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Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? Master of Agribusiness (for AAS)

2 - You have a problematic application here. You are a graduate of a non related course. So your credentials will...

Scholarshipdaris taufiq - Apr 1, 2024Holt - Apr 12, 2024
Task 2: an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home

2 - Okay. This is a single opinion essay, not a comparison essay. Therefore, the response paragraph that does not relate...

Writing Feedbackjade126 - Mar 31, 2024Holt - Apr 12, 2024
In order to learn a language well, we should also learn about cultures. Do you agree or disagree?

4 - Hi there, Your essay is well-written in my opinion, the idea is fully developed and some advanced words are...

Writing Feedbackhuong186 - Mar 31, 2024chloepham - Apr 16, 2024
Miles Morales and his Legacy as a New Spider-Man

2 - You could also consider including a discussion that relates to the comparison of the previous iterations of Spider-Man against...

Writing Feedbackanthonys455 - Mar 31, 2024Holt - Apr 3, 2024
Potential fertility risks of Lipo 360 surgery for women of childbearing age

2 - I believe that your introduction to Lipo360 is incomplete. You have to explain what the procedure is about, even...

Research PapersKmirage - Mar 31, 2024Holt - Mar 31, 2024
There is not a First without the Second

2 - The main problem that I see with this paper is that a Works Cited page was created at the...

Research PapersBokalau12 - Mar 31, 2024Holt - Apr 3, 2024
MotivationalLetter: Master's degree in Microbiology and Microbial Biotechnology

2 - Since you already have an existing master's degree, you should be justifying why you would want to pursue a...

LettersDam94 - Mar 31, 2024Holt - Apr 3, 2024
The gaming industry - PS5 ENG102

2 - I believe that focusing your paper on specific problems early on in the research would also help. I do...

Writing FeedbackTolaDuressa - Mar 30, 2024Holt - Apr 3, 2024
Comparing living with parent and living in campus

2 - There is no effort on your part to paraphrase the original prompt. You merely did a cut and paste...

Writing FeedbackDuDu123 - Mar 30, 2024Holt - Apr 3, 2024
Owned and rented accommodation - IELTS 1: Bar chart

4 - Data Accuracy: Double-check the percentages mentioned in your summary to ensure accuracy. Ensure that the percentages add up correctly...

Writing Feedbackffriendd - Mar 29, 2024DeverX - Apr 9, 2024
LSHTM - MSc Health Policy, Planning, and Finance personal statment

2 - The first thing I would advise you to do is to keep the essay written only in the English...

Graduatesiopao106 - Mar 29, 2024Holt - Apr 2, 2024
Master of Human Resource Management - AAS

2 - Your first paragraph is not relevant to the prompt provided. You have to revise the essay to focus on...

Scholarshipmoarao - Mar 29, 2024Holt - Apr 2, 2024
University of Washington Department of ECE Admission Essay

2 - I am not sure about how to review this essay because you did not provide any guidelines for the...

Undergraduatejustj - Mar 29, 2024Holt - Apr 2, 2024
Young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community

3 - Hi there, I'm a bit confused by your conjunction " granted", I assume that the previous sentence and the...

Writing FeedbackKhacHauPham - Mar 29, 2024Jennieaufif - Apr 4, 2024
writing ielts task 1: The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were

5 - Clarity and Precision: Be precise with your descriptions. Instead of saying "the bar chart witnessed several changes," specify what...

Writing Feedbackpthu553 - Mar 29, 2024DeverX - Apr 9, 2024
Writting task 2. The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the cost

2 - The essay discussion is based on the extent of your (dis)agreement with the provided discussion. It is not based...

Writing FeedbackTrang1711200 - Mar 28, 2024Holt - Apr 2, 2024
Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal

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Writing Feedbackphuonghanguyenth - Mar 28, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
ielts writing task 2: Rich countries often give money to poorer countries

2 - The essay will receive an immediate failing Task Accuracy score because you did not reword/restate/rewrite the topic in your...

Writing Feedbackpthu553 - Mar 28, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Engineering, rough draft about engineering

2 - There are instances in the presentation where you could use more concise language. Some of your paragraphs tend to...

Writing FeedbackAprieto - Mar 27, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Transition from psychology to cognitive science Msc SOP Review

2 - You must try to avoid using a template Statement of Purpose, Motivational Letter, Personal Statement, or any other application...

Graduatelofisophie - Mar 26, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Some educationalists argue that non-exam, art-based subjects, such as music, drama, art, and craft..

2 - English essays follow one specific golden rule: All sentences must begin the first word with a capital letter /...

Writing Feedbacktohonganh - Mar 26, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
AAS 2024 - Master of Counter Terrorism and Master of Security and Strategic Studies

3 - I am a police officer, working in the public sector. I did consider the second university and second major....

ScholarshipOliverQueen - Mar 26, 2024OliverQueen - Mar 28, 2024
Faculty of Management and Tourism at Hanoi University - MOTIVATION LETTER FOR ERASMUS SCHOLARSHIP

2 - This is not a very effective ML letter for EM. It is more applicable towards a non scholarship based...

LettersHuiMin - Mar 25, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Master in Peace & Conflict Studies - AAS - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?

2 - The backgrounder that you have chosen to present is a stand alone discussion, which does not relate directly to...

ScholarshipCesa123 - Mar 25, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people

2 - The first paragraph cannot meet the maximum preliminary scoring considerations because the writer has not made an effort to...

Writing FeedbackProlevelmax9 - Mar 25, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries.

3 - it is a great time....

Writing Feedbackanne150707 - Mar 25, 2024garrickchaos - Mar 28, 2024
Research on TikTok's negative effects on Adolescents

2 - Do not open the presentation with a citation. That is the worst thing that you can do in a...

Research PapersAlexNorrish - Mar 23, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 1: Annual Pay of Doctors and Other Workers

2 - An accurate summary overview would include a listing of the 7 countries in the line graph. It would also...

Writing Feedbacksophiemoore62 - Mar 23, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
SOP for MSc Computer Science EPFL

2 - A reviewer is usually more impressed by the way that the applicant manages to combine undergraduate studies and its...

GraduatetealCrayon98 - Mar 23, 2024Holt - Mar 24, 2024
TU Delft - MSc Transport, Infrastructure, and Logistics Motivation Letter

3 - @Holt hello, thank you very much for the feedback. I'll be sure to revise my essay as per your...

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