiil remain over the period.

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Writing Feedback / An info about vehicles utilizing in Edmonton and some society reasons for using a car in the town. [4]

The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart presents the information about vehicles utilize in Edmonoton, and the table shows the society reasons for using the car in town. Overall, the greatest vehicle use are car. It can also seen that the most cocieties' reasons use the car are for commute to work.

The most utilizing transport are car, representing at nearly a half of all vehicles. At 35%, Light Rail Transit are the second most popular transport. While using the bus and taxi have the smallest number at one in ten for both of them.

The majority people's reasons for usage the car is for commute to occupation are more than half, followed basis by using for business are more than two fifths. Next, inhabitants basis for using the car are taking for childrean at 40%. Interestingly, inhabitants reasons in the large city utilizing to pleasure such as shophing and leisure time have the smallest number for all of reasons are less than fifth respectively.

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Writing Feedback / The monthly spending on different products of an average Australian kin in a 10 years period [3]

The table below shows the monthly expenditure of an average Australian family in 1991 and 2001.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table presents the monthly spending of an average Australian kin between 1991 and 2001. Overall, it can be seen that, the majority family spent their money to buuy other things and service, whereas the needs of clothing is the lowest.

In 1991, other things and service is the highest expenditure of people in Australia, at $250 per month, and in 2001 it was still the highest spending, although it increased to $270 per month. Then, food was the second needs who people spent their money per month at $155, it was different $5 in 2001. For the housing society exhausted their money at $95 and it increased to $100 in 2001.

However, expenditure for electricity and water in 1997 just $75 but in 2001, it increased to $120 per month. People spent their money for tranport just $70 per month and decreased at $40. While spending for clothing are just under all of demands at $20 and $30,1991 and 2001, it is the lowest expenditure of people in Australia.

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Writing Feedback / 'The traveler should stay away from risky places' Advantage and disadvantage of the new locality. [4]

Some people like to travel to somewhere new and different when they go on holiday, while others prefer familiar places.

Do you think there are more advantages or disadvantages to visiting new places?

A great number of people spend their holidays by coming to one place and other places. Many people like holiday in new tourist spots even though some people more choose holiday in well-known place. While holiday in new tourism spot make people have trouble about price, I strongly believe that holiday in different places make people to know new culture and can explore the place, the benefits outweigh than the drawbacks.

Holiday in new locality make people do not know the cost of their holiday and it makes their difficult to count they spending. This is because people have to provide their money when they go to vacation. For instance, people go to Maldives Beach, Srilanka, is the most beautiful beach in the worldwide with picturesque beach. People have to provide money about of $60 a day. It is not cheap, and it is compulsory to be known by vocationers. People cannot manage their financial affairs. People cannot enjoy their holiday and they do not have the good of planning to spend their money.

However, I believe that people who go to new places has some benefits. The first, it make people have new experiences because people can know other locality. In adddition, travelers can explore the place and they can make another people to come it. For example, Island Rio the Jeneiro, Brazil, in 1995, it is a place who are unknown by visitors, but a traveler try to go there and he get many the beautiful places. Then he make vocationers to come it . Now, it has become the best tourist place in the overseas. Again, people can improve their knowledge since they can see more the varied of the culture since they meet new inhabitants and new landscape when they take holiday.

To sump up, although holiday in new place make travel agents difficult to estimate their money, I believe that visit the new tourist spot people can improve their knowledge, the merits outweigh the demerits. Where possible, traveler have to keep their self from the risky in new place.

Writing Feedback / The international trade make people utilize the all things from other country. [4]

As global trade increases, many goods, including those we use on a daily basic, are produced in other countries and have to be transported long distances.

Do the benefits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?

The most recently years international trade has increased. Many primary needs are imported from other countries. Eventhough this will make small local business bankrupt, its benefits like the ability of citizen needs which are not found in their countries, I strongly believe that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

Many disadvatages of international commerce, its can make the small local business bankrupt. Initially, the nation business will lose custumer because people are more interested with equipments from overseas. In addition, the local business have low quality needs are compared with international business. For instance, the nation business produce their goods use the standar national whilst the international business use the advance technology, it makes the quality of needs from other countries have more quality and inhabitants more likely to choose the high quality things. Again, the local business advertise their merchandise is not creative while the international business use all of media to advertise their things and they utilize the idol of citizens in the worldwide as model in their advertisement.

However, the international trade gives some benefits. Firstly, people can fulfill all of their needs because the international commerce provide the all kinds of merchandise. For instance, laptop Apple corp from the America. Then, people can use high quality products. For example, the goods from others country which have the sophisticated technology. Also, the standar people live is increasing since the things from overseas have value of luxury. It makes they have the high status social and it makes socities to have the high standar of quality life.

