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Task 2: In many countries, mainly tourists, but not local people, visit museums and historical sites

2 - There is no such phrase in English. Did you mean "worthy of concern" instead? Remember that just because...

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Writing task 2: Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life.

2 - I am not sure why you are referring to the whole world and many countries in your restatement...

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discuss: public libraries or digital information

2 - Ramifications connotes a negative or unwelcome event. You are going to find yourself with LR deductions along with...

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Managing the internship program - CHEVENING - LEADERSHIP & INFLUENCE SKILLS

5 - hello, I think you need to highlight your impact on what you contributed when you led the intern...

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Building strong network and relationships - Chevening

3 - I suggest you to use STAR method while writing you essay it will make your essay way more structured....

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Non commmunicable diseases - commonwealth masters scholarship statement

3 - You've effectively highlighted the global prevalence of NCDs. Consider briefly mentioning the socioeconomic factors that contribute to this crisis...

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The table shows information and predictions regarding the changes in percentage of the population

4 - Hello Your essay is very similar to mine when I did the IELTS test. I had 7.5 on my...

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How well I know the applicant - Davidson Peer Recommendation Essay

2 - You are not the right person to be writing this essay for this applicant because you do not really...

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Career Development and Coaching Studies MA - Leadership and Influence Chevening

2 - Show it, do not say it. This sentence makes you sound so unprofessional. It is like a high...

Scholarshipbiamendes - Oct 5, 2024Holt - Oct 10, 2024
Writing task 2: Many people believe that there should be only one world legal system

2 - Think is not the same as "believe". The term "think" leaves room for doubt while "believe" does not....

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Personal statement - integrative systems biology PhD program Pitt University

2 - Never indicate that you were not interested in a certain field until later on. Being a PhD applicant,...

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Communications between different parts of the world

2 - There is no need to mention individuals in this instance since there was no reference to it in...

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Some think newspapers are the best method for reading the news

4 - In the sentence 'In conclusion, while there are mixed opinions on determining whether using newspapers or other media for...

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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment

3 - In the sentence 'However, humans can take measures to address these problems,' consider specifying what types of measures could...

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The Death Penalty is the best way to control and reduce serious crime. To what extent do you agree?

5 - In the sentence 'To begin, it's undeniable that the death is penalty is partly useful for reducing dangerous crimes,'...

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Why do we need music? Is a country's traditional music more important than international music

5 - In the sentence 'Firstly, Some Asian conventional styles still keep outdated lyrics that are more sexual than accepted in...

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In order to study at university, students is required to pay expensive tuition fees.

3 - In the sentence 'However, some individuals think that the abolition of tuition fees play an important role to make...

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WRITING TASK 1 - PROCESS - How drinking water is made using solar power.

4 - In the sentence 'The process continues with the stage when the converted energy is used to generate a pump...

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Should I apply ED NYU Stern or wait RD (Meh GPA can improve)

3 - @Holt thank you for your reply! So do you believe the benefits of the GPA boost outweigh the...

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Looking for Suggestions on My College Admission Essay

2 - You must post your essay to receive a review of the content based upon the concerns you stated. I...

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An increasing number of people choosing to have cosmetic surgeryto improve their appearance

3 - @xuanxnxn Hi, i suggest that you should include some specific examples such as korean extreme obsession with plastic surgery...

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Commonwealth Masters Scholarship Pharmacology and Drug Discovery MSc

3 - Thank you so much for taking your time to review my essay....

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Discuss both views for high salaries

3 - @ptt513 Hi, I think you should change the phrase "numerous of teenager usually are under peer pressure" into "numberous...

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Experience as an exchange Erasmus student - Chevening essay on Leadership and Influence

2 - Your presentation is dull and not interesting. So you were an EM scholar in the past. So what? There...

Scholarshipabunwer61 - Oct 1, 2024Holt - Oct 2, 2024
WRITING TASK 1 - PROCESS - THE PRODUCTION OF BEER

2 - There are 2 things wrong with this summary overview section. The first problem, is that the image is...

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Transportation and Geoinformation Technology - Motivation Letter for Applying Master Program

2 - Your degree is related to Forestry Engineering, which is all about the management of natural resources. You are over...

Graduateahmadazmi - Oct 1, 2024Holt - Oct 2, 2024
Everyone should be allowed to attend university free of charge

2 - You are not being asked to state an opinion regarding the status of the public discussion of this...

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What are the benefits of regular exercise for teens?

2 - While the essay shows researched information from various sources, the discussion could have been improved upon if you had...

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Reading Stories; its impact on my perception of Sexuality (Common App)

2 - This is a wonderfully crafted look into your personality and why it would make you stand out as a...

Undergraduatecadearoos - Sep 30, 2024Holt - Sep 30, 2024
Medical Field - Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship Motivation Letter

2 - This is more of a personal statement than a motivation letter. Specifically, this is not an essay that was...

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