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Common App Essay Draft - 12 PM: Overcoming a challenge

2 - This is a highly personal essay. Thank you for sharing it with us. Your struggle was real and it...

Undergraduaterubyh18 - Jul 10, 2024Holt - Jul 13, 2024
the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online.

2 - Well, your essay would get an automatic failing score because you wrote less than 250 words, did not follow...

Writing FeedbackDaz Nguyen - Jul 9, 2024Holt - Jul 13, 2024
Supporting statement for Master's degree in Advanced Control and Systems Engineering

2 - Your supporting statement tends to jump around in terms of information sharing, without actually building to a solid finish....

GraduateFikri26 - Jul 8, 2024Holt - Jul 9, 2024
Reasons and effects of income disparity between celebrities and politicians nowadays (IELTS task 2)

2 - Do not make boastful claims like these. There are some who would oppose this statement and say that...

Writing Feedbackhann130002 - Jul 7, 2024Holt - Jul 9, 2024
Discuss pros and cons of working or studying at home

2 - This is a misleading statement. There is no information nor reference in the original prompt that would indicate...

Writing FeedbackPerthy - Jul 7, 2024Holt - Jul 9, 2024
Many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalization

2 - What? You did not offer a writer's opinion with a thesis statement in the first paragraph. You did...

Writing FeedbackHarryNguyen041 - Jul 6, 2024Holt - Jul 6, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 : Many young people today change their jobs or careers every few years.

2 - Your English competency level is that of a beginner and yet, you are trying to use an advanced sentence...

Writing Feedbacklucyle0802 - Jul 6, 2024Holt - Jul 6, 2024
people should be able to keep all the money they earn and not pay tax to the state. agree or not

3 - While the idea of keeping all earned income sounds appealing in principle, it's important to consider the broader implications....

Writing Feedbacknorah14 - Jun 13, 2024markzily - Jul 6, 2024
Machine Learning - Statement of Purpose for an exchange Program

3 - Thank you so much for the feedback. I have taken it into consideration and made the required changes....

Undergraduatebikraj2 - Jul 4, 2024bikraj2 - Jul 5, 2024
The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income

3 - The chart highlights changes in how families allocated their weekly income in a specific country between 1968 and 2018....

Writing FeedbackAngrycat - Jul 3, 2024markzily - Jul 5, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2- Some people think young people should be required to have full time education

2 - The term younger generations is too vague. Be more specific and limit the description to one closer to the...

Writing Feedbackdinhhieu2910 - Jul 4, 2024Holt - Jul 4, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - MAP OF CENTRAL LIBRARY 20 YEARS AGO AND TODAY

2 - The summary overview should have at least 2 sentences in it. The image identification is lacking. You are indicating...

Writing Feedbackngocquyen - Jul 3, 2024Holt - Jul 3, 2024
write paragraph about avantages of playing sports

2 - There is no need to write a conclusion statement when you are being asked to develop a paragraph based...

Writing Feedbacklinda2 - Jul 2, 2024Holt - Jul 3, 2024
IELTS Task 2 - Essay on computers being the most important invention of the last century or not

2 - Kindly refrain from writing more than 300 words for the task 2 essay. This essay is composed of 440...

Writing Feedbackminhduc0806 - Jul 2, 2024Holt - Jul 3, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - UNEMPLOYMENT

2 - Your report is difficult to read due to the lack of punctuation usage. The GRA score for this essay...

Writing Feedbackclaserpy - Jul 1, 2024Holt - Jul 3, 2024
2025 GKS mass media major. Pusan national university

2 - Considering that you are Nigerian and not Korean, it will seem implausible for you to be so focused on...

UndergraduateEzinne - Jun 30, 2024Holt - Jul 3, 2024
Ielts writing task 1: average CO2 emissions per person in the UK, Sweden, Italy, Portugal

4 - The overall essay is good, but I recommend you compare the data of the countries rather than just stating...

Writing Feedbackkvpa915gstn - Jun 26, 2024ngocquyen - Jul 3, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (PIE CHART) - TRANSPORTATION

3 - The lengths of your 2 paragraphs are not balanced, probably because of your approach to divide the information. I...

Writing Feedbacklinh_030671 - Jun 28, 2024ngocquyen - Jul 3, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - GLOBAL MOBILE PHONE SALES BY BRAND

3 - Fascinating breakdown of global mobile phone sales trends from 2009 to 2013! Samsung and Apple saw substantial growth, while...

Writing Feedbackngocquyen - Jun 30, 2024markzily - Jul 2, 2024
IELTS Academic-Essay about whether group activities teach more important skills than individual ones

3 - Your essay makes a strong case for the valuable skills gained through group activities like communication and leadership. I...

Writing Feedbackbyn - Jun 30, 2024markzily - Jul 1, 2024
Data Science Masters - Personal Statement

2 - Kindly indicate what degree you completed in college and how it relates to Cybersecurity. How did you find yourself...

Graduateamahopeless - Jun 30, 2024Holt - Jun 30, 2024
Personal statement for gks undergraduate medical student 2025 embassy track

2 - The presentation of this essay is bordering on the dramatic, without really offering any information that would help the...

Scholarshiplegendshibawaekh - Jun 28, 2024Holt - Jun 29, 2024
IELTS Academic Writing "Persuasive Power vs. Waning Influence: Debating the Impact of Advertising"

2 - You are writing a debate paper based on the given topic. Therefore, you should have a clear thesis statement...

Writing Feedbackjckian - Jun 27, 2024Holt - Jun 27, 2024
Friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face

3 - It's an interesting perspective on the value of friendships in today's digital age. While online friendships offer convenience and...

Writing Feedbackhoainhu - Jun 25, 2024markzily - Jun 27, 2024
The Essence of Parenting: Nurturing Future Generations

2 - You are discussing parenting in general terms. However, the demands of parenting differ between single parent, two parent, and...

Essaysfrankmaghler - Jun 27, 2024Holt - Jun 27, 2024
task 2 social skills should be emphasized?

2 - You chose to use your first reasoning paragraph to introduce an explanation the topic, rather than a supporting statement...

Writing Feedbackngoc khue - Jun 24, 2024Holt - Jun 25, 2024
Pharmacy chose me - Graduate Statement of Purpose

3 - Thank you for the feedback. Very much appreciated....

Writing Feedbackshegzdr - Jun 23, 2024shegzdr - Jun 25, 2024
"We do not remember days, we remember moments."

2 - You may want to expand on this discussion and find a way to make it more relatable to...

UndergraduateADITI PATEL - Jun 23, 2024Holt - Jun 24, 2024
SOP for Information science focus on intersection of security and privacy with human-computer.

2 - I find the discussion to be very general in presentation. The purpose is somewhere there. You have kept it...

ScholarshipHallenjay - Jun 23, 2024Holt - Jun 24, 2024
Smoking - Writing task 2: Topic- Social issues

2 - Use the first person pronoun "I" in this case. The essay will not write itself. The essay does...

Writing FeedbackThang2910 - Jun 23, 2024Holt - Jun 24, 2024
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