Asma Raj
Sep 15, 2016
Writing Feedback / There is no reason to show some special attitude toward people based on their age [3]
Hello @DmitryB,
I would like to give some corrections in your Essay.
1. the olderpersonspeople
Explanation: "person" is singular and to change it being plural is no need to add 's' but the plural form of person is "people.
2. the highest priority ...
3. ... the mental distancebetweenamong generations even longer.
Explanation: If we use "between", it should be followed "and". For example, ... between ... and ...
Hello @DmitryB,
I would like to give some corrections in your Essay.
1. the older
Explanation: "person" is singular and to change it being plural is no need to add 's' but the plural form of person is "people.
2. the highest priority ...
3. ... the mental distance
Explanation: If we use "between", it should be followed "and". For example, ... between ... and ...