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Grammar and sentence structure check needed for my economics report! [3]
Good evening :)
I have edited one paragraph from your essay fully, and included some general comments in regards to the rest of it:
"When the unemployment rate goes down, it increases workers' demand for higher wages.š As compared to the theories of Robert Gordon, Karl Marx, and Michael Kalecki, all agreed that although NAIRU changes over time, but capitalists purposely avoid full employment because it would weaken profits.š Friedman's view, on the other hand,
wasIs this a view he still holds, or has it changed? If it is one he still holds, this should be "is." that mass unemployment results when workers demand wages more than their productivity.š After understanding the class conflict, some important issues can be seen clearly. For instance, workers' demand of increasing wages does not cause inflation directly because power is in the hands of the "capitalists
, " not the workers. š In contrast, inflation occurs when capitalists fulfill their workers' demand
s for higher wages by increasing the prices on the goods and services.š Pollin said that the worker's well-being
cannot be determined by the full employment.š From the 1990's workers could not increase in their wages
; therefore, the United States needs a well-developed policy to maintain full employment and living wage levels while controlling the inflation.š"
In regards to punctuation, make sure that you are including your punctuation inside your quotation marks. For instance, "Unemployment and Inflation", should have the comma inside the last quotation mark.
Watch your use of commas; for instance, "...workers such as,..." shouldn't have a comma after "as."
Your citations look great, as does your works cited page. Double check your required citation style's requirements for the works cited page; the entries should be alphabetized.
In regards to content, I am not very versed in this field of expertise, but it looks very well organized and well planned to me. Your overall organization is good, and your paragraph structures look great. You seem to answer all of the questions in the prompt, and have a good intro and conclusion. I suggest you have the piece looked over by a classmate or another person well versed in this field before you submit to double check the content.
Regards,
Gloria
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