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Clinical experience - Erasmus Mundus motivation letter

3 - Focus on conciseness by highlighting key experiences and specific program alignment, and consider streamlining early achievements to strengthen relevance...

LettersFlorence Dambani - Oct 21, 2024alian - Oct 26, 2024
Human Behavior - Stipendiary Hungarian Essay

4 - @molnardebora I agree with the comments. It is crucial to identify the problems and develop solutions....

Scholarshipmolnardebora - Oct 21, 2024woodg - Nov 4, 2024
Chevening: The Meaning of Leadership for An Entry-Level Employee

5 - @harepanther I think that this is pretty good (but I'm not that good of a writer). But one thing...

Scholarshipharepanther - Oct 21, 2024ryayra - Oct 28, 2024
The graph shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000

2 - The summary overview is incomplete and improperly formatted. This paragraph should have a minimum of 2 sentences in it....

Writing FeedbackNguyen James - Oct 21, 2024Holt - Oct 22, 2024
Autobiography - College Essay (Taiwan)

2 - Sunce you are supposed to write an autobiography, you should be starting at the very beginning. Talk about your...

Undergraduatejaidenrex - Oct 21, 2024Holt - Oct 21, 2024
Mastercard Foundation Scholarship at the University of Edinburgh

5 - @alian Thank you very much for your contribution. I really appreciate it and I will heed to it. Thank...

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Biology, mathematics, and technology - academic objectives and your long-range goals

5 - You need to show the specific things university of Toronto had that would help you align with your Long-range...

Scholarshipnourmohamed_1 - Oct 20, 2024essaycheck24 - Nov 3, 2024
"Fascination with Architecture"- CommonApp Personal Statement Rough Draft

2 - The content of the essay is too scattered. You are trying to introduce too many facets of your personality...

Undergraduatehiwhatsup - Oct 20, 2024Holt - Oct 21, 2024
Motivation letter for Radboud University Artificial Intelligence

4 - Nice write up. Just a little suggestion. Your introductory paragraph should capture more of statistical problem, probably a...

Lettersthunderk3g - Oct 20, 2024Kinami1 - Oct 29, 2024
My history with mathematics!

2 - Are you some sort of Math major? The reason I ask is that the subject you chose for this...

UndergraduateSpandy Sigdel - Oct 20, 2024Holt - Oct 21, 2024
Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool.

2 - The essay will receive an automatic failing score since it only has over 230 words in it. By not...

Writing Feedbackphanhobaoan - Oct 20, 2024Holt - Oct 20, 2024
International tourism - Advantages/Disadvantages

2 - This response. which is not aligned with the target format for the task accuracy considerations will get the...

Writing Feedbackesswri123 - Oct 19, 2024Holt - Oct 20, 2024
"Restart" - Emerson College - what would you title your story and why?

2 - I would suggest that you use the title of the essay at the very beginning. Use a title header...

UndergraduateLicho - Oct 18, 2024Holt - Oct 19, 2024
Don't make up more trash - Math COMMON APP

2 - I believe that you are trying to discuss the evolution and development of your interest in the Math and...

Undergraduateazuuu - Oct 18, 2024Holt - Oct 18, 2024
Ramen noodles - Personal Essay for College

2 - Ramen noodles are supposed to be a part of the lesson that you learned during this time. However, that...

Undergraduatekidwantsknowledg - Oct 18, 2024Holt - Oct 18, 2024
Common App Essay—Grandfather's watch

7 - @vamin007 It is definitely engaging. That said, I agree with the other commenters: your essay should focus primarily on...

Undergraduatevamin007 - Oct 17, 2024woodg - Nov 3, 2024
The chart shows the total distance travelled by passengers on five types of transport in the UK

2 - Sadly the report veers more towards and automatic failing score since it does not meet the 150 minimum word...

UndergraduatePN356 - Oct 17, 2024Holt - Oct 17, 2024
Tintin comics were my favorites - common app essay

2 - I am not sure which prompt you are trying to respond to with this essay so my advice regarding...

UndergraduateAmrutaPundlik - Oct 17, 2024Holt - Oct 17, 2024
Living in a country as a non-native language speaker

2 - Avoid referring to people using pronouns in a Task 2 essay. That is because you must write from a...

Writing FeedbackYusuf Momani - Oct 16, 2024Holt - Oct 17, 2024
Motivation Letter for Master's Degree in Electrical Engineering at TU Delft

2 - Your essay does not flow as a solid document because you have divided it into chapters or discussion points...

LettersAnastasis_k - Oct 16, 2024Holt - Oct 17, 2024
Motivation Letter - MSc In Quantitive Finance ETH UZH

3 - Hello, - If there is a format that you have to follow, it would be helpful to give us...

Letterssnane - Oct 16, 2024Anastasis_k - Oct 16, 2024
The Art of Living - Master Program SoP

3 - I liked your essay. It is indeed a little long, but it does not bother me personally. If it...

Scholarshipvhl000 - Oct 16, 2024Anastasis_k - Oct 16, 2024
Grandma and quilting - my personal essay for college

3 - @Holt Reflect on something that someone has done for you that has made you happy or thankful in a...

Writing Feedbackelizabethki - Oct 15, 2024elizabethki - Oct 16, 2024
Challenging yourself outside of the comfort zone - Loran scholarship essay

2 - I believe that there is a lack of clarity when it comes to describing what your comfort zone is....

Scholarshipsholokha - Oct 15, 2024Holt - Oct 16, 2024
Most significant contribution to your school or extended communities - scholarship essay

3 - @Holt Ok, thank you so much for the feedback!...

Scholarshipandrshol15 - Oct 15, 2024andrshol15 - Oct 15, 2024
What determines success in life? - opinion essay

3 - @Holt please help me give another essay basing on mine...

Writing Feedbackkimanhlee - Oct 14, 2024kimanhlee - Oct 15, 2024
Mastercard Scholarship - Msc Public Policy Essay

2 - Avoid opening the essay with a defeatist attitude and negative character presentation. You want to make a positive impression...

Scholarshipbadoe - Oct 14, 2024Holt - Oct 15, 2024
Biotechnology and bioengineering - commonwealth development impact statement

2 - Unfortunately, your response does not provide the expected responses to the Commonwealth Development Impact statement as required. The written...

GraduateAeshna Agarwal - Oct 14, 2024Holt - Oct 14, 2024
Ballet dancing - Common App Personal Essay

3 - @Holt Thanks for responding, I looked over my essay and also used grammar and could not find any spelling...

Undergraduatek1chikkk - Oct 14, 2024k1chikkk - Oct 14, 2024
Tell us who you are - what would your friends/family say

2 - The most common mistake that college applicants make in this presentation is that they always address the input in...

Undergraduatestrawberrymilk - Oct 14, 2024Holt - Oct 14, 2024
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