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Career Development and Coaching Studies MA - Leadership and Influence Chevening

2 - Show it, do not say it. This sentence makes you sound so unprofessional. It is like a high...

Scholarshipbiamendes - Oct 5, 2024Holt - Oct 10, 2024
Writing task 2: Many people believe that there should be only one world legal system

2 - Think is not the same as "believe". The term "think" leaves room for doubt while "believe" does not....

Writing Feedbackdangnhatanh - Oct 5, 2024Holt - Oct 10, 2024
Personal statement - integrative systems biology PhD program Pitt University

2 - Never indicate that you were not interested in a certain field until later on. Being a PhD applicant,...

Graduatesouthlab - Oct 5, 2024Holt - Oct 10, 2024
Communications between different parts of the world

2 - There is no need to mention individuals in this instance since there was no reference to it in...

Writing Feedbackxoeyielts - Oct 4, 2024Holt - Oct 10, 2024
Some think newspapers are the best method for reading the news

4 - In the sentence 'In conclusion, while there are mixed opinions on determining whether using newspapers or other media for...

Writing FeedbackTuantienti - Sep 25, 2024Helen335 - Oct 8, 2024
Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment

3 - In the sentence 'However, humans can take measures to address these problems,' consider specifying what types of measures could...

Writing Feedbackhalinhislearning - Oct 3, 2024Helen335 - Oct 8, 2024
The Death Penalty is the best way to control and reduce serious crime. To what extent do you agree?

5 - In the sentence 'To begin, it's undeniable that the death is penalty is partly useful for reducing dangerous crimes,'...

Writing FeedbackMandamy - Oct 3, 2024Helen335 - Oct 8, 2024
Why do we need music? Is a country's traditional music more important than international music

5 - In the sentence 'Firstly, Some Asian conventional styles still keep outdated lyrics that are more sexual than accepted in...

Writing FeedbackDaves - Sep 28, 2024Helen335 - Oct 8, 2024
In order to study at university, students is required to pay expensive tuition fees.

3 - In the sentence 'However, some individuals think that the abolition of tuition fees play an important role to make...

Writing FeedbackLapis - Oct 3, 2024Helen335 - Oct 8, 2024
WRITING TASK 1 - PROCESS - How drinking water is made using solar power.

4 - In the sentence 'The process continues with the stage when the converted energy is used to generate a pump...

Writing Feedbackhalinhislearning - Oct 2, 2024Helen335 - Oct 8, 2024
Should I apply ED NYU Stern or wait RD (Meh GPA can improve)

3 - @Holt thank you for your reply! So do you believe the benefits of the GPA boost outweigh the...

Essaysliujseb - Oct 4, 2024liujseb - Oct 4, 2024
Looking for Suggestions on My College Admission Essay

2 - You must post your essay to receive a review of the content based upon the concerns you stated. I...

EssaysAbelnicholas - Oct 3, 2024Holt - Oct 4, 2024
An increasing number of people choosing to have cosmetic surgeryto improve their appearance

3 - @xuanxnxn Hi, i suggest that you should include some specific examples such as korean extreme obsession with plastic surgery...

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Commonwealth Masters Scholarship Pharmacology and Drug Discovery MSc

3 - Thank you so much for taking your time to review my essay....

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Discuss both views for high salaries

3 - @ptt513 Hi, I think you should change the phrase "numerous of teenager usually are under peer pressure" into "numberous...

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Experience as an exchange Erasmus student - Chevening essay on Leadership and Influence

2 - Your presentation is dull and not interesting. So you were an EM scholar in the past. So what? There...

Scholarshipabunwer61 - Oct 1, 2024Holt - Oct 2, 2024
WRITING TASK 1 - PROCESS - THE PRODUCTION OF BEER

2 - There are 2 things wrong with this summary overview section. The first problem, is that the image is...

Writing Feedbackhalinhislearning - Oct 1, 2024Holt - Oct 2, 2024
Transportation and Geoinformation Technology - Motivation Letter for Applying Master Program

2 - Your degree is related to Forestry Engineering, which is all about the management of natural resources. You are over...

Graduateahmadazmi - Oct 1, 2024Holt - Oct 2, 2024
Everyone should be allowed to attend university free of charge

2 - You are not being asked to state an opinion regarding the status of the public discussion of this...

Writing Feedbacktrangng - Oct 1, 2024Holt - Oct 1, 2024
What are the benefits of regular exercise for teens?

2 - While the essay shows researched information from various sources, the discussion could have been improved upon if you had...

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Reading Stories; its impact on my perception of Sexuality (Common App)

2 - This is a wonderfully crafted look into your personality and why it would make you stand out as a...

Undergraduatecadearoos - Sep 30, 2024Holt - Sep 30, 2024
Medical Field - Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship Motivation Letter

2 - This is more of a personal statement than a motivation letter. Specifically, this is not an essay that was...

LettersNandia20060709 - Sep 28, 2024Holt - Sep 30, 2024
Space Boys NFT - My College Application Essay

2 - While the prompt you chose for this narration seems to be applicable on the outset, a deeper reading will...

Undergraduateyonathan2121 - Sep 29, 2024Holt - Sep 30, 2024
Navigating Change: Lessons from Birds in Flight - US College common App

3 - @Holt We wrote this for Common App Prompt 1 Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that...

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Only educating students to learn academic knowledge to pass exams or teaching them essential skills.

2 - Kindly remember that there is a 40 minute writing limit for the task 2 essay. It will be impossible...

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History is valuable or not. Discuss both views, give opinion

2 - Even as the essay is overwritten at 326 words, the response format presented for the discussion is incorrect. This...

Writing FeedbackLananh277 - Sep 28, 2024Holt - Sep 28, 2024
Some people think that it is good thing for senior management positions to have much higher salaries

2 - I am afraid this essay will fail right from the very start. That is because you only wrote 186...

Writing Feedbackbuihanhthao - Sep 27, 2024Holt - Sep 28, 2024
Art-based subjects as compulsory subjects - topic advice

2 - I am not sure what sort of advice you need with regards to this topic. There are no right...

EssaysEdukid2309 - Sep 26, 2024Holt - Sep 26, 2024
Development Impact Part 1- Cybersecurity / Commonwealth Scholarship

2 - For the global part of the essay, try to find a more specific cybersecurity threat that you feel will...

Scholarshipjitu_kamaliza - Sep 25, 2024Holt - Sep 26, 2024
Finance and Business - UT Austin Transfer essay/Statement of Purpose

3 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback! So to clarify, I should mainly at the start expand on my experiences...

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