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The graph shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000

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Autobiography - College Essay (Taiwan)

3 - @Holt I took your advices into consideration and added this paragraph as the first one I was born...

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"Fascination with Architecture"- CommonApp Personal Statement Rough Draft

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Undergraduatehiwhatsup - Oct 20, 2024Holt - Oct 21, 2024
My history with mathematics!

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UndergraduateSpandy Sigdel - Oct 20, 2024Holt - Oct 21, 2024
Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool.

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International tourism - Advantages/Disadvantages

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Writing Feedbackesswri123 - Oct 19, 2024Holt - Oct 20, 2024
"Restart" - Emerson College - what would you title your story and why?

2 - I would suggest that you use the title of the essay at the very beginning. Use a title header...

UndergraduateLicho - Oct 18, 2024Holt - Oct 19, 2024
Don't make up more trash - Math COMMON APP

2 - I believe that you are trying to discuss the evolution and development of your interest in the Math and...

Undergraduateazuuu - Oct 18, 2024Holt - Oct 18, 2024
Ramen noodles - Personal Essay for College

2 - Ramen noodles are supposed to be a part of the lesson that you learned during this time. However, that...

Undergraduatekidwantsknowledg - Oct 18, 2024Holt - Oct 18, 2024
The given line graph compares the quantities of three companies' waste output for 15 years

2 - Please be guided regarding the word count when accomplishing the task 1 essay. You should be writing within the...

Writing FeedbackDinhthy - Oct 3, 2023Holt - Oct 18, 2024
The chart shows the total distance travelled by passengers on five types of transport in the UK

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UndergraduatePN356 - Oct 17, 2024Holt - Oct 17, 2024
Tintin comics were my favorites - common app essay

2 - I am not sure which prompt you are trying to respond to with this essay so my advice regarding...

UndergraduateAmrutaPundlik - Oct 17, 2024Holt - Oct 17, 2024
Living in a country as a non-native language speaker

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Motivation Letter for Master's Degree in Electrical Engineering at TU Delft

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LettersAnastasis_k - Oct 16, 2024Holt - Oct 17, 2024
The Art of Living - Master Program SoP

3 - I liked your essay. It is indeed a little long, but it does not bother me personally. If it...

Scholarshipvhl000 - Oct 16, 2024Anastasis_k - Oct 16, 2024
Motivation Letter - MSc In Quantitive Finance ETH UZH

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Letterssnane - Oct 16, 2024Anastasis_k - Oct 16, 2024
Introspection poem criticism

3 - @Holt Thank you! Yeah, I was writing this behind a notebook that is usually left open around the house...

Poetryuser_writes - Oct 11, 2024user_writes - Oct 16, 2024
Grandma and quilting - my personal essay for college

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Writing Feedbackelizabethki - Oct 15, 2024elizabethki - Oct 16, 2024
Challenging yourself outside of the comfort zone - Loran scholarship essay

2 - I believe that there is a lack of clarity when it comes to describing what your comfort zone is....

Scholarshipsholokha - Oct 15, 2024Holt - Oct 16, 2024
What determines success in life? - opinion essay

3 - @Holt please help me give another essay basing on mine...

Writing Feedbackkimanhlee - Oct 14, 2024kimanhlee - Oct 15, 2024
Mastercard Scholarship - Msc Public Policy Essay

3 - Thanks a lot for the feedback. I believe you have a point. How about this? Being a...

Scholarshipbadoe - Oct 14, 2024badoe - Oct 15, 2024
Most significant contribution to your school or extended communities - scholarship essay

3 - @Holt Ok, thank you so much for the feedback!...

Scholarshipandrshol15 - Oct 15, 2024andrshol15 - Oct 15, 2024
Biotechnology and bioengineering - commonwealth development impact statement

2 - Unfortunately, your response does not provide the expected responses to the Commonwealth Development Impact statement as required. The written...

GraduateAeshna Agarwal - Oct 14, 2024Holt - Oct 14, 2024
Ballet dancing - Common App Personal Essay

3 - @Holt Thanks for responding, I looked over my essay and also used grammar and could not find any spelling...

Undergraduatek1chikkk - Oct 14, 2024k1chikkk - Oct 14, 2024
Tell us who you are - what would your friends/family say

2 - The most common mistake that college applicants make in this presentation is that they always address the input in...

Undergraduatestrawberrymilk - Oct 14, 2024Holt - Oct 14, 2024
The Paradox of Freedom - A College Entry Essay

2 - Do not lose sight of what these college application essays are for. That is, to help the admissions officers...

Undergraduatemiaarpasi06 - Oct 14, 2024Holt - Oct 14, 2024
Most significant challenge: Living in the shadow of my twin

3 - Hi, I think your response is very interesting to read. Not a lot of people can write about an...

Undergraduateeandrad321 - Oct 8, 2024strawberrymilk - Oct 14, 2024
The proportion of dramatic, fantasy films and comedies - Mix Bar graphs

2 - The essay is overwritten at 207 words. The maximum allowable word count for the task 1 essay is 200...

Writing Feedbacklinhiu - Oct 13, 2024Holt - Oct 13, 2024
Task2: Nowadays, people store knowledge on the internet instead of in books.

2 - I believe that I have already warned you about including a personal opinion at the start of the...

Writing FeedbackHelen335 - Oct 13, 2024Holt - Oct 13, 2024
Motivational Letters - MSc in Sustainable Outdoor Hospitality Management

3 - Ensure each paragraph has a clear focus. You could structure it around your experiences, skills gained, and how they...

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