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My experience editing for the school news broadcast - UBC Important Activities Prompt

2 - You can insert a final paragraph that would touch on how you won an award for your hard work....

Undergraduatethe john award - Nov 26, 2023Holt - Nov 28, 2023
Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six

2 - You cannot use words of uncertainty in the presentation. Since this is a single opinion essay, you are...

Writing Feedbacknntruong0510 - Nov 25, 2023Holt - Nov 28, 2023
Writing task 2: The increase in the production on the natural environment

2 - Your prompt restatement is still close enough to the original presentation for this to be considered a plagiarism of...

Writing FeedbackHaohao0719 - Nov 25, 2023Holt - Nov 28, 2023
The graph below gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born

2 - You summary overview is not very clear. Are you trying to tell us that the line graph shows information...

Writing Feedbackdieuanh121205 - Nov 25, 2023Holt - Nov 28, 2023
The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia in 2018.

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your feedback....

Writing Feedbackngngheo0cot1en - Nov 16, 2023ngngheo0cot1en - Nov 27, 2023
Common app essay "My mother's Hardships and how it helped me grow as a person"

2 - The essay is too focused on your mom and how it affected or pushed other relatives to help you....

UndergraduateAbdullahKhan114 - Nov 23, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
Combining arts and coding texas A&M engineering essay

2 - Bring up the reference to the college professor. Lengthen that discussion to allow you to expand upon how his...

ScholarshipLeawi - Nov 22, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
Some people think that people who chose a job early and keep doing are more likely to get satisfying

2 - Where are you basing this reference on? The original prompt only indicates a job. The type of job...

Writing Feedbackjamiethyha - Nov 21, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
The graphs below show the employment rate of each gender in four different contries in 2002

2 - I do not need to read the topic or see the image to know that this is not an...

Writing FeedbackNbhuong - Nov 21, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
to low- cost airlines, many people can travel abroad. Is it a positive or negative?

2 - You already indicated that low cost travel is a positive development in your writer's opinion paragraph. It was clearly...

Writing FeedbackThaoThanh - Nov 21, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
Essay about why I want to transfer to Spelman College

2 - Well, this is most certainly a very personal essay. Thank you for sharing it with us. It is emotional...

Undergraduatelivvv12 - Nov 20, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
Question: Films were produced by big companies in the past, but today people are able to make a film

2 - You have not taken the correct approach to writing this essay. Based on the given writing guide question, you...

Writing FeedbackNguyenhienngoc - Nov 19, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
Increasing reciprocal exchange is positive or endanger cultural identity. Discuss both views.

2 - The essay is actually overwritten at 326 words. You do not have the time to write that many words...

Writing FeedbackAnhwuan - Nov 19, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
IELTS TASK 2 - STUDYING ABROAD

2 - You forgot to mention working abroad as well. It is important not to miss out on reference points...

Writing Feedbacktranggggg - Nov 18, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
Some students prefer to take a year off between school and university, to work or to travel.

2 - You should not be presenting an opinion in this case. The essay writing instructions asks you to deliver an...

Writing Feedbackbilaldev - Nov 18, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
"Leadership at Prosper's case comp" - UBC SAUDER (UNFAMILIAR SITUATION PROMPT)

2 - You do not really need to enumerate the names of the team members in this case. Group pronouns will...

Undergraduateramenlegend - Nov 18, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
UBC - Explain how you responded to a problem and/or an unfamiliar situation. (MAX 1500 Characters)

2 - This is an excellent reference point for the prompt you have chosen. It is light, heartwarming, but indicative of...

Undergraduateapplepie132 - Nov 17, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
Risk and resource management - Scholarship Essay - Study Plan

2 - Kindly indicate which journal it was published in, the publication date, volume, and series number for the reference...

Scholarshipkokor0 - Nov 17, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012.

2 - You have tried to go a good job on presenting the information in an analytical way. However, the way...

Writing FeedbackTran Hans - Nov 15, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
using network in classroom or traditonal class

2 - I was confused by the grammar used in this presentation. I can somehow fill in the blanks and do...

Writing FeedbackLogie Thanh - Nov 15, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
The impact AI has on our day to day lives essay, peer edit my essay <3

2 - Who is the author? Prior to using the citation, kindly inform the reader of the name of the...

Writing Feedbacknathanmak24 - Nov 15, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other count

2 - The summary overview is incomplete. It should represent a more summative presentation of the image over at least 3...

Writing FeedbackAnnaAlysia - Nov 14, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
How studying in your chosen specialization will help you achieve your goals? MM - Mahidol University

2 - The main problem with this essay is that you do not speak in complete sentences. It is almost as...

Graduatemjsty - Nov 14, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

2 - May Ii ask where you got the reference for the underground network? There is no such indicator in the...

Writing FeedbackKhoiNguyen - Nov 14, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
What are the causes of criminals committing more crimes upon being released from prison and solution

2 - The thesis statement and writer's opinion is well developed in this essay. The topic is clearly restated, along with...

Writing Feedbackductam06 - Nov 13, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
short and long term academica and professional in SOP

2 - Since you are being asked for your long and short term academic goals, you should feel free to mention...

Graduateshaimkibria - Nov 13, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
Masters in Neuroscience - Motivational letter for Neurasmus

2 - The motivational letter is going around in circles. You have missed the point of the motivational letter. It is...

GraduateHaileLeo - Nov 13, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
What is your motivation to apply for UWC?

2 - I do not believe that you are responding to the question. You have delivered your community participation background. However,...

UndergraduateAfag Mamedova - Nov 12, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
Screen Time Impact on Babies

2 - The research is one sided. It fails to consider the positive aspects of screen time on babies as some...

Writing Feedbackmanareldirais - Nov 26, 2023Holt - Nov 27, 2023
Personal Statment GKS Graduate 2023 - Advertising & Public Relations Department

NEW - Summary: Starting in 2023, the GKS requirement is to write every essay within 3 pages. Please help me review...

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