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Name: Terminal23
Joined: Aug 11, 2016
Last Post: Sep 17, 2016
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Terminal23   
Sep 17, 2016
Writing Feedback / Recent studies report that the level of people's stress and obesity increased in the last decades. [6]

Recent studies report that the level of people's stress and obesity ...

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Therefore, they have createdto state interested programs to actively ...
It could be concluded that people livinglife in the big city might have unstable ...
Thus, they arewere required to realize the importance ...
Terminal23   
Sep 16, 2016
Writing Feedback / There is a magic headset which will help you learn Chinese. [2]

FROM AUTISM TO CHINESE A HEADSET TO HELP YOU WITH YOUR LANGUAGE

Knowing Chinese intonation language is the most extremely difficult but there are utilizing by headset will help you to heard clearly. The device will help sosial communication for autism that accomodate with speech or care the problem. The device called SayWAT, it provides direct comment via Google Glass. It help the autism speak in flat intonation. It system have tested by fourteen autistic people. The sophisticated technology can adopt with other devices. But there is a problem about specific feedback from volunteers requested. It possible to feedback in that time when speaking a foreign language. Providing live feedback need a number of computational power, then the system only few factors of speech at once. Yet, the learners alerting when people disorder a especial sound, like Chinese intonation or France intonation. Several people autistic admit that system to connect other people and that advanced technology to fill important things about tonal language.
Terminal23   
Sep 16, 2016
Writing Feedback / Some people say that words have stronger power than actions [2]

Namely, people need to havesome experience to be aware ...

... why his words are so impressive is that he has acted what he always says.

Fromin my personal experience (...) important for teachers to be accountable professional;...

... I'm always successful as a teacher when I showdemonstrate students how to do before saying.
Terminal23   
Sep 15, 2016
Writing Feedback / HERE'S HOW MANY APPLE CORES IT WOULD TAKE TO POISON YOU [2]

Point in time your mother ever restricted you to eat apple cores cause apple cores can consist concentrations of molecules called cyanogenic glycosides. One of those is amygdalin, and it can change become cyanide when it gets down into your gut bacteria, which can do the best way of killing you. people are throwing out the middle of apple, it just wasting half an apple. Apples are not only fruits with cyanogenic glycosides, It also peaches, apricots, cherry pits, almonds, even lima beans have cyanogenic glycosides. The amygdalin is negative for people, some children have gotten sick from eating a large of amygdalin. when people consume apple seeds or peach pits like chewing with your teeth, the cyanide would be quite into your gut. That different than the cyanide formed in the laboratory. In 1782, Carl Wilhelm Scheele has been extracting glycosides from fruits pits into the water. For now, on sale cyanide comes in the form of highly condensed gases, liquids, and crystals. When people inhaling chemicals can stop oxygen supplies to cells. It soon broke to heart and brain. Chewing a few apple seeds it might produce remnant of hydrogen cyanide, but the amounts and concentration is so fast that your body just flushes it out during digestion. So while cyanide poisoning is nothing to scoff at, it is not will be to happen if you eat more than.
Terminal23   
Sep 1, 2016
Writing Feedback / The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars - Writing TASK [6]

The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.


The chart displays prices alterations for fresh food and vegetables, sugars, and sweet, and carbonat drinks from 1978 to 2009.
The most noticeable trend is that fresh fruits and vegetables increase over the period. Consumer price index slope slightly until 2009, upon which it rose steadily. Whereas sugar and sweets and carbonat drinks remained relatively stable between 1991 and 2003.

Fresh fruits and vegetables started at just below 60 in 1979. Increasing show obviosly 100 up to 200 only 5 years between 1991 and 1995. From 1995 to 2009 fresh fruits and vegetables dramatically increase almost catch up 350.

From 1991 to 2009 three of price about (sugar and sweets, consumer price index and carbonat drinks) just below 150 stabled. It is started rose above 50 in 2007. All of kind continue to escalate reach 2009. Over the entire period never fell drastically until 2009.




Terminal23   
Sep 1, 2016
Writing Feedback / Letter to a friend, asking for help - IELTS WRITING TASK 1 GENERAL TRAINING [4]

hai dipaaa..

I schedule in thereAustralia for two years and I need ...

I schedule there is not only learnmy agenda not only learn but I want to take a part-time job, because in there I do not geti did not found a scholarship so I have ...

... is in need of employees and may bepossible important documents ...
Terminal23   
Aug 30, 2016
Writing Feedback / It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people su [4]

Introduction,
Common people accept the best way to get information is Internet on the other hand, it is not only route of communication. In my perspective, Internet had been supplied preponderance of information to connectedly people. Yet, it is give to people rampant information and people must be selective to choose an information.

Conclusion,
In short, people has to sort out each information from internet. There are provide to people out of control facts. I would suggest that need smart consumer to be internet user.
Terminal23   
Aug 29, 2016
Writing Feedback / Highly-invented-sophisticated technology have most important impact on living standards of mankind [7]

hai dipa, i try comment your passage.

In my standpoint, i agree with that statement cause advances technology make people have a lifestyle of hedonism and change people's people mindset to leave traditional lifestyle.

... have an important influence on people's people over recent decades.
... not affect the lavish lifestyle and remains yourself. become yourself.
Terminal23   
Aug 29, 2016
Writing Feedback / In the bygone era, most people in the world stayed in rural area, had good relations with neighbors [4]

What do you think were advantages and disadvantages of living in small community?

Introduction.
In the by gone era, most people in the world stayed in rural area and they have good relations with their neighbor. Presently, the majority of people reside in urban area and they only recognize small number of people in their residence. In my personal view, there were vantages of living in the village. Such, people can accompany their children to school, so the parent can direct bridel to his their child. It also has disadvantage, because they cannot have good teacher to learn their child.

Conclusion, people who live in village have an advantage. They have a quality time with their children. Such, people can regulate and transmit their children in education. People who stay in urban region few of time to control it. I would suggest that need good decision to reside in small community and big community.
Terminal23   
Aug 29, 2016
Writing Feedback / Suzana Herculano-Houzel: What is so special about the human brain? [2]

Another question comes from studyresearch about time spent by ...
For instance, orang people need 8 hours per day ...
... to accomplish more advanced wayways for living than ...
... gives them more time to do other workworks .
Terminal23   
Aug 16, 2016
Writing Feedback / Uses of Leisure Time - the best way to rejuvenate body and mind is to spend time in nature [3]

The researches are reporting higher levels of both stress dan obesity, these report describe about not using our leisure time to our best advantage. Health specialist agree that the best way to rejuvenate body and mind is to spend time in nature and taking physical exercise at outdoor. Recent studies clarify that brain function weakens as a result of the energy expended simply classify the overwhelming influenced of city life. Around the world , the most papular way to spend pastime is wacthing television. Globally, the next most papular is browsing the internet, also passive, and its ranks as the most famous among the billions china. The third is shopping, which may little more active but is still as far from nature possible. Chilhood obesity and depression approtimate epidemic levels. Authorities have begun to declare the problem, and a brilliant programs that give children an occasion to spend time in nature are a being introduced in country around the world. Vocations are the most visible part of leisure time. British spend the most time go on an excursion in their national trust park.
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