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The diagram show how use glass bottles are recycled.

2 - A diagram is a general term for an instructional drawing. Try to be more specific when it comes...

Writing Feedbacknhinhinhi999 - Aug 30, 2025 / Holt - Aug 31, 2025
Working from Home: A Beneficial Trend in the Modern World - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - There are several prompts that use this topic as a part of the discussion point. That makes it difficult...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Aug 30, 2025 / Holt - Aug 30, 2025
International travelers landing in the UK - Ielts Writing Task 1: Line graph

2 - The summary overview should have at least 3 sentences in it. It should restate the type of image, measurement...

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Beechwood Farm - Map - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - When writing the report, you must always assume that the reader does not have a copy of the...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Aug 28, 2025 / Holt - Aug 29, 2025
No need to go to watch live performances? - Opinion Essay - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - Incorrect time line reference. The original reference used was "These days" so the alternative reference would be "Recently"...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Aug 27, 2025 / Holt - Aug 27, 2025
Various household goods between 2001 and 2008 - Dynamic bar chart - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - The summary overview is supposed to comprise at least a 3 sentence paragraph. The contents of that paragraph should...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Aug 25, 2025 / Holt - Aug 26, 2025
News media have become more influential in people's lives.

2 - The essay asks you for the extent of your support for one of the 2 given public opinions in...

Writing Feedbackbtra - Aug 25, 2025 / Holt - Aug 26, 2025
What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility? - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - There is an LR problem in the first paragraph. There is a big difference between damage and desctruction. Damage...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Aug 25, 2025 / Holt - Aug 25, 2025
Obese people overwhelm the healthcare system? - IELTS WARRIOR

2 - The reference in the sentence is incomplete. Where are the sessions to be added? It is stated in...

Writing FeedbackMr Calma - Aug 24, 2025 / Holt - Aug 25, 2025
IELTS writing task 2- difference between working from home and working in office.

3 - Can you please tell me how can I write the first paragraph properly from this essay?...

Writing FeedbackfaiqaFARHEEN - Aug 21, 2025 / faiqaFARHEEN - Aug 24, 2025
An essay titled Social Media and Teen Mental Health

2 - Revise the first paragraph to be more of a proper thesis statement. Follow the correct format by providing an...

Writing FeedbackCJohnson1052 - Aug 24, 2025 / Holt - Aug 24, 2025
Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world.

2 - The opening statement will receive a failing task accuracy score because you did not respond to the questions...

Writing Feedbacktt1405 - Aug 18, 2025 / Holt - Aug 21, 2025
Looking Back at the US Civil War

2 - Remove the term infamous. There is no need to exaggerate the American Civil war. Nor is there a...

Writing FeedbackWinstonRa - Aug 17, 2025 / Holt - Aug 17, 2025
Mental game - three areas of weakness or the description of the research paper project

2 - 1. I do not believe that the research paper should indicate a focus on Beach Volleyball because the discussion...

Writing Feedbackabbiemunro06 - Aug 16, 2025 / Holt - Aug 17, 2025
Essay about the fact that celebrities earn more money than politicians, the reasons and opinions!-fb

2 - The first problem with your essay is the incorrect restatement of the original prompt. You are referring to information...

Writing Feedbackmybutmy - Aug 16, 2025 / Holt - Aug 17, 2025
IS taking regular health check-ups unnecessary if one feels healthy?

2 - You overwrote this essay. With only 49 minutes to craft a properly worded and coherent essay, you are expected...

Writing Feedbackngocbich022 - Aug 11, 2025 / Holt - Aug 14, 2025
Essay on time travelling to work or school

2 - While this essay is composed of 280 words, it does not follow the proper compare and contrast discussion for...

Writing FeedbackDUC TRAN - Aug 9, 2025 / Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Equality in governments and politics (IELTS WRITING TASK 2)

2 - There are only 2 reasons that you will be discussing, you m ust indicate these as a solid...

Writing FeedbackBrian Nguyen - Aug 9, 2025 / Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Climate Change's Role in Undermining Global Food Security

2 - The main problem with this essay is the lack of insight from the writer. All of the major paragraphs...

Writing FeedbackStrayKids07 - Aug 9, 2025 / Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Activities - film club, martial arts, amateur dramatics, table tennis and musical performances

2 - Kindly remember to use a minimum of 2 sentences in the summary overview. You must summarize the information in...

Writing Feedbackdreamfulcherry - Aug 7, 2025 / Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Changing rates of three different areas of crime in Newport city

2 - The presentation is well within the word count consideration for high scores in all categories. However, the lack of...

