Writing Feedback / The percentage of transportation access by people who come to New Zealand [2]

The chart gives information about the percentage of transportation access by people who come to New Zealand. Overall, the most popular method of people, when they are traveled in New Zealand by public transportation, more than 80 percent. The visitor who choose traveled by public transportation bigger than by using private transportation.

There are five kind of transportation that people used when they are traveled in New Zealand, by car, plane, coach, train and boat. The most common people traveled by car, at under 70 percent. And two kind of transportation that visitor used almost the same amount by plane and coach, more than 30 percent. It is bigger than using by train at 20 percent. The least transportation who people used when they are traveled in New Zealand by boat, at less than 10 percent.

Writing Feedback / Few years ago, many inhabitants lived in big community in the small area. But now it's different. [2]

In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in the large cities where they only know a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?.

Nowadays, there are many different lifestyles of urban people than in the past. Few years ago, many inhabitants lived in big community in the small area. But now, the citizen living in the large area with small community. I think, there are advantages and disadvantages to living in small community.

I think, there are three main benefit. Firstly, the citizen has a private area for living. Private area for urban community is primary needed when they choose area of living. Secondly, every people has comfortable area to alive, such as peace, quite space, clean zone for living. The third, they have good facilities in area of living, such as garden for their children, big street, sport area, and jogging area.

However, I believe that many disadvantages about the interaction of people to others. Firstly, the citizen will be unknown everything to other people. They lost to communicate in their community. Also make unfriendly inhabitants. They ignore to help the other. This condition establish individualistic lifestyle.

In my view, individualistic life style is manner which person to alive, that can influence to high anxiety, competition, and the impact is cultivate large of depresople.

Writing Feedback / TED Video by Negin Farsad: Taxonomy of Haters [2]

Much social problems in America, for example nature, waffle and healthy. And, there are three categories of American inhabitants that is 90 percent is Wonderful people, 3% from Florida and 7% is Haters. Wonderful people is kind of citizen has polite, good personality, friendly, etc. Florida is the Florida citizens who live in US. And the last is Haters. Haters has 7% from American inhabitants, but provide impact to extra loud for American inhabitant. It is a complex demographic problem, because they ignore what they are hate and the comedian create the hater as materials of kidding. Negative outcome occurs by haters is racism and violence.

Negin Farsad found with the highly scientific taxonomy of haters conclude, firstly is haters 2.0. Secondly is drive by haters, and the third is the mission oriented bigot whose group affiliation gives them for hating haters and the last is swing haters. Swing haters is very interesting because they swing vote to like and dislike the people or community without more data what they hate. The result of information regression analysis shows 90% people to haters just for fun by comedy.

Comedy is popular for hating. Comedy work with social justice, when comedy make you laughing you will be openness for say something, what you like and dislike. Openness is good moment to invite you for hating something. There four parts social justice of comedy rules that is not partisan, inviting but warm, funny but sneaky and occasional pants but sneaky. Overall, all thing in social comedian justice are not funny. So, it is time to train a really proof of joke.

Writing Feedback / Summary an article : Parents Giving Unproven IQ-Boosting Drugs to Kids with Down's [3]

Recently, some families choose to provide drugs for their children with Down's syndrome, because they think if that medicine can be alter the part and chemistry of the brain. Alteration of the brain by drugs can be improve the people intelligence with Down's syndrome. But, Mara Dierssen at the Centre for Genomic Regulation in Barcelona, Spain says if that idea was absurd. Because in methodically not yet to tested for the Down's syndrome.

Down's syndrome happen when a fertilization process, the egg produce extra chromosome. Also impact with baby's healthy. The IQ of the Down's syndrome is about 50 less than the normal people. But, the researcher founded that consume the bumetanide drugs be able to block particle of Down's syndrome in mice brain.

Carol Tamminga at the University of Texas Southwestern Medical Center in Dallas originate that many parents would rather try Prozac themselves than the danger of the trial's placebo group. Also EGCG from the green tea decrease an enzyme activity in the brains of people with Down's syndrome. The result of placebo-tested describe that linking memory, thinking, and mental focus.

newscientist.com/article/mg23130864-100-parents-giving-unproven-iqboosting-drugs-to-kids-with-downs/

Writing Feedback / Summary an article: Finding the right switch can solve the biggest problems [2]

United States government discovered badly behave about less nutrition problem in their citizen, during second war world. The meaty problem that happen in citizen is the part of meal problem. So, to control it. The citizen must to trying another meal like vegetable and healthy food by import of food from another country. But, until this program it is over. Many inhabitant stilled in short of nourishment.

Finally, United States employed new scientist in anthropologist, Margaret Mead and social psychologist, Kurt Lewin. Mead and Lewin researched what the psychological conflict happen in US society. The result of research is the citizen branded as the meal of the poor and they don't belief about the way of prepare it. So, they conclude offal lost is stigma, and we need for nutrition support.

Now, based on the research many psychologist to develop the therapy model as psychology intervention to change the behavior of society. They believe WPI is the answer for food problem in citizen in US by alteration of the mental blocking.

Writing Feedback / Summary of Video: Wired Happiness [3]

Most citizen in urban society always say "Life to be short to unhappy". Happy is a word that many people search. But actually, the first question is "what do you have to get in order to be happy?". The psychologist research conclude if every people think if I will be happy when I get the good job, when I get the highest salary, when I have marriage, when I have a children, and if I all thing that I want. But after they get all thing that they want they still unhappy. What the problem actually?

Based on the Srikumar Rao as a happiness teacher say, actually we entire life learning to be unhappy. Every person have a mental model. The mental model is habitual wanting that every person leaning unhappy life. According to the Rao suggestion is you must think if outcome is completely outside of your control. Outcome is not guarantee to get happy. So forget about the outcome and focusing the process.