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Stating motivation for Australia Awards Scholarship

2 - This will not work. You are limited to 200 words for the response. So you cannot waste the space...

Scholarshipgheet - Mar 17, 2024Holt - Mar 21, 2024
To succeed in a business, one needs to be good at maths. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2 - To what extent? Your response is incomplete. You need to use a measured or emotional response in this...

Writing FeedbackTheodoris - Mar 17, 2024Holt - Mar 21, 2024
Master's in Social Research - PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR UNIVERSITY OF EDINBURGH

2 - Mention the courses as deemed relevant to the requirements of the masters course. This will show your preparation...

Graduatepookie123 - Mar 16, 2024Holt - Mar 21, 2024
Studying in Flinders - How did you choose your proposed course and institution?

3 - @Catherine Frank Please after writing, you make sure you glance through to correct some spelling errors....

ScholarshipCatherine Frank - Mar 14, 2024Aroma - Mar 20, 2024
Pros and cons of self-study

2 - If this was written as a simple English writing exercise, then I would say "good job!" you got your...

Writing Feedbackthanh lam - Mar 15, 2024Holt - Mar 20, 2024
Transfer Admission Personal Essay for Temple University

2 - The story being told is inconsistent. It lacks a smooth flow in terms of transitioning from your early life...

Graduateprivateangels - Mar 15, 2024Holt - Mar 20, 2024
IELTS writing task 2 - Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are...

2 - Try to avoid the use of the same words or phrases from the original prompt. That is because you...

Writing FeedbackZebb - Mar 14, 2024Holt - Mar 20, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 1: The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during...

2 - The summary overview is not restated enough in the words of the writer to not be considered a cut...

Writing FeedbackDang Gia Bao - Mar 14, 2024Holt - Mar 20, 2024
Give up to three examples of how you intend to use the knowledge, skill and connections - AAS

2 - The terminologies you are using in the essay requires editing. It is incorrect. Unfortunately, editing is not part of...

ScholarshipAroma - Mar 14, 2024Holt - Mar 20, 2024
The graph below shows the percentage of adults whose healthcare needs went unmet in the past year

2 - The summary overview will receive a failing mark because it is a run-on sentence. There are about 3 ideas...

Writing FeedbackJessica159815 - Mar 13, 2024Holt - Mar 20, 2024
The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump works

2 - The immediate problem with this presentation is the format. A task 1 essay follows the 3 paragraph format in...

Writing Feedbacknhatanhen - Mar 12, 2024Holt - Mar 20, 2024
Task 1 (Pie Chart) About the highest level of education achieved by people over 21 in 2 countries.

2 - Your summary overview is inaccurate. You are not properly identifying the components of the image. There are 2 pie...

Writing FeedbackAdrena1998 - Mar 12, 2024Holt - Mar 20, 2024
Motivation letter for master of fine art master in Amsterdam

4 - I believe that it's very nice but for some improvements i would totally agree with holt...

Lettersedenlan - Mar 11, 2024smichalo - Mar 18, 2024
Many men and women are making the decision to have children later in life.

3 - @thuongnguyen6372 please your first sentence in your second paragraph has some uncertainty which you need to avoid that; be...

Writing Feedbackthuongnguyen6372 - Feb 28, 2024Aroma - Mar 14, 2024
ONLY GOVERNMENTS CAN TAKE PART IN PROTECTING THE ENVIRONMENT?

3 - @strawberry jasmi Please, you only emphasized on what individuals do to degrade the environment but you did not write...

Writing Feedbackstrawberry jasmi - Mar 9, 2024Aroma - Mar 13, 2024
IELTS Task 1: The graph below shows of types of waste that were recycled in a town between 2000-2010

3 - Thank you very much!...

Writing FeedbackHZQ - Mar 11, 2024HZQ - Mar 12, 2024
"why you are considering transferring and how MIT aligns with your goals"

3 - @Holt There is a word limit of 225. I have to go straight to the point in the best...

UndergraduateTimztech - Mar 9, 2024Timztech - Mar 11, 2024
The table below shows the production of cacao beans in six regions between 1992 and 1998.

2 - The summary overview could use some additional information such as a run-down of the 6 countries and the measurement...

Writing FeedbackThanhdat2510 - Mar 11, 2024Holt - Mar 11, 2024
ONLINE APARTMENT PROMOTION

2 - The statement tries to be exciting to entice the reader to use the service. However, the writer fails to...

Writing FeedbackVThuong - Mar 10, 2024Holt - Mar 11, 2024
It is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school

2 - The essay is not long enough. As a task 2 paper, this opinion presentation should meet the 250 minimum...

Writing Feedbacklethixuandaoa - Mar 10, 2024Holt - Mar 11, 2024
Essay about the waste collection by recycling centre - writing ielts task1

3 - @Holt Thank you a lot for your feedback. I will practice more to overcome the problem mentioned....

Writing Feedbackdramoon - Mar 5, 2024dramoon - Mar 10, 2024
ỈELTS 2 - Many people believe that social networking sites cause negative effects

2 - Incorrect vocabulary. This is somewhat of a redundancy since bad and consequence actually refer to the same thing....

Writing Feedbackalicegemma - Mar 9, 2024Holt - Mar 10, 2024
National Service - how you contributed to solving a challenge and to implementing change or reform?

2 - Well, the grammar used is not very good but that is understandable since English is not your first language....

ScholarshipAroma - Mar 8, 2024Holt - Mar 10, 2024
Video records are a better way to learn about the way other people in the world live

2 - The writer's opinion is incorrect. The question to be responded to is based upon the premise of "To...

Writing Feedbackttuuyenvg - Mar 8, 2024Holt - Mar 10, 2024
Some people say that men are naturally more competitive than women

2 - Avoid sounding uncertain when presenting discussion points. It is not good for your score since the examiner is...

Writing Feedbackthuytiennguyenho - Mar 8, 2024Holt - Mar 10, 2024
IELTS TASK 2 It is better for people to be unemployed than people to be employed

2 - The essay starts off strong with a very good prompt restatement, a clear writer's opinion, and an excellent thesis...

Writing Feedbackhelld - Mar 8, 2024Holt - Mar 10, 2024
IELTS writing task 2 - These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born

2 - The word count is within an acceptable number. However, the essay itself is not well written nor developed. The...

Writing FeedbackSilviotto - Mar 7, 2024Holt - Mar 10, 2024
Essay about The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites

2 - I will admit that you have met the word count requirement of this essay task. However, having met the...

Writing Feedbackhalanvuong - Mar 7, 2024Holt - Mar 10, 2024
[WRITING TASK 1] Percentages of tourists who used different types of transportation when traveling

2 - The location of the chart is not important to the reader. Why? The reader is assumed to not have...

Writing FeedbackThinhVN - Mar 7, 2024Holt - Mar 10, 2024
Personal Statement for Master Application at China University XJTU

2 - I am confused. Are you applying for admission to the university? If so, then there should not be any...

GraduateJadelim_99 - Mar 7, 2024Holt - Mar 10, 2024
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