Writing Feedbacklinhchi0330 - Aug 8, 2025 / Holt - Aug 10, 2025
IELTS task 2 - problems-solutions about ecotourism's effects on local cultures, people, environment.

2 - You have over written this essay. You cannot write more than 300 words for the presentation because you are...

Writing FeedbackBeamlee123 - Aug 6, 2025 / Holt - Aug 10, 2025
IELTS writing task 2- opinion essay on physical and mental strength

2 - The prompt restatement is missing in this presentation. The first paragraph is expected to represent your understanding of the...

Writing FeedbackfaiqaFARHEEN - Aug 5, 2025 / Holt - Aug 10, 2025
Undocumented, Unprotected, Unjust: Destroying the American Dream

2 - The focus of this paper is all over the place. The actual topics for discussion do not come from...

Writing Feedbackvickilugo2025 - Aug 3, 2025 / Holt - Aug 8, 2025
Owing a home rather than renting one ,why might this be the case?Is this a positive or negative case

2 - You cannot refer to a particular opinion as being true in this essay. You end up misrepresenting the...

Writing Feedbacknollen - Aug 2, 2025 / Holt - Aug 3, 2025
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - views on school and parents about teaching children to become a good citizen

2 - The introduction / prompt restatement is missing one sentence. While you accurately restated the topic, and you gave your...

Writing Feedbackdivine_9 - Aug 1, 2025 / Holt - Aug 1, 2025
Advantages versus disadvantages of choosing to build their own houses with their own styles.

2 - Your topic restatement is difficult to understand. You are trying to sound like a native English speaker, but, due...

Writing FeedbackZenith Peregrine - Aug 1, 2025 / Holt - Aug 1, 2025
Some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences

2 - The paper is overwritten at 338 words. It will be impossible for you to write the same number of...

Writing Feedbackcuniuu - Jul 31, 2025 / Holt - Aug 1, 2025
Combating Human Trafficking - English Final Paper

2 - I can sense your familiarity with the topic. It is well researched and you portray an understanding of human...

Writing FeedbackBShaw99 - Jul 31, 2025 / Holt - Aug 1, 2025
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Effect of sleeping less

2 - You have not written enough words to aim for a band 8 score. You should write closer to 300...

Writing Feedbackdivine_9 - Jul 30, 2025 / Holt - Jul 31, 2025
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - MUSEUM AND ART

2 - It is nice to know that you side with them. However, you did not properly answer the question....

Writing Feedbackcamhoanieltswri - Jul 30, 2025 / Holt - Jul 31, 2025
Some people believe that if police force carries guns, this encourages higher level of violence

2 - Even though you wrote 283 words for this essay, it is not going to receive a passing score in...

Writing Feedbackannghin - Jul 27, 2025 / Holt - Jul 29, 2025
IELST writing task 2 - Essay about the importance of art classes

2 - While you write a clear compare and contrast essay for the given topic, there are problems with your presentation...

Writing Feedbackalazystudent - Jul 25, 2025 / Holt - Jul 26, 2025
The Impact of Technology on Characters on the Digital Era

2 - The backfire aspect of the discussion is not as well developed as the helpful aspect of the presentation. That...

Writing FeedbackYooStillLearning - Jul 19, 2025 / Holt - Jul 20, 2025
More young adults than older people — advantages or disadvantages?

2 - The format for the response to the prompt is acceptable, but not the type of explanation that would earn...

Writing Feedbackwiniari - Jul 14, 2025 / Holt - Jul 16, 2025
Children's, Family's Separation at the border

2 - I hope that this essay is only a draft and you have not submitted this to your teacher yet....

Writing FeedbackKchavez2 - Jul 12, 2025 / Holt - Jul 13, 2025
The maps show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development

2 - While the essay is well written and does provide the information necessary for the changes, the presentation is not...

Writing Feedbackwiniari - Jul 11, 2025 / Holt - Jul 13, 2025
Essay about Travelling alone

2 - When asked to write a compare and contrast essay, you need to provide your opinion within the discussion paragraphs....

Writing FeedbackHong2012 - Jul 8, 2025 / Holt - Jul 9, 2025
The Opioid Epidemic A National Crisis in Need of Reform

2 - While the research and opinion paper itself is well developed and presented, I feel that there is a lack...

Writing Feedbackjenniferdailyn - Jun 21, 2025 / Holt - Jun 22, 2025
The bar charts show the proportion of 14-to 16-year-old students studying a foreign languages

2 - How are the bar charts separated? Identify the bar charts per title for the clarification of the reader....

Writing FeedbackUyen Nhi - Jun 17, 2025 / Holt - Jun 18, 2025
The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different count

3 - @Holt Thank you for the valuable feedback....