To sump up, although the commerce global render make more local product incompetitive selling, I strongly believe that this make people's lives more better. Where possible, the international business should be controlled.

Writing Feedback / Recently the television has become a medium where people can study about overseas [3]

Some people say that you can more learn about another country by watching television programmers and film about it than actually visiting them.

How true this statement? Is there anything you can learn about another country by visiting it that you cannot learn by watching programmer about it?

The most recently years television has become a medium where people can study about overseas. Many argue that the screen shows and film are becoming smart tools to study. However, I believe that visiting other countries can make people know more about other countries particularly their culture.

Watching can make people to know more about worldwide. This is because the screen provide many shows and films about other countries. For instance, in China, many people use a screen as primary tool to study about overseas and there people are compulsory to study about foreign country. People in China can speak english and they use it in many aspect. People who utilize television as a resourse study more know about another country alhough they do not go there. Study on the television can make people take knowledge about another countries.

However, I believe that people can more know about around the world when they visit it. The local culture have to be experienced directly. Culture is a habit of the local people in other country and it can be learnt by staying there. For example, in Edinburgh, the custoum comfortlife, people just can know it when they go there, it is difficult to learn if people just see it from screen. Visiting other country can make people more know about another country. People can know more about around the world when they visit it and touch it directly.

To sump up, although people can study through screen, I more likely believe that go to another country make people learn more about their culture directly. Where possible, people have to know more about owner culture.

Writing Feedback / Children are in workplace, two views of this case. [4]

In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong while others consider it as valuable work experience.

Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

The most recently years child labour has been claimed as a common phenomenon in some part of the world, whilst it is argued that working-experience value would drive to positive development, some people say that it is a faulty. I strongly believe that young people have to focus in their study.

Children who work part-time will give valuable experince before they feel real work. This is because students work hard in their task and make they more discipline in their school. A recent study in the United Kingdom said that children who worked part-time are more reliant in mange their money and it taught children how to work hard and seriously with their job especially in their school.

However, having job whilst school make youngster more reliant but it made them to less their time to study. It is believed that children should focus on their studies and they have to have time study and improve their skill. A look at this case when researchers Tokyo University in Japan release their study that children who use their time to focus on their study will gain high value appealed children exhaust their time to work. Regarding to this I immensely believe that children have to study and improve their self.

To sump up, although children who work part-time have value of working-experience and make they self-reliant, I believe that student have to make their self smart and undertake their childhood with happiness. Where possible, children have to keep their time to share with their family.

Writing Feedback / Many people say that the bliss count on money whilst another say that money is not all in life. [3]

Some people believe that our happiness depends on how much money we have. Others say that money cannot buy happiness.

Do you think that having money is the key to happiness, or are there more important factor?

Money is crucial matter for people and all of people attemtp to earn money. Many people say that the bliss count on money whilst another say that money is not all in life. Even thought money make people prousperus, I believe that family is a vital of peaceful.

Money make people to enjoy all of things in the worldwide. This is because with money people can buy anything and people can get what they want. Money make people to more convienent in their life. For example, rich people, they can get everything in their life, they are easy to get facility and servicing and they can pay anything by their money. Money make their life cheerful and they can improve their life. With money people can enjoy their life and improve their qualify of life.

However, I believe that family are important in people's lives. Supporting from family is a vital aspect and the happiness of family cannot be exchanged with anything. Families encourage people to feel better. For instance, a researh in Edinburgh, Uk shows one of country which has inhabitants happy. People live in happy family. Kin make people feel the peacefull. Family are vital in people's lives and they have positive supporting for others.

To sump up, although money make people happy and can get anything by money, I more likely believe that family are important in people's lives and it is a primary of the happiness. Where possible, people have strive to make their self better.

Writing Feedback / The internet has become a need people, do you agree? [7]

The Internet is probably the most significant invention of the last 30 years. Without it, our lives would be completely different.
To what extent do you agree or disagree!

The internet are usefull for people's lives. The inventing of the internet make people change in their life. Although many argue that internet do not give effect in people's lives in the outskirt, I strongly believe that the internet make people be better.

The internet has not an influence for people. This is because people can undertake their activity without the internet and they can get the best result without helping from the internet and people can communicate with another by telegram. For instance, in village, people can do their activity without the internet and they get the same result. People can do anything that they want and they can do anything and undertake their life properly. The internet not give a change for people's lives.

