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Do Song Lyrics Affect the Brain?

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EssaysNick_04 - Mar 15, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 15, 2007
Essay about a young woman

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Writing Feedbackjhon_lam - Mar 15, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 15, 2007
history or mathematics?

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Writing Feedbackmahdi - Mar 14, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 15, 2007
ANALGY; Composition class

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Writing Feedbackgoombaking209 - Mar 14, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 15, 2007
Community college student essay - asking for a little feedback

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Writing FeedbackTinyjn - Mar 14, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 15, 2007
"Human Trafficking Today's Modern Day Slavery"

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Writing Feedbackrh07391 - Mar 12, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 13, 2007
Orwell's prejudice against the colonized is inexcusableI; Multi-Source Essay

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Writing Feedbackrusshen - Mar 12, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 12, 2007
Two different methods of losing weight

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Writing FeedbackMaggie8802 - Mar 11, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 12, 2007
'Hamlet delays his revenge' - Another Hamlet essay

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Book Reportsaznpoo - Mar 4, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 12, 2007
All Quiet on the Western Front - Comradeship

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Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Mar 11, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 11, 2007
Making a Good Public Speaking Essay

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Speechestgs_miki - Feb 19, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 11, 2007
Undergrad Application - Waterloo, Canada

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UndergraduateRitika - Mar 10, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 11, 2007
Feedback: An incident report written specifically by a bus driver

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Writing FeedbackShergill - Mar 10, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 10, 2007
Can you edit my essay? "Ethics"

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Writing Feedbackmkatts19 - Mar 9, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 10, 2007
Unless guided by knowledge and insight, power will destroy us - how to start?

4 - Both of these books show a lot of human nature. How we would do anything to gain power...

Essaysjag2411 - Jan 29, 2007aznpoo - Mar 9, 2007
paper on cause and effect (shall I use the metaphor?)

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Essayspandolfi91 - Mar 8, 2007pandolfi91 - Mar 9, 2007
Emperor Jones' flight is a progress in self-understanding

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Writing Feedbackwolface - Mar 7, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 8, 2007
"The English Language" - wonderfully rich and eclectic

9 - Finally, English language has turned the word into a global village through the spread of trade and commerce. Many...

EssaysAsma - Mar 3, 2007Asma - Mar 7, 2007
Tongan Immigration(2nd draft)

2 - Greetings! This is an interesting essay about a people that most of us know little about! I have...

Writing Feedbackjone1113 - Mar 6, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 7, 2007
Education-sat practice essay; other than school influences on education?

4 - Greetings! I'm afraid I'm not that familiar with the SAT essay requirements. If there is a word limit,...

Writing Feedbackkendra - Mar 5, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 6, 2007
cause and effect essay on the new "Polytrack" or artificial cushon

5 - Sarah, Thank you for the reply. I did a quick outline and my Professor liked the subject, so I...

Essaysnellegirl - Feb 26, 2007Greyflannel - Mar 5, 2007
The Courtroom - Essay

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"Reasons to smoke" I wrote this essay for tommorow's class

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Writing FeedbackBBgirl - Mar 4, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 5, 2007
example essay about and amazing artists

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Writing Feedbackokuna - Mar 1, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 3, 2007
Differences between Mongolian and American Foods

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The moral education aim in the Alive 0-8 and Alive 0-4

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graded research paper not so hot

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Research Papersrkslperez - Feb 28, 2007EF_Team2 - Mar 1, 2007
'incredibly rewarding career' sociology journal response

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Essayssuperkaytee - Feb 26, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 28, 2007
paper review in economic

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Research Papersokuna - Feb 27, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 28, 2007
Is the deterministic universe described by physics incompatible with free will or god existance?

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Essaysmanogamez - Feb 27, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 28, 2007
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