ershad193
Jul 29, 2010
Writing Feedback / GRE Essay:- "Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible [6]
I agree that it's not necessary to always argue in favor or against the issue, but what I meant was that your stand should be clear from the beginning. The reader should know that you are sitting on the fence.
You're absolutely right. Learning proper grammar is a time consuming process. I pointed out that fact because most of your writing is fine. It's just that those mistakes sometimes distort the meaning.
Ok I'll point out a few.
And, as we human beings
there will be contradictions and clashes for using
Keeping the basic purpose ofthea law in mind, the basic assumption made by abovementionedaforementioned phrases seems to be true that a law should be flexible enough to take into account various circumstances, times, and places.
Can you see where you are going wrong? You have got most of the complicated stuff sorted out; you just need to avoid those silly mistakes. It's like you've derived a formula to solve a really difficult mathematical problem, but finally made a mistake while performing an addition or subtraction.
Work on these. They won't take a lot of time.
I have not defended the issue raised by the topic fully, but only partially. Do you think it's necessary to argue against or in the favor of any issue?
I agree that it's not necessary to always argue in favor or against the issue, but what I meant was that your stand should be clear from the beginning. The reader should know that you are sitting on the fence.
but you can understand that it will take some time.
You're absolutely right. Learning proper grammar is a time consuming process. I pointed out that fact because most of your writing is fine. It's just that those mistakes sometimes distort the meaning.
Please help me to find out those mistakes
Ok I'll point out a few.
And, as we human beings
there will be contradictions and clashes for using
Keeping the basic purpose of
Can you see where you are going wrong? You have got most of the complicated stuff sorted out; you just need to avoid those silly mistakes. It's like you've derived a formula to solve a really difficult mathematical problem, but finally made a mistake while performing an addition or subtraction.
Work on these. They won't take a lot of time.