Jnur
Sep 21, 2016
Writing Feedback / Article Summary _ You Can Now Buy Harry Potter's Childhood Home at 4 Privet Drive [3]
Hii @Hujjatul19
You have some minor mistakes on your text. Here my suggestion:
-OnIn September 2016. -> Since your text is not contain any "date or day", it is better to use preposition of time properly
- This residence islocated atin the suburb of London. -> redundant. In general, we use preposition of place such as "at" for a "POINT", "in" for an "ENCLOSED SPACE", and "on" for a "SURFACE".
Break a leg
Regards,
Hii @Hujjatul19
You have some minor mistakes on your text. Here my suggestion:
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- This residence is
Break a leg
Regards,