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The Ripple of Change - From small changes to big impact - GLOBAL UGRAD essay 1

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Eating local food and the related environmental impacts

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Motivation Letter - MSc in Integrated Brain Sciences UZH/ETH

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Lettersivy_lee - Dec 9, 2024Holt - Dec 9, 2024
SOP for Master's in Electrical Engineering / ECE

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Graduateapplicant101 - Dec 9, 2024Holt - Dec 9, 2024
Does societal impact matter more than families' guidance?

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Growing Mental Health Crisis in Teenagers

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Research Papersadieringer407 - Dec 7, 2024Holt - Dec 9, 2024
Green Rush: Exploring the Economic and Societal Impacts of Cannabis Legalization

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Research Papersraaugustine - Dec 7, 2024Holt - Dec 9, 2024
The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meats in a Euro countries

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The Importance of Ethics in Society

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My proudest accomplishment - the Cambridge Science Competition

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Scholarshipmtbee7 - Dec 6, 2024Holt - Dec 9, 2024
Narrative Essay - New beginning of my life

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restaurant is my favourite place!

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Statement of Purpose on Computer Science, PhD

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"You write, so you exist" - KUAS Admission Essay

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Undergraduateblissuueticktack - Dec 2, 2024Nugraha - Dec 6, 2024
Eng102 Social media and its effects on children.

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HER POV OF ME - Recommendation letter for a big scholarship

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Motivation Letter for Erasmus-Mundus Master's program in Sustainable Design, Construction...

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LettersMubarokhz - Nov 30, 2024Holt - Dec 4, 2024
Talent vs hard wordk - IELTS 2

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Open-minded and empathic - UBC: Tell us about who you are.

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Undergraduatetsuikirsten - Nov 30, 2024jakartainrain - Dec 1, 2024
"Detail Oriented and Dependable" - UBC application essay: Tell Us About Who You

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Undergraduatepurinverse - Nov 30, 2024purinverse - Dec 1, 2024
Motivation Letter for Embedded System Design in Hochschule Bremerhaven

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VEX robot - University of Toronto Computer Science Supplemental Question

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Undergraduatergdg - Nov 12, 2024highschlstudent - Nov 30, 2024
A resilient person - UBC Personal Profile

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Statement of Purpose for PhD programme in Chemical Engineering

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Graduateahmed326 - Nov 29, 2024Holt - Nov 30, 2024
Motivation for PhD: Research Academic Journey

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LettersBinnu45 - Nov 28, 2024Holt - Nov 29, 2024
Success - What is important to you? Why? - Personal Profile

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited

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Motivation Letter for MSc in Applied Physic at TU Delft

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Lettersvattickdrz - Nov 27, 2024Holt - Nov 28, 2024
Should High school education be mandatory?

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Writing Feedbackanishawriting - Nov 27, 2024Holt - Nov 28, 2024
The Fifth Circuit Court Decision on United States v Smith

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