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The graph - common activities of children of different ages

2 - This essay is not one that can be completed withing 20 minutes during the actual test. The 1 hour...

Writing FeedbackHuypham - Jan 5, 2026Holt - Jan 7, 2026
[IELTS TASK2]celebrities complain the way the media publicize their private lives.(AGREE DISAGREE)

2 - This is an over discussed essay that cannot be completed within the alloted 40 minutes of actual test writing...

Writing Feedbacktrangtrangsigmaa - Jan 5, 2026Holt - Jan 7, 2026
Theory and real-world impact - Erasmus mundus motivational letter

2 - While EM actually accepts undergraduate scholars into their program, they only accept exceptional undergraduates who show academic excellence, internship...

ScholarshipMadika - Jan 5, 2026Holt - Jan 7, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home

2 - The discussion is well developed. The prompt restatement is accurate and the writer's opinion is based upon valid thesis...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Jan 5, 2026Holt - Jan 7, 2026
Erasmus Mundus Neuroscience + data science program motivation letter

3 - Merged: Motivation Letter for Cognitive Science Graduate Program in EU Hi, Upon last feedback, I've updated...

Graduateobb0526 - Dec 28, 2025obb0526 - Jan 6, 2026
Motivation Letter for the IMSISS Erasmus Mundus Application - Conflict Institute

6 - Thanks for your honest and thorough feedback on my essay @Holt. We can only provide one free revision...

Scholarshipester_policy - Jan 1, 2026ester_policy - Jan 5, 2026
Personal Statement for Erasmus Mundus Joint Master IMSISS Programme

5 - The more you try to fix the essay, the more problems come up with regards to the information you...

GraduateHandy - Dec 14, 2025Holt - Jan 4, 2026
It Starts with Small Act toward Bigger Impact (Erasmus Mundus: GLOCAL - Track I)

3 - Well noted. Thank you for the suggestions, Holt! I'll try to revise this ASAP for your final suggestion....

Scholarshipapnindyaa - Jan 3, 2026apnindyaa - Jan 4, 2026
children's books - Erasmus Mundus CLMCE Program (Motivational Letter)

2 - The essay is very personal to you, but highly confusing to the reviewer. You speak in great length about...

Scholarshipzien - Jan 3, 2026Holt - Jan 3, 2026
Personal Statement for GKS scholarship (Embassy Track)- Graduate in Spanish Philology

3 - Thank you for your response. The instructions of the Personal Statement in GKS are as follows: - Motivations...

Scholarshipkatedeska - Jan 1, 2026katedeska - Jan 2, 2026
"Corporate finance decisions" - Essay for master's Stipendium Hungaricum

2 - This is very rude of you to mention in the opening section of your essay. It is disrespectful...

LettersTheParagon - Jan 2, 2026Holt - Jan 2, 2026
Personal Statement on Curiosity - Undergraduate in Chemical and Biomolecular Engineering at HKUST

2 - The main reason that this essay is overly long is because you spent way too much time on the...

Undergraduatecyap - Jan 1, 2026Holt - Jan 2, 2026
Write one short essay in English that includes the following three topics - engineering essay

2 - The essay space is being wasted in the first part because you are discussing an unrelated topic. There is...

Undergraduatewishuthebest - Jan 1, 2026Holt - Jan 2, 2026
Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship- Computer Science MSc

2 - Paragraph number 4 directly address the national need for a person of your skills but fails to explain how...

Lettersxeon39 - Dec 31, 2025Holt - Jan 1, 2026
IELTS WRITING - Transportation of products and people cause the most pollution worldwide

2 - I have a problem with reviewing this essay because the prompt that has been provided is confusing. It is...

Writing Feedbackbonguyen - Dec 31, 2025Holt - Jan 1, 2026
Success as a solitary achievement: Common App (Personal Statement)

3 - @Holt Thank you for your careful reading. I realize now that my phrasing left room for misinterpretation. My father...

Undergraduatetimetoshine - Dec 31, 2025timetoshine - Dec 31, 2025
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 Employers should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday

3 - Thanks for your advice...

Writing Feedbackbonguyen - Dec 27, 2025bonguyen - Dec 31, 2025
Motivation letter for Erasmus Mundus Joint Masters in Imaging

2 - You are actually trying to over present yourself as an authority figure in this essay which may not sit...

Lettersparallax404 - Dec 31, 2025Holt - Dec 31, 2025
ERASMUS MUNDUS INT'L MASTERS IN GLOBAL MARKETS AND LOCAL CREATIVES: GLOBAL MARKETS & DEVELOPMENT

2 - This is the information that the reviewer will be looking for. You started with some pretty irrelevant information...

ScholarshipTHEOPHILUS - Dec 31, 2025Holt - Dec 31, 2025
Motivation for CYBERSURE - Master's programme in Cybersecurity and Assurance

2 - There is no such committee. There is only a general admissions committee that considers all of the applicants...

Lettersdumbled00r - Dec 30, 2025Holt - Dec 31, 2025
Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship, Msc in Autonomous Vehicle Control Engineer

3 - Merged: Systems, control and mechatronics - Letter of Motivation for Chalmers University Dear Sirs/ Madams, I am...

Lettersminh2910 - Dec 22, 2025minh2910 - Dec 30, 2025
Seek your inputs-Statement of Purpose-Erasmus Mundus GLOCAL-Sustainable Business Development

3 - Thank you a lot @Holt, this is highly insightful to me, I will revise the essay as per your...

Scholarshipsonle1024 - Dec 29, 2025sonle1024 - Dec 30, 2025
How Fashion Reflects Personality and Confidence

2 - I will applaud you for the good writing that you have presented in these 2 paragraphs. While there are...

Writing FeedbackLeonn - Dec 29, 2025Holt - Dec 29, 2025
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 sample about success and the drivers behind it

2 - You immediately misinterpreted the speakers / point of view as provided in the original prompt within your first sentence....

Writing Feedbackquocnguyen - Dec 29, 2025Holt - Dec 29, 2025
The gender distribution of educators in the UK - BAR CHART - IELTS WRITING TASK 1 REPORT

2 - The summary overview is too short and does not meet the required sentence requirement. You have to present at...

Writing FeedbackAnnaDao - Dec 27, 2025Holt - Dec 29, 2025
I like to Gamble - Common Application Essay Help

2 - I would not use the term "gamble" in this case. Since this is an academic essay, it is better...

Undergraduateluptla - Dec 27, 2025Holt - Dec 29, 2025
Personal Statement Letter for IMSISS with ERASMUS MUNDUS / Strategic assessments

4 - The reviewers prefer that the personal statements lean more towards the reflective and pondering side of the applicant. That...

Graduateghosttwwriter - Dec 26, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
This is my Motivation letter for UvA can someone tell me if it good and what changes i can do

2 - The tone being used in this essay is too informal. Almost AI like in tone and writing content. While...

GraduatePunitj - Dec 27, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
Fashion Design major - PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR KGSP/GKS

3 - Thank you so much I really appreciate your help. I'll fix my personal statement....

Scholarshipnorceulea - Dec 24, 2025norceulea - Dec 27, 2025
Personal statement for IMSISS

2 - A personal statement is not the same as a motivation essay. Therefore, the minute the reviewer read these...

GraduateBelieve4580 - Dec 24, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
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