Writing Feedbackkandetri - Jun 14, 2025 / kandetri - Jun 15, 2025
Learning the second language - IELTS Writing task 2: Discussion

2 - You did an almost fine job of paraphrasing the original prompt. The problem is that you retained the phrasea...

Writing FeedbackCarolinee - Jun 15, 2025 / Holt - Jun 15, 2025
Question: What are the environmental benefits of electric cars?

3 - I think it's a topic we should be aware of and clear about if we have to get to...

Writing FeedbackDuekhanh - Jun 13, 2025 / Valentina25 - Jun 14, 2025
Writing task 2: The environment.

3 - I really liked the topic. We need to be much more aware....

Writing FeedbackDuekhanh - Jun 14, 2025 / Valentina25 - Jun 14, 2025
The Benifits of Printing Press

2 - Your effort to write in English is noted. However, there are several problems that you need to address in...

Writing FeedbackDuekhanh - Jun 13, 2025 / Holt - Jun 14, 2025
Why is health detector a leading initiative to help the poor easily access healthcare?

2 - The statement lacks substance. What is the product about? What does it do? How does it do it? What...

Writing FeedbackDuekhanh - Jun 13, 2025 / Holt - Jun 14, 2025
What are the advantages of social media?

2 - Let us start with the basics of English sentence writing. The requirement for beginner English language learners is that...

Writing FeedbackDuekhanh - Jun 13, 2025 / Holt - Jun 14, 2025
Argumentative paper: The Price for Life: A Profit-Driven Healthcare

3 - @tfreeman This was a very detailed and informative script. You did well. Though you should work on the flow...

Writing Feedbacktfreeman - Jun 11, 2025 / Moon_Moon - Jun 12, 2025
Tiltle: What are the positive and negative efects of tourism on a place that you know well?

2 - Do not use an ellipses when writing an academic essay. That punctuation mark indicates that you are thinking...

Writing FeedbackKany2711 - Jun 12, 2025 / Holt - Jun 12, 2025
Adult education centre attendance - IELTS CHART

2 - Do not indicate the position of the image in the report. The reader is presumed to not have...

Writing Feedbackjulianaji - Jun 12, 2025 / Holt - Jun 12, 2025
My IELTS writing task 2 with topic about online studying and working

2 - Automatic failing score in the TA section. This is not a compare, contrast, then provide an opinion essay....

Writing FeedbackBrian Nguyen - Jun 12, 2025 / Holt - Jun 12, 2025
Students in Canada and the US by country of origin: Table graph

2 - The same error exists as in your previous essay. properly identify the image and mention the number of...

Writing FeedbackKany2711 - Jun 11, 2025 / Holt - Jun 12, 2025
Reasons for migration to and from the UK - Writing task 1: Pie chart

2 - There are 2 mistakes in this immediate presentation: 1. The proper image title was not cited (pie chart)...

Writing FeedbackKany2711 - Jun 11, 2025 / Holt - Jun 12, 2025
Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing.

2 - This is an example of an automatic failing final score essay. Once you write less than 250 words, the...

Writing Feedbacklannnnnn - Jun 10, 2025 / Holt - Jun 10, 2025
The graphs below show the different reasons of two group of students to choose Dorriford University

2 - Task 1 essays should not be more than 200 words in representation. That is because you are given 1...

Writing Feedbackhuyentran123456 - Jun 10, 2025 / Holt - Jun 10, 2025
The essay about the future diplomat! I've written many personal statement, this one calls out to me.

3 - @Holt Hi! Thank you very much for the clarification. But I had a question, should I change the whole...

Writing FeedbackAnvita1910 - Jun 10, 2025 / Anvita1910 - Jun 10, 2025
Some famous people are considered as role models, and they are having an increasing influence

2 - While you fulfilled the TA discussion requirements and properly provided a personal opinion based upon the writing instructions, I...

Writing Feedbacknailanaila - Jun 7, 2025 / Holt - Jun 7, 2025
Discuss both view on the matter of whether children should engaged in some kind of paid work.

2 - Points will be deducted from your TA score because you failed to provide a thesis statement that represents...

Writing Feedbackduydinh - Jun 7, 2025 / Holt - Jun 7, 2025
Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal.

2 - You have changed the discussion prompt and therefore, failed the Tast Accuracy section of the scoring rubic. The...

Writing Feedbackwiniari - Jun 5, 2025 / Holt - Jun 5, 2025
Expenditures on food and clothes - IELTS- Writing task 1-Mixed charts

2 - The essay has too many words. You should be writing only 200 words maximum for this task since you...

Writing FeedbackSoradamouse - Jun 2, 2025 / Holt - Jun 2, 2025

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