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The Paradox of Freedom - A College Entry Essay

2 - Do not lose sight of what these college application essays are for. That is, to help the admissions officers...

Undergraduatemiaarpasi06 - Oct 14, 2024Holt - Oct 14, 2024
The proportion of dramatic, fantasy films and comedies - Mix Bar graphs

2 - The essay is overwritten at 207 words. The maximum allowable word count for the task 1 essay is 200...

Writing Feedbacklinhiu - Oct 13, 2024Holt - Oct 13, 2024
Task2: Nowadays, people store knowledge on the internet instead of in books.

2 - I believe that I have already warned you about including a personal opinion at the start of the...

Writing FeedbackHelen335 - Oct 13, 2024Holt - Oct 13, 2024
Is an Application Essay the same as a SOP or Letter of Intent?

2 - You were right to come to us first to ask this question. There are various graduate application essays that...

EssaysOluwabusayo - Oct 13, 2024Holt - Oct 13, 2024
Introspection poem criticism

3 - @Holt Thank you! Yeah, I was writing this behind a notebook that is usually left open around the house...

Poetryuser_writes - Oct 11, 2024user_writes - Oct 16, 2024
Become main front-end developer - Chevening Leadership and Influence Essay

3 - Hello, How can I contact you Holt? Please. See the email above for my private (paid) consultations (ie....

Scholarshiphabib_baharuddin - Oct 11, 2024elizabeth1991 - Oct 12, 2024
Essay #1 Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups

2 - You are too simplistic in your discussion. Review the requirements for the content and the basis of the discussion....

UndergraduateNandia20060709 - Oct 11, 2024Holt - Oct 12, 2024
Defeated ego (undergraduate essay)

2 - You need to edit the word count for this essay. You have to bring it down to 200 or...

UndergraduateMomovich - Oct 11, 2024Holt - Oct 12, 2024
Editing help about table description "trend"

2 - Try to gain more C+C points in the summary overview section by dividing the thoughts/information into at least 3...

Writing Feedbackdieulinh0606 - Oct 10, 2024Holt - Oct 12, 2024
Motivational Letters - MSc in Sustainable Outdoor Hospitality Management

3 - Ensure each paragraph has a clear focus. You could structure it around your experiences, skills gained, and how they...

Lettersjudyyy123 - Oct 10, 2024Nandia20060709 - Oct 13, 2024
importance of friendship - UBC Personal Profile - What's important to you

2 - I would not change anything about your response to the prompt. It is important to discuss how your mental...

Undergraduatestrawberrymilk - Oct 10, 2024Holt - Oct 12, 2024
Most significant challenge: Living in the shadow of my twin

3 - Hi, I think your response is very interesting to read. Not a lot of people can write about an...

Undergraduateeandrad321 - Oct 8, 2024strawberrymilk - Oct 14, 2024
Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar -

2 - Read the original prompt. It is written in the past tense format. Therefore, your writing format should follow...

Writing Feedbackphuthanhngoc - Oct 8, 2024Holt - Oct 12, 2024
Task 2: Nations should spend more money on skills and vocational training for practical work

2 - Do not make it a habit to misrepresent the original statement in your paraphrasing. This time, the presentation...

Writing FeedbackHelen335 - Oct 8, 2024Holt - Oct 12, 2024
Task 2: Climate change has a negative impact, while others think it providdes more opportunities

2 - This is not supported in the original statement. Examiners will view this as a personal opinion on your...

Writing FeedbackHelen335 - Oct 8, 2024Holt - Oct 12, 2024
Task 2: In many countries, mainly tourists, but not local people, visit museums and historical sites

2 - There is no such phrase in English. Did you mean "worthy of concern" instead? Remember that just because...

Writing FeedbackHelen335 - Oct 8, 2024Holt - Oct 12, 2024
Writing task 2: Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life.

2 - I am not sure why you are referring to the whole world and many countries in your restatement...

Writing Feedbackthaonhu - Oct 8, 2024Holt - Oct 12, 2024
discuss: public libraries or digital information

2 - Ramifications connotes a negative or unwelcome event. You are going to find yourself with LR deductions along with...

Writing Feedbackminahtran - Oct 6, 2024Holt - Oct 12, 2024
How well I know the applicant - Davidson Peer Recommendation Essay

2 - You are not the right person to be writing this essay for this applicant because you do not really...

Undergraduatech3gl - Oct 6, 2024Holt - Oct 10, 2024
Non commmunicable diseases - commonwealth masters scholarship statement

3 - You've effectively highlighted the global prevalence of NCDs. Consider briefly mentioning the socioeconomic factors that contribute to this crisis...

ScholarshipWandi - Oct 6, 2024Nandia20060709 - Oct 11, 2024
Career Development and Coaching Studies MA - Leadership and Influence Chevening

2 - Show it, do not say it. This sentence makes you sound so unprofessional. It is like a high...

Scholarshipbiamendes - Oct 5, 2024Holt - Oct 10, 2024
The table shows information and predictions regarding the changes in percentage of the population

4 - Hello Your essay is very similar to mine when I did the IELTS test. I had 7.5 on my...

Writing Feedbackpotatogoubi - Oct 5, 2024Momovich - Oct 11, 2024
Writing task 2: Many people believe that there should be only one world legal system

2 - Think is not the same as "believe". The term "think" leaves room for doubt while "believe" does not....

Writing Feedbackdangnhatanh - Oct 5, 2024Holt - Oct 10, 2024
Personal statement - integrative systems biology PhD program Pitt University

2 - Never indicate that you were not interested in a certain field until later on. Being a PhD applicant,...

Graduatesouthlab - Oct 5, 2024Holt - Oct 10, 2024
Communications between different parts of the world

2 - There is no need to mention individuals in this instance since there was no reference to it in...

Writing Feedbackxoeyielts - Oct 4, 2024Holt - Oct 10, 2024
Should I apply ED NYU Stern or wait RD (Meh GPA can improve)

3 - @Holt thank you for your reply! So do you believe the benefits of the GPA boost outweigh the...

Essaysliujseb - Oct 4, 2024liujseb - Oct 4, 2024
Looking for Suggestions on My College Admission Essay

2 - You must post your essay to receive a review of the content based upon the concerns you stated. I...

EssaysAbelnicholas - Oct 3, 2024Holt - Oct 4, 2024
The Death Penalty is the best way to control and reduce serious crime. To what extent do you agree?

5 - In the sentence 'To begin, it's undeniable that the death is penalty is partly useful for reducing dangerous crimes,'...

Writing FeedbackMandamy - Oct 3, 2024Helen335 - Oct 8, 2024
In order to study at university, students is required to pay expensive tuition fees.

3 - In the sentence 'However, some individuals think that the abolition of tuition fees play an important role to make...

Writing FeedbackLapis - Oct 3, 2024Helen335 - Oct 8, 2024
Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment

3 - In the sentence 'However, humans can take measures to address these problems,' consider specifying what types of measures could...

Writing Feedbackhalinhislearning - Oct 3, 2024Helen335 - Oct 8, 2024
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