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Living in big cities is bad for people's health

2 - The main problem that this essay will encounter in the preliminary scoring consideration is the lack of clarity in...

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Online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do u think it's a positive or negative development?

2 - I am not sure if you can actually write this essay using the same number of words during the...

Writing FeedbackMinhAnkFam - Jun 10, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
BODY TASK 1 the salary of Anthropology

2 - With only 136 words written, this task 1 essay will automatically get a failing score. You have to write...

Writing Feedbackthanh2509 - Jun 10, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the UK between 1990 and 2001.

2 - There is a minimum 2 sentence requirement for the summary overview. You wrote a run-on sentence instead. Unfortunately, the...

Writing FeedbackThomasDickson - Jun 9, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Many city dwellers these days don't get enough physical exercise. Write causes and solutions

2 - This does not have the same meaning as physical activities or physical exercise. You must improve your English...

Writing FeedbackLuktcong - Jun 9, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
The graph shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

2 - The report is too long and repetitive. You are over stretching the report in an effort to use as...

Writing Feedbacklitherine - Jun 8, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
IELTS Essay about the necessary of recycling laws

2 - The writer's opinion is an integral part of the preliminary task scoring requirement. Therefore, it is imperative that you...

Writing FeedbackCTA - Jun 8, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

2 - I cannot say if you did a good job with writing a response to the prompt without reading the...

Writing FeedbackKIMANHLE - Jun 7, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ( TOPIC CRIME )

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TASK 2: Government regulation in competition

2 - Do not over discuss your presentations. Keep in mind that there is a 40 minute writing limit for the...

Writing Feedbackdinhtrang2905 - Jun 5, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Ielts 2 - Traveling to other places - Agree/Disagree

2 - There are 2 reasons that this essay will receive a failing score. The first is in relation to the...

Writing FeedbackBaoNgocPham - Jun 4, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Task 1 Cam 10 Test 1 picture in the book or internet

2 - The summary overview should be composed of at least 2 sentences, covering at least 40 words. Your presentation does...

Writing Feedbacktranhishere - Jun 3, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies

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Writing FeedbackUrmom123 - Jun 3, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Team activities can teach more skills for life than those activities which are played alone.

2 - You should be clearer when referencing this term. It would have been better to use the term "despite"...

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IELT WRITING TASK 2: competition for university

2 - There is no reference to opinions being divided in the original discussion topic presentation. You cannot use that...

Writing FeedbackMalaila - Jun 3, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play different musical instruments

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Writing Feedbackthaoly2007 - Jun 3, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
THE VIEWS OF GIVING HOMEWORK TO CHILDREN

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Task 2: Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV

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WRITING PART 1 - PARTICIPATING IN REGULAR ACTIVITIES

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Writing Feedbackvananh1009 - Jun 2, 2024Holt - Jun 9, 2024
It is important for children to learn the difference thing between right and wrong at an early age.

4 - In your introduction and conclusion, I believe that you should state your opinion and main ideas. In addition, more...

Writing Feedbackktin152 - May 30, 2024CTA - Jun 8, 2024
[Writing Task 2] At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively...

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[WRITING TASK 1] The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today.

2 - You cannot complete 266 words in 20 minutes. You have written a task 2 essay in this case. You...

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[PART2] In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries

2 - The second paragraph strayed from the comparison discussion. It entered into a government responsibility discussion instead. So you cannot...

Writing Feedbackchloepham - May 31, 2024Holt - Jun 6, 2024
Young people today don't give enough time to help their community. Do you agree or disagree?

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Writing FeedbackNeez - May 30, 2024Holt - Jun 6, 2024
advantages and disadvantages of encouraging corporations moving from major cities to regional areas.

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Writing FeedbackTUV - May 30, 2024Holt - Jun 6, 2024
countries should produce food for their populations to eat and import as little as possible

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Writing Feedbackhiuhiu - May 29, 2024Holt - Jun 6, 2024
Writing task 1: The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money

3 - there are some errors in your writing such as "an rise" . The overall plays an important part in...

Writing Feedbacklilinhxk - May 27, 2024thaoly2007 - Jun 3, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - WASTE OUTPUT

3 - There are some plural errors in your writing as the phrase "both company" should be changed into "both companies"....

Writing Feedbackvananh1009 - May 28, 2024thaoly2007 - Jun 3, 2024
WRITING TASK 1: THE DRIVING TEST PASS RATE

4 - there are some spelling errors in your writing. "periodd" and " double" should be rewritten to "period" and "doubled"....

Writing Feedbacktrinhnguyen20304 - May 29, 2024thaoly2007 - Jun 3, 2024
IELTS Task 2 - Fast food should be taxed or not? Do you agree or disagree?

3 - Hi I think you repeated the word "impose" many times, try to paraphrase it in different ways...

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