Writing Feedback / Writing Task 1, The chart below shows the sleep patterns of people in five different occupations [2]

The breakdown of information regarding the sleep patterns such as asleep and awake of people who have five different professions according to Canadian research. Overall, it can be seen that students have slepping regularly despite of truck driver, while lack of sleep is experienced by doctor .

Looking for the graph, from 7.00 am, marginally the majority of people already begin to do their activities where students are going to shcool and employess are bound by job towards their office. While doctors who heal the disease of patient have to come to the hospital earlier. In contrast, housewifes who undertake daily activity stay at house, nevertheless after finishing their job casually they are asleep suddenly. In the same time, truck driver has to take a rest a moment over 3 hours each morning and afternoon.

Moving to the next time, from 10.00 pm, this condition is used by mostly people to sleep, however doctor is still waiting their patients to sleep. While truck driver have to continue the trip taking items or passengers to fulfill a request.

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Writing Feedback / Fertility of women in their forties in Aussie country [2]

Writing Task 1, Number of children ever born, women aged 40-44 years old.

The given table shows the information regarding number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years old in Australia during twenty five years from 1981 to 2006, measured by percentage. Overall, it is really important to notice that marginally women tend to have two children instead of more or less, while none of kids' proportion always experienced a upward trend over these period.

Initially, in the first two years, a slight plummet was seen in the bar of four or more children and three children which stood at similar level aroud 27 %. It was followed by none and one child which increased slowly about one percent. The highest appeared to be true which comes from almost less than a third then reached 35 % in the next following year.

Eventually, the former' bar far left the other that had proportion nearly two-fifths. While the percentage of women who ever gave birth three and four or more children experienced a decrease slighly. Interestingly, an upward trend dramatic were sustained by the other categories in the last year.

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Writing Feedback / Wiriting Task 1 (The chart and table below reports about populations figures in Japan) [3]

The given bar chart and table perform the information regarding the number of population in Japan during more one century from 1950 to 2055 years, measured by percentage and millions. Overall, it is really important to notice that the highest population happened in year 2005 and experienced change after restriction having children that will be predicted downward in the future years.

Initially, the amount of inhabitation stood at 4,1 millions people in the fisrt year which had percentage about one in twenty. Then it was followed in the next years that rose considerably reached 34 % from percentage of total population. Suprisingly, It was the largest one over fourty five years.

Eventually, by implementing a brilliant program, families who live in whole regions of Japan have to obey the rule to limit the number of children. As the result, the population of resident is decreasing gradually reached 125,4 millions people in 2005. Interestingly, it will experience an upward enormously in the last year approximately twenty millions percent of total population.

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Writing Feedback / Writing Task I, the number of tourist travelled abroad over one decade between 1985 and 1995 [2]

The given table shows information regarding the number of states tourist who travelled overseas during one decade from 1985 to 1995 years, measured in million. Overall, it is really important to notice that a high increase was experienced by Japanese tourists who visited other countries. While the number of Canada tourists plunged slightly in the last period.

Initially, in the first year Australia's proportion became the largest one among another state which reached seven point one million of people. It was followed by Canada's figure started at 6 million. While Japanese's level had lower proportion nearly five million of people.

Eventually, in the next following years Japanese's proportion abandoned the others which achieved 15 million. While the number of Australians who visited the other states experienced a stable level. In contrast, a slightly downward was seen in the number Canada's figure by five hundered thousand of people in the last year.

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Writing Feedback / Writing Task 1, the graphs below provide information on global population in diffrent regions [2]

The breakdown of information regarding population growth in different regions as well as developing and developed states during three centuries from 1800 to 2100 years, measured by millions of people. Overall, it is really important to notice that the highest inhabitation of developing regions will reach a peak dramatically in 2040.

Initially, in the first year trend of developing regions seadily started at one biliions of people. The growth of population always experince a tremendous upward in the next following years. Noticeably, a high rise was seen in the line of developing regions reached seven billion of residents in 2015. In the same period, advanced regions appeared which had number of populations more than less 1300 millions.

Eventually, by mantaining a resctriction of inhabitation growth, as the results, it will be predicted that population of developed regions will expericence a similar number in 2040. While this year will be largest population of developing states during whole period. Interestingly, a sharply decline will be followed in the last year even will reach the same level in the present time.

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Writing Feedback / Experiences are the best teacher - they help us to learn better for the future [2]

What is the experience ? something or many things that were done by someone when at the past time. Then it can be got to determine an option or present or future decision. Much of what we know and understand has been learned through experiences. We will learn many things from experience that happens to us in real life than we just read or learn from something. there are some reasons why experience is the best teacher, namely ; the first is to determine a decision. if you have a problem or a choice. Of course, you must select which the better for you. If you have experience about that so you can be easier to get a decision. By way of ilustration, if you go to restaurant where many kinds of food, so you will not be confused since you ever tried to order some menus over there. Because you have experience about menus, you can choose a decision easly. The second is to learn from experience, not only does experience leave an impression in our mind but also we can learn from it. Experience isn't just about learning new skills but it's just exploring ourselves such as collage students intern in the company. Through internships, collage student can learn what to set themselves. On the other hand, internships allow collage students to learn from proffesionals in the workplace . And the last, experiences are required to upgrade our career. if you work in a company. Experinces are very important to improve your career. if there is promotite position for instance a manager. The company usually will prioritize someone who has many experiences in their field. Although some people think that the best way to learn about life is by learning from our elders and friends. I really believe that people learn the best way by their experiences. In conclusion experinces help us to learn better for the future. I do not care how many books you read, but experiences are the best teacher.