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Jan 4, 2015
Undergraduate / Why UChicago? Curiosity has always been the driving force in my life. [7]
Rather than simply mentioning the notable alumna of UChicago, you should consider revising the middle part of the essay to better reflect the kind of learning that you hope to achieve as a student at the university. Bear in mind that the essay asks you to justify how UChicago will be able to help you satisfy your desire for a particular type of learning. As such, your response is expected to contain references to the academic system of UChicago, possibly touching on the specific classes, academic offerings, and extra curricular activities the university offers which you feel will help you develop a well rounded education and personal development. While mentioning the motto of the university is a nice touch, you should not devote a whole paragraph to it without touching on the academic and social aspect of development that the university offers. The slight editing of that paragraph should help you develop your content into a paragraph that will better serve the essay you have written.
Rather than simply mentioning the notable alumna of UChicago, you should consider revising the middle part of the essay to better reflect the kind of learning that you hope to achieve as a student at the university. Bear in mind that the essay asks you to justify how UChicago will be able to help you satisfy your desire for a particular type of learning. As such, your response is expected to contain references to the academic system of UChicago, possibly touching on the specific classes, academic offerings, and extra curricular activities the university offers which you feel will help you develop a well rounded education and personal development. While mentioning the motto of the university is a nice touch, you should not devote a whole paragraph to it without touching on the academic and social aspect of development that the university offers. The slight editing of that paragraph should help you develop your content into a paragraph that will better serve the essay you have written.