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Do you think public transportation should be free for everyone

2 - The prompt paraphrase is acceptable. The thesis statement is well developed. However, you should have directly responded to the...

Writing Feedbackpnq1982009 - Dec 23, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
Stipendium Hungaricum - Motivation Letter for BSc in Earth Science

2 - The response is too wordy without enough relevant content. More than 50% of this essay would be better suited...

Undergraduateclementine11 - Dec 23, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
Why Studying Abroad is Life Changing – Erasmus Master in Medical Technology and Healthcare Busines

2 - Your response is not well rounded. The reviewer will be looking for a response that mixes the social life...

Scholarshiploonatheworld - Dec 23, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
Impact on Master's in my home country – Erasmus Master in Medical Technology and Healthcare Busine

2 - This does not provide an impact full opening to the paragraph. You can actually start with the 2nd...

Scholarshiploonatheworld - Dec 23, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
Career Impact of This Programme – Erasmus Master in Medical Technology and Healthcare Business

2 - I think it would be better to say you will evolve into a biomedical engineer with leadership skills...

Scholarshiploonatheworld - Dec 23, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
Common App Personal Statement-international education major

2 - I am not sure which of the prompt your wrote this in response to but I have to say,...

UndergraduateTopaz - Dec 23, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
My hands and brain - Common App - Personal Statement

2 - There is something wrong with this recollection. You were 4 and taking your 7 year old sister to...

UndergraduateScormbl - Dec 22, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
Scrolling into Stress: A Proposal to Limit Teen Social Media Use for Mental and Academic Well-Being

2 - Your introduction should not be citing actual information yet. Since this is an overview of the paper focus, the...

Research PapersJgisselle - Dec 22, 2025Holt - Dec 26, 2025
Academic Personal Statement for Masters in Robotics at a top university in the USA.

2 - The rationale behind your desire to pursue this masters degree is difficult to find in this presentation. The paragraph...

Graduateneevan642 - Dec 22, 2025Holt - Dec 25, 2025
Academic Statement of purpose for Masters in Computer Science at a top university in the USA.

6 - The advice I gave you regarding how to fix this essay applies to the next personal statement that you...

GraduateAbhirup7 - Dec 20, 2025Holt - Dec 24, 2025
Requirements for Germany Scholarship

5 - If your accomplishments are not related to the course you wish to enroll then, I do not suggest mentioning...

Student TalkDanicaRamirez - Oct 19, 2025Holt - Dec 24, 2025
Essay on Revenue Sharing in College Athletics:Why Fair Compensation for Athletes Is Overdue

2 - Clarify that this is to be revenue sharing with the university. Since the university earns from ticket sales,...

Writing Feedbackmelissarivas0126 - Dec 21, 2025Holt - Dec 21, 2025
Environmental Impact of Artificial Intelligence

2 - You cannot end your thesis statement with "there are currently no clear solutions". Since this has now turned into...

Research Paperscsworker09 - Dec 20, 2025Holt - Dec 21, 2025
Health applications - Erasmus Mundus Master in Medical Technology and Healthcare Business

2 - You successfully pointed out the problem that you are facing in your line of medical technology and care. However,...

Scholarshiploonatheworld - Dec 20, 2025Holt - Dec 21, 2025
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Some people think it is better for children to grown up in the city

2 - The first paragraph contains 2 problems: 1. The first sentence is a run-on. The 2 differing opinions must...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Dec 19, 2025Holt - Dec 20, 2025
Motivation letter for Erasmus Mundus Master Impact Entrepreneurship EMMIE

3 - Merged: Motivation letter for Scholarship EMMIE Hello everyone, I am applying to the Erasmus Mundus Joint...

LettersMiftaaj01 - Dec 10, 2025Miftaaj01 - Dec 19, 2025
Why Do Colour Prediction Games Attract So Many Casual Players?"

2 - The presentation lacks an effective introduction. The background of color games and the objective of the game should be...

Student Talkanchal - Dec 18, 2025Holt - Dec 18, 2025
Letter master's Stipendium Hungaricum - Finance

3 - Merged: Motivational essay to master's Stipendium Hungaricum (You don't check it when it's merged) Dear Admissions Committee,...

LettersThe_Paragon - Nov 8, 2025The_Paragon - Dec 17, 2025
Impact Entrepreneurship - Motivation Letter for EMMIE

2 - The letter feels like it has room for improvement. While I liked how you discussed your background and experience...

Lettersvarvar323 - Dec 17, 2025Holt - Dec 17, 2025
more students should be encouraged to go to vocational schools. do you agree or disagree

2 - There are several grammar problems with this essay that need to be addressed, along with the incorrect response format....

Writing FeedbackPhamms - Dec 13, 2025Holt - Dec 13, 2025
IELTS Writing Task 2 - In some countries people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen?

2 - Your prompt restatement omits important aspects of the original topic and does not properly respond to the guide questions....

Writing Feedbacktramvivianvu - Dec 12, 2025Holt - Dec 13, 2025
IELTS Writing Task 1 - housing owned and rented in the UK

2 - This is an automatic failing score Task 1 essay because it does not meet the minimum word count requirement...

Writing Feedbacktramvivianvu - Dec 12, 2025Holt - Dec 13, 2025
GKS G My Personal Statement of Early Childhood Education

2 - Your discussion is very generalized in coverage when the GKS requires a slightly more in-depth representation of your information....

Graduatebbdaga - Dec 11, 2025Holt - Dec 12, 2025
"capable organisations" - a motivational letter

4 - Merged: Motivational answer, does it display devotion and personality? I'm a high school student applying to university....

Letterskafka - Dec 7, 2025kafka - Dec 11, 2025
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Some people believe that the best way to solve environmental problems

2 - The discussion is only 259 words. That number does not maximize the full scoring potential of the essay. The...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Dec 10, 2025Holt - Dec 11, 2025
Stop Aiding War / Humanitarianism - paper

2 - You cannot base this research paper on one source of information alone. That is what is causing the imbalance...

Research Papersliviustoica - Dec 9, 2025Holt - Dec 11, 2025
Math - Cite cases in which you thought/attemped in ways different from others & how it affected you.

2 - Your response cannot be considered unique by the reviewer. The experience you shared is quite common among those who...

Undergraduatewishuthebest - Dec 8, 2025Holt - Dec 8, 2025
Statement of purpose for master application - Semiconductor

2 - This does not show a solid direction in terms of your career path. You are telling the reviewer...

Graduateaudreylee1005 - Dec 7, 2025Holt - Dec 8, 2025
Argument Essay: Should Universities Do Away with Greek Life?

2 - Your presentation of the need to improve the Greek Life is one that is very interesting to read about....

Writing Feedbackjaimesev123 - Dec 7, 2025Holt - Dec 8, 2025
"Seek knowledge in the Land of China" - Personal statement for CUHKSZ

2 - The advice that your parents gave you is the anchor point of this whole essay. Therefore, saying you were...

Undergraduatemer - Dec 6, 2025Holt - Dec 7, 2025
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