However, I believe that the internet bring the big change to people's lives. The internet make people are easy in their life and the internet make people to access the information in the worldwide and the internet make people communicate with other in the around the world. All of aspect today use the internet to improve people's lives. For example, in the recent time, people use the internet to communicate with other. They use the internet to give information with other and coverly. The majority of people utilize the internet for their occupation and the internet can be supporting to get more profit. The internet make people more easy to do anything, even people can found many opportunities profit due to the internet.

To sump up, although the internet do not influence people who live in the village, I more likely believe that the internet make people more easy and they can get high quality of life. Where possible, the internet have to be used properly.

Writing Feedback / Is the happiness of people life depend on their job or others factors? [3]

Some people say that in order to be happy, you must have a job you love doing. Others say that others factors are more important.

Do you think that people can only be happy if they have a job really enjoy?

Occupation are important for people life. Many argue that people who like their job make their life cheerful, whilst another say that other aspect are crucial. Although, it is true that people will happy if they enjoy their, I strongly believe that the supporting from family and relationship with other are more vital to make people happy.

People who love their job will happy in their lives. This is because many people spend their lives for work to increase their quality of life and to get the good yield. Job are important to be role playing to people's lives. For example, photographers, they are happy to work, although they have to go in any places and capturing moment in many situtions, but they are always seem happy. Enjoying the job make people more creative and they can do the best effort to get proud result. People can be more cheerful when they take pleasure in their occupation.

However, I believe that people can feel happy if they have family who support their life and have good socialsm with another. The bliss of family influence people undertake their life and people need other in their ambient to sharing their bliss and their problem. People need close people to make they motivated to under take their activity. For instance, in Costa Rica, the happiest country in the world. The most of people there are happy and harmonic. They life in country which has a friendly people who liaese to another. People will happy with their life with keep relationship with family and others in their neigborhood.

To sump up, although job are important to determine the happiness of people's lives, I more likely believe that relation harmonic with family and supporting from them are important to make enjoying they life. Where possible, people have to be thankful for all of conditions.

Writing Feedback / People live in one place or several place, both of them have the advantage and disadvantage [3]

In the past, people usually stayed in one place throughout their life. These days, people often move around. They often live in several different places in their lifetime.

What are the advantage and disadvantage of both?

Long time ago, people stay in the same area all of their age, but the most recently years a great of deal people often shift in many areas in their life. People stay in one place in the past time has merit like their near from their family although they do not know another culture, I believe that people stay in some place can make people have a good life while it have disadvantage.

In the past time people live in the one place in their life, its give merits. For instance, they could stay with their family because their job near from their family and then they could feel the brotherhood with another people in their place. However, stay in one place has drawbacks. First, people just have one job because they just stay in their area, and they knowledge not improve because they never go to another place. Also people are difficult to communicate with strangers because every day they just meet with same people in their neighborhood.

In contrast, nowdays people always move from one place to another place, the drawbacks of this are they far with their family, they have to follow the culture where they stay. Whilst it has advantages, first they can learn more about other culture when they come it. In addition they can have the good apportunity to get job to get the good life. Also they can improve their knowledge with their experience in another place.

To sump up, although stay in one place make people in the past time more keep their family, I believe that people who stay in many place today can make people get the best life. Where possible, people have to keep their original culture.

Writing Feedback / The impressive building or public service are crucial for people's lives [4]

Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The outstanding of the city always dominated by the luxury of skyscraper. Many people say that build luxurious building are crucial for a town, whilst other say that the money should be alocated to facility of education and health of inhabitants. Although, the opulent building are vital to make the city more breathtaking, I strongly believe that development of the public service are more crucial to encourage the quality of life inhabitants in a large town.

A great deal of people's number believe that the impressive building make city more seem outstanding. This is because the breathtaking of building make town interest and it can make the strangers come to visit it. For instance, the Palace of the Parliament in Bucharest, Rumania, the impressive buiding which get pay attention from the worlwide and it become most-proud the constructed dwelling in the around the world. Numerous people go to there to witness the beautiful constructed dwelling. The impressive of constructed dwelling can make town popular and it can invite tourist to come.

On the other hand, I believe that construction of school and hospital are more important to make netizents having quality of life. This is because, improvement of the education and health can increasing the productivity life of human now and in the future and it can be felt for all people in the large town. For example, in Finlandia, one of the countries have the best education and quality of life in the worldwide spent much money for education and well-being. Inhabitants there are happy and and their country have ability human source. Instruction in aspect education and health make their life more improvement.

To sump up, although the impressive the constructed dwelling are essential to create the large town as tonish, I more likely that construction of the education and health are vital to get the best life people in a city. Where possible, it have to get the best surveilance by all people.