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Ecotourism - TOEFL WRİTİNG TASK

2 - The word requirement for this type of TOEFL writing task is 250-300 words. You have written less than 200...

Writing Feedbackemir10 - Mar 6, 2025Holt - Mar 7, 2025
Ielts Practice Task 1: Production levels of the main fuels in the UK

3 - @Holt thanks for your help, I will be working on improving it based on your comments...

Writing Feedbacksporty boy - Feb 25, 2025sporty boy - Mar 6, 2025
Personal Statement for Education and Technology MA University College London (UCL)

2 - Well, you certainly have the academic, professional, and volunteer requirements to be considered for this scholarship. However, these do...

UndergraduateHalidashb - Mar 5, 2025Holt - Mar 6, 2025
personal statement or GKS at the Faculty of Translation and Management

2 - The opening section is confusing to read. The statements are not directly related to each other and these are...

ScholarshipaleshonkovaDiana - Mar 5, 2025Holt - Mar 5, 2025
Chevening Essay: Professional Relationship-Building Skills

2 - The first paragraph contains names that the reviewer may wish to verify in the future as part of the...

ScholarshipCeceSanandwa_04 - Mar 5, 2025Holt - Mar 5, 2025
Personal Statement Essay || GKS-U 2025 (UIC TRACK) Smart Security - Konyang University

2 - Congratulations on being accepted into this rigorous scholarship program for undergraduates. I commend you for the essay that you...

Scholarshiphaneul_hoshi - Mar 3, 2025Holt - Mar 3, 2025
Leaders and directors in an organization are normally older people. Some people think a younger lead

2 - This will be considered a prompt deviation since you have changed the discussion instructions for this essay. The...

Writing Feedbackchaugfgfgfg - Mar 2, 2025Holt - Mar 3, 2025
GOI-IES Scholar - IRELAND SCHOLARSHIP

2 - When you are asked to discuss how Ireland will contribute to your professional growth, you should address how you...

Scholarshipannhien66677 - Mar 1, 2025Holt - Mar 2, 2025
Draft email for Negative message to NewTech about Samsung phone

2 - This time frame is too far away for the letter. When you have a complaint, the receipt of...

Writing FeedbackShahrizoda - Feb 28, 2025Holt - Mar 2, 2025
limited access to information - GKS Future plan + Goal of study

3 - @ali333 You could provide more specific details about the graduate program you plan to pursue in Korea and...

Scholarshipali333 - Feb 26, 2025annhien66677 - Mar 1, 2025
STATEMENT OF MOTIVATION AND EXPECTED ADMISSIONS METHOD ESSAY(WITHIN 300 WORDS) FOR USTH

3 - @asyozu Your statement needs more personal motivation and specific reasons for choosing USTH's Mechatronics Engineering Technology program (relevant experiences...

Undergraduateasyozu - Feb 23, 2025annhien66677 - Mar 1, 2025
Economics -Australia Awards Scholarship - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?

4 - @ngai07 Your answer could be more concise, focusing on the most compelling reasons for yout choices rather than...

Scholarshipngai07 - Feb 19, 2025annhien66677 - Mar 1, 2025
Letter of Motivation for Master's degree in Human-Computer Interaction (HCI)

2 - This is obviously related to your motivation so it would be a good idea for you to discuss...

Lettersnwabueze56 - Feb 26, 2025Holt - Feb 28, 2025
GOI-IES scholarships - LINKAGE BETWEEN VIETNAM AND IRELAND

2 - I am not sure how this might work since the neutrality goals are Ireland specific. Perhaps you can...

Scholarshipannhien66677 - Feb 27, 2025Holt - Feb 28, 2025
Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? - AAS Public Policy

3 - @Holt Thank you for your kind advice, I would consider your comment to revise my essay. I need further...

ScholarshipYtr879 - Feb 26, 2025Ytr879 - Feb 28, 2025
An argumentative essay: A vision of future wealth taxation

3 - @Holt I understand your disapproval of the pompous nature of "hereby". I originally used it to combo with thereby...

Writing Feedbackshangapallia - Feb 19, 2025shangapallia - Feb 27, 2025
Immersing myself in Irish society - GOI-IES SCHOLARSHIP 2025-2026

2 - This is a totally empty and unnecessary reference. I suggest that you delete this an open strong by...

Scholarshipannhien66677 - Feb 25, 2025Holt - Feb 27, 2025
IETLS WRITING TASK 2 - Museums and art galleries

2 - The work that you have presented will receive an automatic failing score. That is because your response to the...

Writing Feedbackbinthai - Feb 24, 2025Holt - Feb 27, 2025
IELTS WRITTING TASK 1-The diagrams illustrate information about changes in a student accommodation

2 - There are 2 errors in this phrase. The first, is that you mistakenly identified a map as a...

Writing FeedbackAnnamber - Feb 24, 2025Holt - Feb 27, 2025
Ending the murdering of innocent children

2 - You cannot use a citation to open your presentation. The introduction in the first paragraph should be reference...

Research PapersSuccessful1 - Feb 24, 2025Holt - Feb 27, 2025
To overcome financial barriers - GLOCAL PROGRAM - ERASMUS MUNDUS SCHOLARSHIP

3 - Thank you for your suggestion. Regarding the rest of the essay, do you think further revisions are necessary?...

Scholarshipangel246 - Feb 19, 2025angel246 - Feb 27, 2025
Psychology - Motivation with which you apply for this program-GKS scholarship

2 - As a draft essay, this covers some of the required discussion points. It presents information in relation to a...

ScholarshipVault - Feb 22, 2025Holt - Feb 27, 2025
R-GKS PERSONAL STATEMENT UNIVERSITY TRACK - MASTER'S DEGREE IN MARINE ENGINEERING

2 - I feel that the presentation is unnecessarily long. It could be more concise and interesting to the reviewers. You...

Scholarshiplailatulqid - Feb 19, 2025Holt - Feb 27, 2025
IELTS WRITING TASK1: INFORMATION ABOUT DEPARTMENT STORES AND ONLINE STORES IN AUSTRALIA IN 2011

2 - The essay meets the correct word number requirement but fails to address the essay in the proper format. Since...

Writing Feedbackhsghoas - Feb 19, 2025Holt - Feb 27, 2025
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - LINE GRAPH - The percentage of the population living in cities

2 - The essay is overwritten. This should only be 200 words at the most. By writing 206 words, you have...

Writing FeedbackHY Ho - Feb 18, 2025Holt - Feb 24, 2025
The effect of technology on people live

2 - This is a task 2 essay that will receive an automatic failing score simply because it is way too...

Writing FeedbackLieuLieu - Feb 18, 2025Holt - Feb 24, 2025
Essay on the Paradox of Choice for an ETS question

3 - Your comparison is well-structured, but it could be clearer and more concise....

Writing FeedbackEnricoLB - Feb 17, 2025Vault - Feb 22, 2025
Education in Biology - to achieve scholarship in DGIST

5 - Your study plan is strong, but it could benefit from improved flow, clarity, and conciseness....

Scholarshipabdurraffidaffa7 - Feb 1, 2025Vault - Feb 22, 2025
Master of Public Policy (MPP) - Manaaki scholarship

6 - @Febri0402 Looking at your essay, I agree with other commentors. Rather than describing what you want to learn, you...

ScholarshipFebri0402 - Feb 8, 2025ngai07 - Feb 20, 2025
The Value of Hard Work - GKS-G Personal Statement

2 - These information should be shared in the language study plan. While you can discuss the Chinese language here,...

Scholarshipclauana - Feb 17, 2025Holt - Feb 17, 2025
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