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How Technology affects us

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Motivational letter for CERN Summer Student Programme: revision ideas

2 - You do not need to mix your academic history into the motivational letter. The one thing that a motivational...

Lettersniyar - Nov 11, 2023Holt - Nov 25, 2023
Write a definition paragraph of about 150 words to address the following questions: What is freedom?

2 - The essay is more focused on why people want freedom as opposed to defining what freedom is. The question...

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china's one child policy has been carried out successfully

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TASK 1 - percentage of people born in and outside of Australia living in cities, town, rural areas

2 - Incorrect sentence structure. You are indicating that only 2 years are to be compared in the image. However,...

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The Benefits of curb as a Waste Diversion Program in the City of Peoria

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Research PapersRborquez6500 - Nov 9, 2023Holt - Nov 25, 2023
TU Delft MsC of Computer Science motivation Letter

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Definition paragraph . Define the word ' solidarity ' and give your own perspective

2 - I think you meant to refer to "community" as in the place where the solidarity is taking place?...

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Happiness levels increased in developing nations compared to declining levels in developed one

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IELTS task 2 - the most important environmental problems

2 - Do not focus on a particular country or form of governance. This is a generalized discussion topic so...

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Essay about global warming

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FIT Admissions Essay - Undergraduate - Fashion Design

2 - You cannot focus on your qualifications that will make you an excellent candidate for FIT alone. You also need...

Undergraduatechloieroupe - Nov 9, 2023Holt - Nov 19, 2023
The chart below depicts the way families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2018

2 - The report does not meet the minimum 150 word requirement. There will be a small percentage deducted from the...

Writing Feedbackadwdhkkn - Nov 5, 2023Holt - Nov 19, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 1: bar chart about computer ownership

2 - The writer has a relaxed and comfortable writing style. Reading it made me feel as if you just took...

Writing Feedbacknghn_thyyannh - Nov 4, 2023Holt - Nov 19, 2023
Talk about your career in future

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Undergraduatenganhoang - Nov 2, 2023kokor0 - Nov 18, 2023
Motivation letter for the University of Padua - Management for Sustainable Firms

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Motivation Letter for the Master in Computer Science (Machine Intelligence) at ETH Zurich

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This is the place where I want to be - Fashion Institute of Technology Admittance Essay

5 - Coming from an aspiring designer myself, I don't think you would enjoy attending FIT. You don't sound very passionate...

Undergraduatekrenkewitz - Oct 30, 2023chloieroupe - Nov 9, 2023
Motivation letter for International Master's program in Neuroscience (NeuroBIM)

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Lettersminhsym1341 - Nov 5, 2023minhsym1341 - Nov 9, 2023
PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR BIOLOGICAL SCIENCE BACHELOR DEGREE

2 - Since this is a personal statement, you should make an effort to balance out the information you provide about...

Undergraduatealexdo - Nov 4, 2023Holt - Nov 5, 2023
W Task 2: The necessity of schools in providing knowledge for students

2 - Your opinion is well presented but, lacking in more depth so as to increase your score. You need to...

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Cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourist

2 - The essay will get a failing task accuracy score in terms of paraphrasing considerations. That is because you decided...

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[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] - Music - opinion essay

2 - While you did write a very flowery restatement, it missed the mark for most counts in relation to the...

Writing Feedbackchau_pham - Nov 2, 2023Holt - Nov 5, 2023
Letter of Motivation for Admission to the BBA Program at KU Leuven

4 - hi! i am not a professional but i just want to share with you some of my thoughts about...

LetterssaqibM - Nov 2, 2023nghn_thyyannh - Nov 4, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - TECHNOLOGY (COMPUTERS)

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Writing task 1: Compare maps - changes in a Science Park since 2008

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Music helps to create an environment without barrier for people to understand more about each other

3 - I notice the use of academic vocabulary in the first 3 paragraphs. However, improvements still need to be made...

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IELTS Writing Task 2 - topic about crime prediction

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[IELTS TASK 1 - MAP] - changes in Felix Stone

2 - For starters, you can lower your word count to better suit the 20 minute writing time frame. Learn to...

Writing Feedbackchau_pham - Nov 1, 2023Holt - Nov 1, 2023
In many countries obesity and unhealthy eating habits are increasing. What are the reasons for this?

2 - Avoid such exaggerated references in the restatement. Remember that the original topic is based upon logic. Therefore, only...

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