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My own engineering firm; Scholarship (Educational Goals)

6 - Thanks for the help I'm going to make the corrections you suggested....

Scholarshipgb9570 - Apr 16, 2009gb9570 - Apr 19, 2009
How to Run a Debate in English, rather than Malay.

6 - i would try youtube, or google. Basically list out ur main points, also list out points that ur opposing...

Grammar, Usagekina - Apr 6, 2009ttc1234 - Apr 19, 2009
Arts and Festival DVD recording. Common app - elaborate one activity (150 words).

2 - "After the school Arts Festival closing, I suggested engaging in a research study" Who did you suggest this to?...

Undergraduatejoanna2007114 - Apr 19, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 19, 2009
'Off of an auto-pilot' - Bentley University Transfer Essay

6 - What past work experiences, skills, capabilities do you already have that you can bring onto campus? Using past...

Undergraduatenightgal545 - Apr 13, 2009babydoll - Apr 19, 2009
Art Paper - Elizabeth Murray

4 - Like Kevin said, I would strengthen the first paragraph. One way of doing that is by quoting Murray near...

Writing FeedbackLink42 - Apr 14, 2009silverystars - Apr 18, 2009
Mary Louise Pratt, "Arts of the Contact Zone"

4 - My family was originally from Emporia, Kansas and was, therefore, a lot to get used to. I first...

Essayslitahays91 - Apr 14, 2009silverystars - Apr 18, 2009
Suxanne - a story about one of my dreams

3 - Wow, your opening imagery is graphic and gripping. Great job. If you want to make your story even stronger,...

Writing Feedbacknizarnasir - Apr 14, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 18, 2009
An Essay on university admission -UG (myself, family, school interests)

9 - Well, you already seem to have made a lot of progress on this essay, but there is still room...

UndergraduateFinalelement - Apr 11, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 18, 2009
Boston U Int. (Experiences with Dad, Confidence, Stock Market)

13 - Don't be messing with the language! It's when the dialectic subtleties we use begins to get phased out that...

UndergraduateAFS - Apr 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 17, 2009
"Is racism becoming an obstacle in today`s world?" - correct my essay

4 - In our diverse society, racism is facing proving to be one of humankind's major tensions in this day...

Writing Feedbackstudent001 - Apr 16, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 17, 2009
Response to Dr. Kings Letter to Clergymen Essay

3 - Are you supposed to write a response to Dr. King from a modern perspective, or as if you were...

Lettersnthomasdonalds - Apr 14, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 17, 2009
Fascist Aesthetic in relation to Sontag essay and "Triumph of the Will"

4 - Kevin's method also works. Really, when it comes to getting started on an essay, you need to find a...

Essaysswmsurf8 - Apr 15, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 17, 2009
"higher Math and Science courses" - UCF Essay (bump in the road; why UCF)

4 - Everyone faces obstacles. Some of them are small, and they will be easy to go through. overcome Some of...

Undergraduatezxcvbnm - Apr 16, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 16, 2009
"King of the Jungle - story feedback

5 - thank you for looking over my short story...

Writing Feedbackmeshaal - Apr 14, 2009meshaal - Apr 16, 2009
Gambia to Georgia -- entrepreneur in the resturaunt business.

5 - Thank it helped alot...!!!...

UndergraduateBrownpd - Apr 2, 2009Brownpd - Apr 16, 2009
A persuasive speech on discrimination

6 - If you are going to write a persuasive speech, then presumably you will be less interested in what the...

Speechestwashington0541 - Apr 14, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 16, 2009
500 word image essay (Black Hair Report)

4 - You seem to be on the right track. Now go into more detail. Why were they "jumping" through the...

Writing Feedbackteelyons - Apr 14, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 16, 2009
Poetry about the Enron Scandal

7 - oops, i meant add more in haha txs for the advice...

Poetryjianxian - Apr 13, 2009jianxian - Apr 15, 2009
"Parting Gift" poem

9 - Hey, good news for me. Sean's advice for you improved my own perspective on poetry a lot. I actually...

Poetrysilverystars - Apr 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 15, 2009
Lord of the Flies essay: characters, concerns and language of the novel

5 - no, we are stuck to these three themes...

Book Reportsmeshaal - Apr 9, 2009meshaal - Apr 14, 2009
"the chase" story

4 - thank you guys, ur really helpful. but Sean can u suggest some better verbs. im really bad at this....

Writing Feedbacknewsha31 - Apr 13, 2009newsha31 - Apr 14, 2009
Essay to Compare and Contrast Two members of Your Family

5 - Ahhh!! That is harsh. Parents are people, too. How would you like to have your mom say she...

Writing FeedbackQueenie31 - Apr 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 14, 2009
a paragraph that updates my activity in a waitlist letter.

7 - Great! Good luck, I hope it is well-received....

Undergraduatejianxian - Apr 10, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 14, 2009
Psychology Concepts applied to the real world

5 - ...taught them to sew their clothes... She stayed very close to her sister and brought her along so...

Writing Feedbackteelyons - Apr 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 14, 2009
"Who Swims with the Tuna" by Quammen and "Riches of the Sea" by Scully

3 - I think it was David Brin who first pointed out that environmentalists are always only really concerned with creatures...

Writing FeedbackCodyB - Apr 13, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 14, 2009
Appeal essay, UC Davis of Engineering

3 - I'm very appreciative that University of California Davis has offered me an opportunity for an appeal. After receiving the...

Undergraduatexwy - Apr 13, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 14, 2009
(symbolic / character interpretation)? - my new essay is on lord of the flies.

15 - Should parents be responsible if their children behave badly? Most children in the duration between childhood and adulthood may...

Book Reportssc15pcz - Mar 26, 2009Winpapamon - Apr 14, 2009
Why you are specifically well-suited to contribute to this internship

2 - I looks like you have a good grasp on the importance of volunteer work. I may change this sentence...

Graduatepia - Apr 13, 2009teelyons - Apr 13, 2009
counselling essay

2 - I would often judge people on assumptions I had been brought up with. Since starting college, I have...

Writing Feedbackkazzy31 - Apr 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2009
I need help review this essay ("the greatest goal you hope to achieve")

3 - Please give a little bit more substantial help to other members! Then, I'll spend time helping with your essay....

UndergraduateGrammarFool - Apr 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2009
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