cao1km
Apr 12, 2019
Graduate / Personal Statement for Medical School - My Scribing Experience [2]
Hello,
I've read your writing and I find it quite interesting. You have mentioned some anecdotes to show how you could observe the surrounding environment and people around you and how it has helped you establish and deepen your interest in this studying field. However, I have some wonders why reading:
Should you mention more about yourself, some more information about your background and show how you fit into this curriculum?
Is that the good way to write the opening of your statement? I feel that your opening story is quite far away from your problem?
And I think in your conclusion, you should give reasons why medical knowledge and career is good choice to help these people?
Hello,
I've read your writing and I find it quite interesting. You have mentioned some anecdotes to show how you could observe the surrounding environment and people around you and how it has helped you establish and deepen your interest in this studying field. However, I have some wonders why reading:
Should you mention more about yourself, some more information about your background and show how you fit into this curriculum?
Is that the good way to write the opening of your statement? I feel that your opening story is quite far away from your problem?
And I think in your conclusion, you should give reasons why medical knowledge and career is good choice to help these people?